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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mysterymin

i enjoy your stories more than the show ❤️

Aww thanks!
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: TheInkMistress

Really speechless! So well written, yara! Loved reading every bit of it! I really hope, you make this a TS, a three shot to give it a plausible ending! Loveeedddd ittttt! ❤️❤️


I’m glad you liked it! If you read the OSes, you will see that they are in a way continuation from where a previous one left off generally:)
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: NidhaA

Kudos on writing the apt reaction to physical violence - no woman would swoon on being caught so violently. After this display - Angad would need to grovel and attend 50 sessions of therapy before I deem him fit for a marital life with anyone really.

Well written ❤️

That jerk needs to do community service that too in Shimlapuri to get off his high horse and get some humility in himself.

I think the only show recently I’ve liked is BALH where ML Ram is such a darling that anyone would fall for and FL Priya is a strong principled character who even sends her dad to jail for harming Ram. If Ram was even an ounce of what they portrayed Angad as, Priya would have shred him to pieces!

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Thank you!
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: mirai07

Amazing 👏❤️ Hope we get more such pieces of write ups from you 🤞🤩


aww thank you darling! I love your writings as well! Currently working on a piece to get my angst out…I’m just tired of this brainless Rotlu we have as a ML…

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: lturlapati

enjoying your stories more than the series

aaw thanks! Hope you liked the others as well!
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: ukyeongforever

wowwwww this is so well written and executed than whatever was shown in og, and i am pretty sure from whatever will be shown here. enjoying reading your works so much

where have you disappeared my dear? You’ve been absent long! Come back!!!!
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShivaShumbo

Yaar... I know this will happen but please skip to the good parts. Make him suffer! Make him pay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

. I’m writing an OS where he marries his Seerat ji after annulment….isn’t that punishment enough for him? 😆 he is getting in my nerves, and his reactions are not of a normal person… any successful much sought after man who is jilted at the altar would not cry about one sided love… he’d come back with a vengeance!
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: averma4583

. I’m writing an OS where he marries his Seerat ji after annulment….isn’t that punishment enough for him? 😆 he is getting in my nerves, and his reactions are not of a normal person… any successful much sought after man who is jilted at the altar would not cry about one sided love… he’d come back with a vengeance!



Interested to read thru, pls do tag.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: averma4583

. I’m writing an OS where he marries his Seerat ji after annulment….isn’t that punishment enough for him? 😆 he is getting in my nerves, and his reactions are not of a normal person… any successful much sought after man who is jilted at the altar would not cry about one sided love… he’d come back with a vengeance!


Hi meri jaan, did you write it?

I usually don't like to see my leads with someone else but this is actually something I would look forward to.

Please do tag me.

And no, I am not back for good. I just came around because I was bored.

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