Inkaarverse : Black Coffee without sugar, a Rakhi and Kinjal story - Page 2

Loved it. Kinjal was one of the most promising and sensible characters and ended up becoming a padhi likhi Anupamaa. Hope she gets a reality check on these lines sooner than later.

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I so much loved it. Want to see how baa will react to the maids and cooks. Please please please continue this...🥺🥺🥺

As always.. AWESOME 🥰

I might sound extremely greedy but pls keep writing them. The show literally boils my blood. These fanfictions are life pain relievers... Love them.

Aww... Why did it end😭

I want to see more. Please, please, please. It's teaching me a lot too❤️

I've been a kind of emotional fool. This chapter in particular made me think.

The part where Kinjal wonders whether Kavya was smart or selfish has been my inner thought many a time when I met someone similar.

It's working like therapy for me. Please, please, please don't end it now. Please continue.

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Originally posted by: Musketeer_95

As always.. AWESOME 🥰

I might sound extremely greedy but pls keep writing them. The show literally boils my blood. These fanfictions are life pain relievers... Love them.

Thank you dear. ☺

Originally posted by: CheekuKaBeej

Aww... Why did it end😭

I want to see more. Please, please, please. It's teaching me a lot too❤️

I've been a kind of emotional fool. This chapter in particular made me think.

The part where Kinjal wonders whether Kavya was smart or selfish has been my inner thought many a time when I met someone similar.

It's working like therapy for me. Please, please, please don't end it now. Please continue.

I've never requested anyone so much for a story. Pretty please 😳

Aww... Thank you dear. These stories work like an outlet for me, never thought they will be appriciated so much. I have some ideas in my mind, I will add a few more chapters.

Originally posted by: Loveforworld

Aww... Thank you dear. These stories work like an outlet for me, never thought they will be appriciated so much. I have some ideas in my mind, I will add a few more chapters.

Originally posted by: shush22

That's it? I want to read more of it. Please continue 🙏🥺

I so much loved it. Want to see how baa will react to the maids and cooks. Please please please continue this...🥺🥺🥺

Aww.... Ok baba.. I will add a few more chapters.

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On public demand, chapter 3.

" Kinjal, what is all this? " Leela asked from her jhoola. These days that swing looked more like a throne.

"I have called this family meeting Baa, because we all need to talk. " Kinjal replied patiently.

Everyone was gathered around, except for Thoshu. He has gone to a party. " I need to make contacts." He said. But everyone knew he won't make any meaningful connections there.

Kinjal cleared her throat and began her speech, " A lot has happened around the house. So we need to make some changes for everyone's well being." She looked around, glad to have everybody's attention.

" We are starting a new project at our firm. I will be working a bit longer and won't be able to devote a lot of time to the house. Baa and Bapuji are also getting older, plus with Pari now, household chores are getting a backseat. We need some additional hands to handle all this. "

Everyone was fully focused on her now. "What was she proposing? " Thought Vanraj.

" I have arranged a team of household helpers. They will be working in morning and evening shifts and will handle most of the things around the house. Baa, I know you get tired after cooking these days, so all you need to do is just sit and direct them, so that the work can be done efficiently. Don't worry about the payment. I have handled it. "...... Or mom has handled it. They didn't need to know.

Baa wasn't pleased, new people meant change, and she hated changes.

" Kinjal, we don't need servants. We are handling just fine. Cancel the service. "

"More like I have been handling it. " Kinjal thought bitterly. They saw a clean house, but no body cared about her aching body at the end of the day. She did a small calculation, she was working for 18 hours a day now. Even a daily labourer was allowed to work only 14 hours as per supreme court.

" Baa, we all go out of the house for work. You, Bapuji and Papa are alone all day. What if something happens and you need help? What if our phones are not reachable. It will be good to have some help. Plus they are a professional team. They will listen and answer only to you. "

Leela took the bait. The thought of ordering around a bunch of people from the comfort of her jhoola was very apealing. You could see the glee on her face.

Rest of them didn't care. Since the team wasn't a live in, they will finish their work and leave. So they will have privacy. They could focus on other stuff.

"Mission accomplished. " Kinjal patted herself on back. Her mother will brief the team about the family already, so they will be prepared to handle the Shah family.

And Kinjal was happy cause she could finally relax.

Next part was seperating her finances from the Shahs. She thanked God for her previous thoughtless actions. At least she won't have to worry about loans.

She will start doing all her transactions online and would keep just a little cash in house. She didn't trust toshu with anything.

She needs to shift her jewellery to a bank locker soon, otherwise she could lose them to Toshus shenanigans.

But first, she and Pari will shift to Anupamas old room in Shah house. She won't share her living space with that failure of a man again.

With this new clearity in mind, she went to sleep. She was going to take Pari to visit Rakhi the next day.

Her morning started pleasantly. She relished the hot breakfast served by the cooks, for first time in months, she took her time and enjoyed her food. Before, she used to eat while cooking at the kitchen platform, racing against the clock to reach her office on time.

Rest of the Shahs were oblivious to her joy though, too busy to pay attention to her. Leela was on her 2nd cup of chai, loving this newfound superiority over the servants. She fired orders after orders, while one of the maids massaged her shoulders. " This is the life, why was I so against it. " Leela thought.

Kinjal suppressed her laughter and stood up from her table. She needs to hurry.

Rakhi Dave was positively glowing. She held her granddaughter as if she was the most precious thing in the world, cooing at her.

Kinjal observed her mother. She remembered how Rakhi went all out with band baja when Kinjal announced her pregnancy. She wanted to kinjal to come stay with her, but kinjal refused. Later when she struggled with her pregnancy, Kinjal regretted her decision. The constant drama at the house didn't help either, but kinjal could not go back on her words. Her mom would have said, "see I told you so". Kinjal couldn't let her then fragile ego to get hurt.

She glanced around the room. Rakhi had converted a guest room for Pari. It was filled with everything a baby may need. Even a kitchen space to heat up milk was there, secured and baby proofed. She really thought about everything.

"Why didn't you bring her here during your business trip? I had cleared my schedule for Pari. " Rakhi asked. The plan had changed last minute and pari stayed home with shahs.

" Baa and others said they will take care of her." Kinjal told, ashamed.

" Yeah, and somehow they all ended up at Kapadia mansion because pari was sick. They didn't even take her to the doctor. "

Kinjal hung her head again. After she returned from her business trip and found out what was happening, she took pari to a pediatrician. Who knew that feeding infants honey was a bad idea and causing her stomach upset, leading to her incessant crying and vomiting episodes. She cursed leela in her mind. Baa aur unke outdated nuskhe.

But worst betrayal came from Anupama, who also didn't advocate for Pari and didn't take her to the doctor, instead relying on home remedies.

" Mummy has raised three kids... I thought she knew the best. "

Rakhi laughed quietly, carefull of the volume. She didn't want to wake pari.

" Yeah she raised three, and look how they turned out. At least mine isn't a badtameez Or a failure. She is still cleaning up her adult children's messes. "

That Kinjal couldn't argue against.