So guys here are some of my preliminary thoughts. I have read all your comments everyone has said it all from A to Z.
I won't mention the disgusting scene in the promo and the ring. Because that hasn't happened yet let's judge the now.
I think it is not Meerab's character sketch that has gone wrong, it is actually Murtasim's character that is going off the rails. So I question is this really a pro Murtasim script, I shouted this before he is the crown jewel, you can't mess with him it will derail the whole show. Do I think Meerab revealing about the contract was wrong to Rohail, Yes, but do I think she is capable of making such a mistake. YES.
The character Murtasim they have built so far for 20 plus episodes when was he ever Naive. So what part of Murtasim taking Haya with him doesn't scream NAIVE. Twice now in this show that when Murtasim needed to talk to his wife he can't use the bloody phone, after the accident and now. He has a phone she has a phone but miraculously they can't connect.
Murtasim in the panchayat scene was weak too. Flashback to the first panchayat scene, how powerful he looked. In this scene he looked like an older brother trying to reprimand his wayward younger brother. The first intro Murtasim scene we got is not the character we got today. So they made Murtasim look like a fool in personal life and weak in his professional life.
In any story plot has to move from Point A to Point B. In a well written script this journey will be logical, today it was not. That is the whole point of this pregnancy comedy, they need to set it up to embarrass the couple publicly. Now is it believable for the Meerab we know to not just reveal outright that she is not pregnant, why was she waiting for Murtasim, what will he say that she can't herself say and when did she ever need him to speak for herself. What was she panicked about? The contract doesn't have anything to do with pregnancy, you can be sexually active and not get pregnant. Why does ITV and PTV make a mockery of pregnancy.
I could say more I am tired
Edited by Gundamwing - 3 years ago