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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sunshining

Suvika💕💕💕💕💕💕. I am beyond satisfied.

actually feel complete like Abhira. What a beautiful and an amazing end to the forever walla passionate yet so pure type love story that we wanted for Abhira. It could not have been any better even if the original writers had written this.

So many beautiful parts. First part, Abhi and papa birla conversation, that relief and elation, pure joy on both sides. Abhi hugging Abhir for the first time as his papa, Akshu's almost urging him to recognise his mini version, wow perfect.


Part 2, the bashing Arohi and goenkas deserved and manajri getting what she deserved and that last sentence before Akshu came in, Abhira milan. I had to pinch myself to make sure I was not dreaming. I pretty much visualised the entire part 5. It was like I was on a roller coaster but never came down from the top. I am still floating.

Can not thank you enough for this 5 part SS. You are so talented yet so simple to accept my humble request and invest so much time and effort to make us feel so happy and actually realise we werent stupid to madly fall in love with Abhira, they were worth our love, it is just makers who started hating us.

Love you loads Suvika. Lots and lots of luck. I hope you keep reaching new heights as an author, you have certainly gained me as a forever fan and I am not kidding. I will try and resume Reunion this weekend.

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Yaar mereko bhi tag kardiya karo yaar itne ache messages me. I miss out 😒 shamelessly asking for friendship👍🏼
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Posted: 3 years ago

I wish DKP hired a talented writer like you. The pace was fantastic. The 🔥🔥fantastic and suttle I want a epilogue with Abhir and AbhiRa plssssssssss

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: ammygurl

Yaar mereko bhi tag kardiya karo yaar itne ache messages me. I miss out 😒 shamelessly asking for friendship👍🏼

Absolutely Ammy💕💕💕. And please no need to feel shameless🤗🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: slan

@bold: Yippeee!!!!! But have to wait till Monday is it?😒


Yes. 😆


@red: Well the whole SS is favorite yaa!! But if have to pick top three then...

1. In the first part Akshara's disbeleif on seeing Abhi in that unsatble state and moving back! I could soooo imagine that scene and pranali's expressions!

2. Ofcourse, the final ultimantum by Abhi to Manjri regarding not speaking againt Akshu again.

3. Abhi calling Harshavardan first abhir truth, that was so realistic and so so emotional. (Hope makers get ssome brains but I have no hopes or expectations from them anymore.)

4. When Abhi gave "Junior Sharma" Tshirt to Abhir even after knowing he is his, my heart broke a little for Abhi..

That's why I had "Junior" also on the t-shirt. In a way he gave something that is connected to him too.


5. Abhi telling Sharmaji has more rights on Abhir and the hwile emotional anger outburst on Gorillas! Much needed and fulfiling !

Seeeeeee, I told you whole SS in fav! If I went on listing my fav scenes I am sure I will pen down the summary of whole SS in such points!😆


Thank you so much for sharing, Sandra. 🤗🤗


And......


I hope you are coming up with another SS on the current track... Pleaseeee yaaar, we cant bear the current torture on yrkkh, your SS is solace

I genuinely think the current track can't be revived in any way. They have taken it way too far with the engagement and Mrs Sharma Mr Sharma equation. For me, in the show, even if they do bring Abhira together, it would be a patchwork. So you're on your own there. I'm out 😆


Thank You much for the masterpiece!!

Waiting for Epilouge!❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sunshining

Suvika💕💕💕💕💕💕. I am beyond satisfied.

actually feel complete like Abhira. What a beautiful and an amazing end to the forever walla passionate yet so pure type love story that we wanted for Abhira. It could not have been any better even if the original writers had written this.

So many beautiful parts. First part, Abhi and papa birla conversation, that relief and elation, pure joy on both sides. Abhi hugging Abhir for the first time as his papa, Akshu's almost urging him to recognise his mini version, wow perfect.

Part 2, the bashing Arohi and goenkas deserved and manajri getting what she deserved and that last sentence before Akshu came in, Abhira milan. I had to pinch myself to make sure I was not dreaming. I pretty much visualised the entire part 5. It was like I was on a roller coaster but never came down from the top. I am still floating.

Very very glad that this part elevated your mood a little. Morning when I read your posts in the epi discussion thread, you sounded a combination of heartbroken and furious. Hope you are having a relaxing weekend. 🤗


Can not thank you enough for this 5 part SS. You are so talented yet so simple to accept my humble request and invest so much time and effort to make us feel so happy and actually realise we werent stupid to madly fall in love with Abhira, they were worth our love, it is just makers who started hating us.

Don't say that. No need to thank me at all. I thoroughly enjoyed and what are friends for, if you don't have the freedom to ask them for something? ❤️


Love you loads Suvika. Lots and lots of luck. I hope you keep reaching new heights as an author, you have certainly gained me as a forever fan and I am not kidding. I will try and resume Reunion this weekend.

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗


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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: India_TV

suvika, koi story likhi hai?


OOPS....sorry...😂 abhi dekha to usi page per hun...

wow badi talented ho aap, will read ❤️


Nisha, thanks for tagging❤️


Thank you Bharati. Do let me know how you like it. 😃❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Matlab you won't write anything more on abhira??? Please don't do this to us!!! 🥺

Have you written anything else on abhira here??? I so badly want to read those!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Suvika.


Yup. Epilogue is typed up and ready. Will post on Monday. Want everyone to finish reading this one first. It's pretty long and time consuming 😆

Thank you Sandra. Glad you enjoyed it.


Can you share your favourite scene in the whole SS?? Or maybe top 3??

I'm not looking for compliments. I just would love to know a little bit more about my readers tastes that's all. 🤗


while I loved every single part.. my all time fav was

1. akshu’s breakdown when harshu gave the frame to her
2. Abhi’s realization

3. Abhi’s outburst and ak coming and taking him out of hell

4. Then falling in love again

5. Her asking the famous why’s

6. Bond between abhi and Harshu and also abhi and Abhir

7. Askhu is a lawyer and she started to sing again

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: ammygurl

A review, huh?

Reading this constantly since yesterday and thinking about this… thinking about the content that I signed up for, is better written by a fan than the actual writers, a fan who ameliorated the essence of Abhira, understood them so perfectly that she was able to enhance it with her words… not enough for you?


Yes it is. More than enough, actually. But for me, more feedback (be it positive or negative = more motivation) . That's why I asked. ❤️


So, let me rephrase this then. I will read everything that you’ve written. It is haunting. It is maddening that we are not getting the Abhira content on screen but so gratifying that we are getting it here. I was so excited for this yesterday that I forgot that the real episode synopsis was also waiting for us. When I was tagged in 25 March synopsis review, I thought… acha haan ye bhi to hai! Because I was refreshing IF constantly to see if you’ve updated.


😍😍🥰🥰🤗🤗💕💕😘😘


Anyhoo, you didn’t disappoint. Your writing is fluid, lucid and very visual. The heat scenes☺️ Let’s just say I knew what was happening☺️ better than Piya Bawri, honestly. That was just HC and his abs. This was Abhira. 😆


🤣🤣🤣🤣 I don't hold back when I write my novels but here... well... let's just say I wrote it and then went back to edit and gloss over some words and phrases. 😉


I was a little miffed that the heat scene came when Abhi was drunk. But after a LOTTT of thinking, I realized that drunk Abhi would be the most vulnerable one, drunkenness= true self. So okay. I got it. And then I was happy again.


Yes. Wanted his guard to be down warna this guy won't cross the line in the current set of circumstances. You got that absolutely right


My favourite scene was the bafflement in the very beginning. It was so true of Abhi to lose his mind in face of extreme happiness/sadness. He wasn’t replying to Harshvardhan’s questions but in his own mind, marveling about Abhir. That is Abhi for you. The fact that he involuntarily realized what he would have put Harshu through, with his coldness.. aah! Beauty!

The best part!? Not bothering to reply to Manjari for anything! If that could have gone a little longer… I would DIED a happy person😆


Haina?? After posting, even I felt that way. Like she got off easy. 😖😡🤬


Him standing up for Akshu. Finally. For not pressuring her/coaxing the truth out of her. For asking about Abhir as a child. I could so imagine the child trying to flip.

That scene where Abhir asks for Rudraksh. I have a feeling that Abhi would give the real one to him during his surgery regardless. In the show. What a move that would be! Surrendering his god and faith to his child. Passing on his soul charm to his child. Well! It was so nicely done.


Is he even wearing it now in the show?? Haven't watched the recent episodes so no idea. Or maybe all that hair took away my attention when I did watch and I didn't notice 🤣🤣🤣


The song that you chose for Akshu to begin singing again was so apt it legit brought tears to my eyes. Rhe act of soul being poured into Abhi again😭 Waah kya shabd hain!


One of my fav songs. After writing, it's music for me. The reason this show drew me initially - HC and Akshara being the music therapist.


My absolute favourite one though!? When he is drunk and puts his head BESIDE her lap. In his drunkenness, Abhi doesn’t forget his place. Because that’s progress. That is real progress. Not forgetting who you are, in your worst. Something that white day didn’t dignify the audience’s minds with. Thank you for that. That was my favourite part.


Sadhotgirl Hug GIF - Sadhotgirl Hug Friend GIFsA big big hug to you, Ammy, for noticing that small detail and getting the reason I wrote it bang on


Anymore and I would lose my mind. So putting it out here. My feelings (all real and genuine. 100% unadulterated. Without any bias of my friendship with you. You as a writer, rock! You as a friend, are awesome.

You as a reader, rock! Thank you for all your support and encouragement. And hounding me for the updates. You as a friend, are fantastic. Bhaad mein jaaye show but I found great friends here in this forum


So yes. That’s my review. I’m sure my friends would agree.

Okay bye.

Ammy/Ananya (P.S I forgot to tag Suvika lol. PPS I said favourite a lot of minds. Don’t mind me. I am like Abhi in the first scene hehe)

Doesn't matter even if you don't tag me. I read all the posts in my thread. So don't worry about it 🤣🤣


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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikki_love

I wish DKP hired a talented writer like you. The pace was fantastic. The 🔥🔥fantastic and suttle I want a epilogue with Abhir and AbhiRa plssssssssss


Thank you Nikki. ❤️

Epilogue on Monday 😃

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