SaHan OS Thread - The Renter (pg 1) and The Impersonator (pg 5) - Page 4

This is for tags only.

Thank you for the tag. The take on Manbeer and her back story is awesome!!! Loved her questioning her own behavior and her and Angad’s conversation. 💕💕💕

Thanks for tagging me 😊

Loved the story ❤️

Thankyou for the tag🤗

It's a beautiful piece ❤️

People in real life are actually this layered , their past held the reasons for making them what they are today and you beautifully portrayed it .

Although I doubt ITV creatives to even have such idea😆 but one can hope 😆

Thanks for the tag. Loving it so far❤

Loved the update.It was awesome.Thanks for the tag.

This was amazing ⭐️ I love your writing style and the character sketch you put in. ⭐️

Thank you for the tag 😊 And excited to read the next part 😳

Woah! 🤪

First thing first, I am on cloud 9 being tagged first on your post (call it a silly human feeling, but I am churan-chatni kinda person and well, small things/actions really do matter to me 😳)

As for the story, you've woven magick in your words yet again! From Renter to Impersonator, there is a huge shift and yet, it all connects! The opening line with Manbeer and her story was like a Deja Vu for me, because believe me when I write this, I had been thinking... what if one day Aakal or perhaps, her own MIL, reminds Manbeer of her horrid past, or her social status before marriage and here you just proved that I am not the only one thinking on those lines! 🤗

Not only I loved the conversation between the mother-son duo, but also how everything was expressed so beautifully. I am looking forward to more instalments to this story! Even if you decide to keep it short and maybe write only a few chapters more, you will find me cheering for you from here! I just want you to continue building this story and keep writing more! ❤️

Brilliant story, amazing twist and a beautiful shift on the tonality of your writing from chapter 1 to this, without making it evident!. The flow is just super!👏

Originally posted by: kalavathi5

Thank you for the tag. The take on Manbeer and her back story is awesome!!! Loved her questioning her own behavior and her and Angad’s conversation. 💕💕💕