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Posted: 2 years ago

Amazing update Lizzy! I loved it! Especially the thappad's! Seerat deserves it and I am waiting for Garry's ruination as well. Not to mention Jasleen would realize that Angad won't be financing anything!

Update soon please. I am taking inspiration from your story!smiley42

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Posted: 2 years ago

Story is amazing realistic and organic would love to read more hope u upload fast cause curiosity is very high now

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Posted: 2 years ago

Kaleje ko thandak padi! Finally we have a depiction of family members who work with the situation they are dealt with in life by using their brains and class. Kaash, TV Angad was like this! I have been so disheartened by the past few episodes, what do I say!

Seerat got the right punishment and the Bawejas’ downhill has just started! How did she have the audacity to sell the jewelry? Kitni kamini hai aur bewakoof hai? If she was running away with someone who had no connection to the Brars, I get it. But she was going to land at the Brars! Of course they would ask for the khaandaani jewelry back! Manbir has an angel devarani, it’s their equation that maintains the peace in the house.
Seeing Taiyi and Ajeet’s anger was befitting. They are the calmest people, but that doesn’t mean they are stupid.


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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: mirai07

Amazing update Lizzy! I loved it! Especially the thappad's! Seerat deserves it and I am waiting for Garry's ruination as well. Not to mention Jasleen would realize that Angad won't be financing anything!

Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it. Hell yeah! I have always wanted lead characters to make sound decisions instead of being mahaan.

Update soon please.

I am working on them already. I will be occupied for next two days, so maybe Tuesday and Wednesday is the latest.

I am taking inspiration from your story!smiley42

Waaaaaaaah. This is the best thing that I read today. ❤️❤️❤️Honestly, I started writing this, because of you and averma4583. So, it means a lot when my story is able to give back what it earned!! smiley41I am eagerly waiting for your story's update. smiley36smiley36

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Posted: 2 years ago

Thanks for giving this story a chance. The next update is scheduled for Tuesday/Wednesday.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Agreed. TV is turning weird everyday I swear. Which is why I wrote what I actually wanted in the show. Ya toh pir itne black and white characters hi mat dikhao. Inki bewakoofi bhi bardasht nahi hoti.

Someone needs to put Bawejas' in line. [Seerat did not sell them, her sisters did. One good deed, which she got her free bad credit!] But yeah, she had ulterior motive to keep the goodies. Gurleen is nice person. She sees Manbir as the elder sister and yeah they maintain the peace together.

Seeing Taiyi and Ajeet’s anger was befitting - this is something I expected from the show. But wahan toh bas kya hi bolein. Unko zabardasti stupid dikhaya hai.

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Posted: 2 years ago


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Posted: 2 years ago

Hi this post is only for tagging those whom I could not tag in the update.


PS: do let me know if I missed someone and needs me to tag them in the upcoming updates. And if the tags are a bother, I will refrain from tagging you.

Edited by LizzynDarcy - 2 years ago
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Posted: 2 years ago

What a beautiful update dear, loved how Angad understood sahiba ❤️❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago

It is so refreshing to read something that actually makes sense. Here, the excerpt of Seerat’s convo with Angad during wedding shopping makes sense whyAngad went crazy for her. In the show, there was never a moment beteeen Angad and Seerat that could pass amicable. It either it was forced, or you’d see Seerat trying to escape it, I.e texting, phone calls, and even in person. Based on this, I can’t understand why Angad still harps on Seerat being innocent. Like how you showed, any successful rich guy after being jilted and understanding, comes back with a vengeance. Here we see Anagd doing that, which is pretty normal. We also see him trying to have a conversation instead of accusing, throwing taunts and arguing with Sahiba. In return when he sees Sahiba’s vulnerabilities, he softens a bit. Wished TV would show that as well.


on a fun note: if Keerat was made the bride, Veer would be heh,, why don’t I take your spot bro? 😂

Edited by averma4583 - 2 years ago

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