FF : Yeh Dooriyaan *SahAn + Veerat* (Updated 10/06) - Page 20

Originally posted by: sumaishu

Thanks dear for the fantastic update super 👌 👍 😍 🥰

Thanks! ❤️

Originally posted by: averma4583

I simply love how Angad uses his brains unlike the TV show! I also love Inder-Manveer. They are serving the purpose of elders guiding the way and bringing new members feel comfortable in the fold of family. This was a great update! Now how do we get you on the TMD writers’ payroll!

Thank you!❤️ I have full intention of showing simple scenes that gives of a loads of meaning! You're right. The scene of Manbeer-Gurleen spending some time with the girls was to showcase that they had no grudge towards them. They have made their peace with those two people of the Monga household.

As payroll, have any ideas? 🤣

Originally posted by: piyushi

Nice update but I was so looking forward to read about Sahiba's first interaction with B family at breakfast table. You totally skipped that. Can we please get some snippets of it in flashback?

also, waiting for Gary's band bajaa ceremony.

Thanks! ❤️

Breakfast scene? I didn't skip that. It's in the next part. Reception chapter is divided into two parts 😆.

Band bajaa ceremony is in the next to next update!🥳

Originally posted by: Sunshine_1701

This is amazing. I am hooked. More invested in this story then the show honestly 🤩❤

Thanks!! ❤️

Originally posted by: mysticltales111

Mirai....I caught up with all the chapters just now and I simply am in love with this storyyyyyyy❤️❤️ I simply adore how it's like so different from the show..super refreshing am.. loving the way you have changed manbeer's arc + her and inder's too!

And ofcourse the highlight - sahiba and angad - loving the way it is unfolding here for them😃

And like really did you have to stop at that last part cliffhanger yaar?? So looking forward to the next part alreadyyyyyy!

Wonderful workkk❤️🤗

Hey there Prachi!

I am glad you enjoyed this! Well, let me have my fun too you know? 😉😆

Love your story!

Can’t wait for the next part…

But i have one issue..i know punjabi is not your language..plz try to stick to proper hindi or english instead of the punjabi dialogues. I appreciate your effort but as a punjabi thats kind of unreadable coz at some parts ot doesn’t make sense?! I hope you don’t take it personal..but I’m just saying this as a reader..that it might be more enjoyable if you left out the punjabi parts and write those things in hindi.

you are an amazing writer!♥️

Well this chapter was so good! I wanna see what happens with gray next lol 🤣

Originally posted by: p2bajaj

Love your story!

Can’t wait for the next part…

But i have one issue..i know punjabi is not your language..plz try to stick to proper hindi or english instead of the punjabi dialogues. I appreciate your effort but as a punjabi thats kind of unreadable coz at some parts ot doesn’t make sense?! I hope you don’t take it personal..but I’m just saying this as a reader..that it might be more enjoyable if you left out the punjabi parts and write those things in hindi.

you are an amazing writer!♥️

BOLD- Same! Bro! SAME. It takes sometime to get it make sense but i just role with it!

Originally posted by: p2bajaj

Love your story!

Can’t wait for the next part…

But i have one issue..i know punjabi is not your language..plz try to stick to proper hindi or english instead of the punjabi dialogues. I appreciate your effort but as a punjabi thats kind of unreadable coz at some parts ot doesn’t make sense?! I hope you don’t take it personal..but I’m just saying this as a reader..that it might be more enjoyable if you left out the punjabi parts and write those things in hindi.

you are an amazing writer!♥️

Thank you. 💕 I apologise for the problem caused. I thought it was readable at least. I will keep in mind from the next update.

I apologise to you for the troubles caused. It was quiet unintentional 🥺🥺