FF - SHATTERED - (Angad* Sahiba) - Aurhors note imp -9/4/23 - Page 14

Amazing update! Everything came out, nothing was left unsaid, no one was spared 👏👏👌👌

Jasleen being left all alone was the best punishment 👍👍👍

Seerat breaking out all her truths was impressive❤️

Sahiba still walked away with her self respect is awesome🥰🥰🥰

So before I say anything the most awesome part of this chapter was Sahiba even after acknowledging Manbeer’s apology, she didn’t behave like a Saint which they normally showed in ITV 👏👏

And regarding this chapter awe 🫢 I loved it so much! Positivity, truth, kindness are so important and good always wins against bad that’s what it was all about! We all live in a life where too many things are going wrong and negativity overshadows everything but you showed that world is still a better and beautiful with kind people!

There is no right or wrong but bad choices and people are not bad inherently but their choices are and that’s how you portray Gary and Kiara ! You were right about the Grey shades of people not black or white 💕 I truly feel that Gary and Kiara have some hope but Jasleen I am not sure 🤔

Beautiful chapter and wonderful writing 👌💕

OH MY GOD! I just love the way you have strategized the details and brought out the mysterious part so well. The revelations were extremely well planned and executed. I can totally understand the challenge of deciding what to focus on the most, especially when there are so many earth shattering revelations one after the other in the same moments. To give justice to each revelation and the reactions as well as keep the smooth flow to move to the next shocking revelation. Extremely well done! Couldn't have been better. Your fanfiction stole my heart to say the least! Well written. Now that so many waves of shock have hit the family, I am really looking forward to the way you let things settle down and how things move ahead. I am assuming that now that major revelations are out of the way (including the upcoming confrontation between Mongas) , the focus would be more on Angad's redemption and the journey to being a power couple. I am also looking forward to see how Garry's redemption might take place, considering the hints and maybe Seerat and Garry can restart as well. I wouldn't normally expect this but considering your writing and track till now, I am sure, you would be able to tie it up well.

Lastly, consider this as a demand from an avid fan, please upload this story on Wattpad, it makes it easier to follow up on the story updates. PLEASE!

Before I start typing again... I wrote a long a** review for your story and it all just went kaput because my damn phone acted due my damned actions, the whole page reloaded and it all went... now back to the review that I have vented 😵😭

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The emojis above explain my exact feelings about your story... I mean what did I just read... What did I... I'm still trying to comprehend! *Faints lightly* ☺️

I must say, this forum is a home to such talented story weavers, I am just blessed to be a part of it. You've truly poured your heart into this 🤌🏻🌟💪🏻

I read Shattered in one go until page 9 (if I'm recalling it correctly), Chapter 6... The very next day you'd asked me to. And I was kinda blown apart... I had began typing my response then and yet it couldn't reach you because I could not get to it... I believe, it had to reach you at the right time... So here it is.

I read the last three instalments in a go, yet again and you, woman are a great story teller. I loved how everything was so meticulously written... Everything made sense... Especially where Garry's truth came out and Jasleen's even more so. Where Garry and Kiara leave her alone was just chummeshwari! Not to forget the pauses and escalations in your story are just great. I must also point out Angad's emotional turmoil was so beautifully expressed... His dejection, remorse, anger and disgust with himself, his heartbreak... It was all on point. 'Kaanch tootne ki awaaz hoti hai, dil tootne ki nahi' has been so amazingly described, I'm falling short on finding words. 🤌🏻❤️‍🔥

It is great to read you, Mystical... I cannot wait for the next parts as you mentioned... It will be a treat to read as it will revolve more around SahAn now!

PS. I have recalled most of what I wrote before here, so I don't lose the essence of what I needed to express. I hope my love and warmth reaches you through my words for the wonderful story you are creating for us all to read.

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Originally posted by: Dwanstar

Omgggggg.........

I am shocked and speechless....

This is what is called confrontation the way you depicted each character and their underlying emotions is remarkable...for the first time i actually liked seerat's character and how she took stand for sahiba..

Sahiba's silence was a much needed this...

But if I am being honest it was Kiara today for me who took the whole show just to protect her brother she admitted her and her mother's wrong doings...

Hats off on the update. Can't wait for the next one

Yayieeee...thank you so very much ji for the wonderful feedback 🤗 I am so happy you enjoyed reading through the various moments in this chapter..yaar...😃

Also yes - will be updating soonn❤️

Originally posted by: anjali9996

What an update dear❤️❤️❤️ 👌👌

Seerat finally telling about the whole truth specially that the brar's liked sahiba and Angad realising that he indirectly liked sahiba only😊😊.

Felt bad for Kiara and Garry, no children deserve such a mother.

Loved , how manbeer realises that sahiba was never wrong❤️❤️👏👏

It was full on a package update buddy , throughly loved it 👍 😀

Thank you so very much jiiii🤗 so glad you enjoyed reading this Update yaaar😃

Originally posted by: Milalal27

I prefer yours then the toxic disgusting show. 🤢

every day I look further to read your marvelous brilliance and realistic chapter ❤️‍🔥🫶🏼

Don’t waste your talent do write different jodis stories.

Have y seen Beyhadh season 2 with fiercely Maya, I wished y could write about her plight & revenge & love.

🙏🏽💋 take care

Thank you so very much ji for your wonderful feedbackk😃 so happy to know you look forward to reading my updates 😃

On the latter bit - honestly yaar I have mostly only written on arshi as in arnav× khushi until now...various fictions and my own plots totally different from the show otherwise....this is the first time writing on angad × sahiba❤️

I haven't seen the behadh seasons actually yyaa..but thank you so much for this suggestion to write on diff jodi's...hopefully will explore it in the future😊

Thank you so much Nidhaa...so glad you enjoyed reading this Update ❤️

Also yes about the latter bit on sentence structuring - please know...no offense taken😃 I know what you mean...actually I end up posting the first drafts without editing most of the time...and whilst writing the first cut usually in the quest to get the flow and emotion spot on in my words..at times - the sentence structuring/ crisping takes a back seat...which is a spot where I do spot room for improvement as a writer surely...

Hopefully ..I am able to post edited posts soon rather than first drafts ..❤️

Thanks so much once again

Originally posted by: averma4583

Prachi, this was a tear-jerk update. I had to control my tears from coming out. A wonder update that hits all the points! I bet Horny Phuphar was annoyed knowing he had to shut up the media because of Garry’s instigation. He doesn’t want to do anything at all!! The ending leaves so many opportunities to explore… esp with Seerat!

Thank you so very much jiiiiii❤️ so glad you enjoyed reading this Update...thank you for your precious support....🤗

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Wonderful update

Love it

Cont soon

Thank you so very muchhhh 🤗