Bepanah Ishq...Limitless love...VaNi,Dev Nalini,Ranveer-Ruhi(KK-Jenni) - Page 9

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 7


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Part 7

Riveting update.... pleasantly written

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Jay is just a puppet in the hands of Balram. He can pull his strings any time.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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There is a bit of suspicion on Nalini and Dev for the murder.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Who is giving Ranveer those tablets? And why?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Ranveer trusted his uncle and aunt but they betrayed him.

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Revathi being the killer comes as a surprise. When did she find out?

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Awesome update I loved it. Please continue soon dear.

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Thank u very muchSalley,taahir,khwaishfan, coderlady,glitter_goldie, MrsNgozo




Bepanah Ishq...Limitless love...Part 8

Ranbir:But according to the post mortem report,before you reached home only the murder happened.That makes sure that he was not murdered by you.

Nalini was relieved.

Prachi:But we realized who the killer is.It's you Revathiji.

Revathi and Nalini were shocked.

Nalini:What are you saying?Mom was out of station.

Prachi:But she had landed up here before the murder happened.

Prachi showed the flight ticket.Nalini was shocked while Revathi was nervous.

Ranbir:You hid the fact that you reached back early.Because you wanted to kill Rakesh and vanish.So that no one will guess that you killed him.Because according to others you were out of station.Right?

Prachi:Yes...you only killed Rakesh.

Revathi:What are you saying?You are misunderstanding me.

Prachi showed her the gun and said:Don't try to hide the truth anymore.Just admit it Revathiji.

Revathi burst out.

Revathi:Yes..I planned to kill Rakesh.Because he was a cheap person who was troubling my daughter in my absence.He was a wolf in lamb's skin.

Ranbir-Prachi were shocked.Nalini was shocked as Revathi knew about Rakesh.

Nalini:Mom...you knew it?

Revathi caressed her face tearfully and said:Yes...I knew it.You suffered a lot silently.Sorry beta..because of me only you suffered this much.If I had not married Rakesh,you would not have suffered.

Nalini shed tears:No mom.You are not at fault.You married him with a good intention.You did'nt know that he will turn out to be a beast.

Dev:Nalini is right aunty.But how did you know the truth?

Nalini:Yes.How did you know it mom?

Revathi:I got an anonymous letter which stated that Rakesh is troubling you and he only killed your father by causing his accident.

Ranbir:Being a successful business woman you just believed an anonymous letter like that?

Revathi:No.I started observing Rakesh and Nalini secretly and realized that it was true.My blood boiled and I decided to kill him secretly.

Flash back...

Revathi went near Rakesh.He was stunned.

Rakesh:How come you are here?You had gone for the wedding.Right?

Revathi:Why do you look disappointed seeing me?

Rakesh:Nothing like that Revathi.

Revathi:I know that you are not happy to see me.Because you were planning to molest Nalini in my absence.

Rakesh was shocked.

Rakesh:What are you saying Revathi?Who told you these lies?Nalini?

Revathi:Poor Nalini did not tell me anything due to fear.But I found it.You even killed my Sohan.Right?

Rakesh:Yes.I did it and I will do whatever I want.What will you do?

Revathi:I will do allow you to do anything.You hurt my daughter very much.I will not leave you for that.I cannot forgive you for killing my Sohan also.

Suddenly Revathi look a gun at pointed it at him:I will kill you.

Rakesh was stunned.

But suddenly someone else shot him from behind and he fell down dead.Revathi was shocked.



Present....

Revathi:I wanted to kill Rakesh.But I did not kill him.Someone else killed him.

All were shocked.

Ranbir:You are lying to hide your crime.

Prachi:You only killed him.

Revathi:I swear by my daughter.Someone else only killed him.But I don't know who killed him.

Ranbir-Prachi were confused.

Nalini:I trust you mom.

Dev:I also trust you aunty.

Ranbir:Can you give us the letter which you received.

Revathi:Yes.

Revathi brought the anonymous letter and gave it to Ranbir and Prachi.

Ranveer confronted his uncle Ankush and aunt Yamini.

Ranveer:You took me to a doctor and he prescribed vitamin tablets.Right?

Ankush:Yes.Why are you asking that now?

Ranveer:Because I came to know that the doctor was currupt and it was a dangerous drug which I was being fed daily.

They were shocked.

Yamini:What nonsense are you saying?

Ranveer:It's true.Ruhi who works in my office had a doubt and she told me about it.But as a fool since I blindly trusted you both I did not believe it.But I got the tablet tested and I realized that it was a drug which was a slow poison.I confronted the doctor and got to know the truth.

Ankush and Yamini were shocked.

Ranveer:Don't hide the truth anymore.Now without hiding anything say the truth.Why did you do this to me?

Ankush:Because of you our son Rehaan was not getting any recognition.We thought after your parent's death we will get everything.But your parents had written all the properties in your name.So we had to look after you.

Yamini:You took over the business and office.Oyr son Rehaan couldn't shine there also.So he left to some other state and is working under someone else for law salary.We thought if you leave only our son can take over your position.So we gave you a medicine to cause head ache.Then we took you to the doctor who danced to our tunes.As we wished he prescribed drugs as medicines.

Ankush:The tablets which were prescribed were slow poison.It will make a person insane slowly.Because of that only you were having angry issues.Recently you started getting voolent.We were happy.We were waiting for you to be completely mad so that you could be admitted in a mental asylum and thus our son would be able to take over your position.

Ranveer was shocked and shattered.

Ranveer:Even after knowing the truth of the medicine I was hoping to hear from you that you both were not behind it.But i am shocked that you both are so greedy that even when I lost my parents instead of become sad you both were expecting to get their wealth.I loved and respected both of you.But you both were giving me slow poison.I regret respecting you both.I wish you both had killed me directly.

Ranveer walked out in frustration.

Ankush and Yamini were irritated.

Yamini:That Ruhi spoiled our plan.Now what will we do?

Ankush was frustrated.




Ranveer met Ruhi.

Ruhi:Did you get the test result?

Ranveer:Yes.I got the result.You were right Ruhi.It was a dangerous drug.

Ruhi was relieved that he got to know the truth.

Ranveer's became wet.

Ranveer:And my uncle and aunty who gave me the tablet admitted that they purposefully fed me those tablets to make me mad so that their son can take over my position.

Ruhi was shocked.

Ruhi thought:I doubted his uncle and aunty.But I never expected that it will turn out to be true do fast.

Ranveer burst into tears.

Ranveer:Why me Ruhi?Why this happened with me?First I lost my parents and then my chachu and chachi whom I considered as my own became outsiders in a second.I have become all alone Ruhi.

Ruhi felt sad seeing his tears.Unknowingly her eyes got filled up with tears.

(Please ignore the background)

She cupped his face and said emotionally:Please don't think like that Ranveer Sir.You are not alone.I am with you.Right?

Ranveer looked at her in disbelief.

Slowly he smiled through tears in his eyes.

Jitni dafa dekhun tumhe
Dhadke zoron se
Aisa toh kabhi hota nahi
Milke ghairon se [x2]

They shared an emotional eye lock.

Door jaana nahi
Tumko hai kasam
Khudse zyada tumhe
Chaahatein hain sanam

Door jaana nahi
Mujhse aye sanam
Khudse zyada tumhe
Chaahatein hain sanam
(Parmanu: The Story Of Pokhran).

Ruhi thought:What did I tell now?How these words came out of my mouth like that?

Ruhi:I mean...you are my Boss.So I will be always grateful to you.I will always support you.

Ranveer nodded.

Ruhi:Don't think about the people who cheated you without valuing relationships.Just ignore them.They deserve punishment.

Ranveer's heart was pricked.

Ranveer:Punishment?How can I punish my own chachu and chachi?

Ruhi:I understand your sentiments.But they are dangerous people who can go to any extent for power.They tried to harm you.Since you came to know about their truth they will not sit simply.They might plan something dangerous again.So you need to put an end to it.

Ranveer was confused.

Ruhi:And sir...please don't take those tablets anymore though you are addicted to it.

Ranveer:Yes.Ruhi...thank you for everything.Because of you I am actually saved.

Ruhi smiled.

Ranveer:I have always been rude to you. Then how could you be so nice to me?

Ruhi:I don't know.Maybe because I used to find your angry man gestures very funny.

Suddenly Ruhi realized what she said.

She thought:Oh my God!Now Sir will get angry with me for mocking him.

But Ranveer smiled.Ruhi smiled in surprise.



At home,Ruhi remembered telling Ranveer that he is not alone and she will be always there with him.

Ruhi blushed unknowingly.

Ruhi:Maybe without my own knowledge I was enjoying Ranveer sir's presence in my life and that's why I told him that I will be always with him.But how did I like my kadoos boss?

Ranveer smiled thinking of Ruhi telling him that she is with him always and she used to find his angry expressions funny.

Ranveer went to the kitchen.He took a vegetable.

Ranveer:I myself will cook.What if chachi gives me poisoned food?

Suddenly she saw Ruhi there.

Ruhi:Going to cook?

Seeing her he got surprised and fell down.

Ruhi started laughing.

Ruhi:You fell down again?

Ranveer felt embarrassed and knelt down.

Ranveer:No way.I was just kneeling down.

Ruhi:You are kneeling down as if you are going to propose me.Are you going to propose me?

Ranveer realized that it looked like a proposing posture.

Ranveer:Are you fine with vegetable proposal?

(Thank you Rehana Siraj for this cute edit).

They both laughed.

Suddenly Ranveer realized that he was imagining it.He blushed.



Dev was really tensed about the case investigation of Rakesh's death.

Dev thought:Who could be the killer?

Preesha came.

Preesha:Dev,I have been noticing that you are not in this world now.Is something bothering you?

Dev lowered his head and lied:Nothing like that mom.

Preesha:I am your mother.Don't hide anything from me.

Dev became upset.

Dev:Nalini is upset as her dad passed away.Seeing her sad,I also feel sad.

Preesha caressed his head and said:I can understand.But it's in God's hands.We can't change the fate.You pray that Nalini recovers from this phase soon.

Dev nodded.




The Police station....

Ranbir:Prachi..do you think that Revathiji is saying the truth?

Prachi:May be or it may not be.Whatever we will pretend as if we believed her completely until we find out the truth.

Ranbir:Yes.We will have to find out who sent the letter to Revathiji.

Prachi:Yes.What if the letter sender is the one who shot Rakeshji?

Ranbir:What if the letter sender want to frame Revathiji in Rakesh's murder?

Prachi:That's also a possibility.



After some days....

Ranbir:I am glad that we could find out who sent the letter.

Prachi:Yes.I am also happy.Let us catch that person fast.

Ranbir:Yes.



Jay met Alia.

Jay:Alia..let us break up.

Alia was shocked:Jai?Are you serious?Even when your dad was against us,you were adamant about marrying me.Then why now?

Jay:Because I should not be selfish anymore.Love is not enough for a happy married.Family atmosphere also matters.You will not be safe in my family.My dad is a criminal politician who will even kill a person.I can't leave you in danger Alia.

Alia looked at him tearfully.

Jay:I am a spineless son who is scared of the father.I don't have the guts to go against my cruel dad and protect you.So you deserve a better person Alia.

(Thanks for editing this pic Salley).

Alia:But Jay...

Jay said emotionally cupping her face:We need to be practical Alia.So a break up is better.

Jay walked away tearfully.Tears rolled down her cheeks.




Alia went to Khurana house and entered Saransh's room.She embraced him from behind tearfully.Saransh was stunned.

He looked at her.

Saransh:What happened Alia?

Alia:My relationship with Jay is over.

Saransh was shocked:What?

Alia told him how Jay broke up with her.

Saransh:Don't worry Alia.I will talk to Jay.

Alia:No need of that Saransh.You did a lot for us.That's enough.Maybe Jay and I were not meant for each other.Our relationship will not give peace of mind to us and our families.So break up is better.

Saransh looked at her emotionally.

Alia said tearfully:I may have lost love because I did not see your love even though you loved Mr selflessly.

Saransh looked at her painfully.

Saransh:Don't think like that Alia . What you think is absolutely stupid.You don't need to be guilty about nor loving me.Because we cannot love anyone like that easily.

Alia:Saransh...I want to stay besides you for more time.I will get relief from this pain if you are near me.

Saransh cupped her face in his hands and said:Sure Alia.You be with me as much as you want.

Alia smiled slightly.

Ranbir and Prachi reached a house and looked at a person.

Ranbir:You only sent that letter to Revathi.You only killed Rakesh.Right?

That person was shocked.


Edited by jasminerahul - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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So happy that Revati knew about that cheapster. My edit suitsperfectly to this scene, thnx for using this one too. Shocked that she receivedan anonymous letter, I think Dev is the one who did so, or maybe someone else, sameage girl like Nalini who was abused by Rakesh, just a guess. But glad to see thatRevati didn’t kill him, someone else did, but shocking at the same time. Ankushand Yamini are ridiculous, for their own son, they tried destroying someone else’sson who was their family only. Hope this ridiculous duo of Ankush and Yamini don’ttarget Ruhi now. When Ruhi said, I am with you, it was emotional. Oh this song “JitniDafa” reminds me of PreeJun, during the flight episodes, it was used on them numeroustimes. Hahhah, Ruhi found Ranveer’s angry reactions funny. RuVeer thinking of eachother was cute. Ranveer’s imagination was funny. Why is Dev lying about Nalini beingsad? She isn’t sad, I don’t think so. Prachi’s dialogue has a mistake, Revati wasn’tshot, Rakesh got shot. Wondering who the killer is. Sad that Jay broke up with Alia.You should have blurred the naag naagin tongues of Jay and Alia, they look funny.Embrace was cute. Saransh Alia scene was cute. Perfect pics, waiting for next.

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