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Posted: 17 years ago
Part 10:

Atul looks at everyone and walks in with loads of attitude in him

Armaan goes

Come on Anjie!

Anjie goes okay, sadly and sings

Tum paas aye!

Yu muskuraye!

Sob sob!

Atul goes face to face to a teary Anjali and gives a very rude angry look and shows

Am I muskuraaing?

Anjali still continues

Tum ne na jaane kya

Sapne dikhaye

Sob sob!

Atul walks away to the serving bar

And the others are in a shock to see Atul behave so rudely to Anjali

Dil bebasi me chup ke rota hai

Kya karoo haaye

Kuch kuch hota hai!

Sob sob!

Armaan holds Riddhima's hand and this time he really feels for Anjali and goes

Kuch kuch Hota hai?

And asks Riddhima what to do

Rahul sings

Kuch Kuch Hota Hai to Muskaan and goes

Kuch kar!

Muskaan goes to Anjali

Abey,ye konsa rone wala gaa rahi ho Anjali tum?

Hame pata hai tumhe Kuch Kuch hota hai

Lekin is kuch kuch ko bohot kuch banana ke liye tumhe wo wala item karna hi hoga yaar

Riddhima goes

Haan di,Dikhado Atul ko apna wo wala roop!

Anjali wipes her tears

And gives an adamant look

Gets back all her lost bold attitude and gets charged up to lure her love

Atul on the other hand gets some food and sits on the table in the corner ignoring Anjali and her suicidal song

Anjali goes

Watch me! And

goes Atul! in a seductive voice

The others get shocked to see her change so quick from a sad to a hot Anjali

Atul looks at her and gets worried

Anjali sheds her waistcoat first and then loosens her shirts top button

Pulls Muskaan's scarf out of her hair

And walks to Atul singing

Yeh Mera dil yaar ka deewana

Deewana deewana

Pyaar ka parwana

Ata hai mujhko Pyaar me jal jana

Mushkil hai pyaare ,tera bachke jaana


The shocked crew look amazed with her dance and are happy for them

Yeh Mera dil yaar ka deewana!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Atul feels a weakening effect in his knees

He is totally seduced and becomes a naughty Shahrukh

Armaan goes Wow!

And to tease Riddhima ,he says

Kahi tumhara raat ka surprise aisa kuch to nahi?

Riddhima smiles and goes

Hmm, may be?

Rahul goes to Muskaan looking gorgeous in her curly let down hair

Anjali sach me Atul se kitna pyaar karti hai na?

Muskaan goes in usual bubbly way

Tum bhi kabhi roothogey na mujhse to mai bhi tumhe aise hi manaoongi

Thik hai?

Rahul goes

Phir to mai abhi se naraaz hoo tujhse!

Chal mana!

They both smile and hug sweetly and
think Atul and Anjali are sorted now

Armaan and Riddhima hold hands under the table too

Anjali finishes the song in style

Atul sits there with his eyes closed and just blown away by Anjali's beauty

Anjali thinks her mission was successful and now she's got her Atul back

Atul then has a disturbing thought

He thinks of continuing his anger drama somehow to really take Anjali to the limit

He loves this game and wants it to go on forever

He opens his eyes to see a little shy and a little embarrassed Anjali waiting to be praised on her performance

But Atul has different plans

The canteen goes silent and everybody awaits the forgiving scene

Then Atul says

Aise kyu dekh rahi ho mujhe? Again rudely

Pehle kabhi mujhe dekha nahi kya?

Aur ye sab karke tum sabit kya karna chahti ho?

Ke tum mujhse pyaar karti ho?

Aur ye tumhari koshish mujhe manane k thi?

Anjali is confused and feels as though she has no hope now

Atul then

Nahi Anjali,mai itni jaldi nahi maanney wala

Kaha tha na maine?

Anjali looks completely shattered with all her hopes washed away

The others are surprised with Atul's behaviour too

Armaan goes

Champ!

Bohot ho gaya yaar!

Riddhima goes

Plz Atul,di ko maaf kardo!

Atul winks at them and funny music plays again

They look at each other and think

He's now learnt the tricks of the trade and has become a true player

And they are stuck with a disappointed Anjali and a temporarily dominant Atul

Anjali just can't take her pain and embarrassment anymore and runs to the locker room

The four tell Atul off for being so rude

Atul goes

Tum logo ne hi to kaha tha yaar!

Ab mujhe maza aney laga hai ,mai is natak to aur agey leke jana chahta hoo

Isme tum sab ko meri madad karni chahiye guys

I love Anjali

Aur mujhe sirf ye jaanna hai ki wo bhi mujhse utna hi pyaar karti hai ya nahi?

Bas!

And thinks to himself

Saaalo,mujhe Anjali ke saamne phasa kar ab mujhse hi ye drama!

Mai apni Anjali ko bohot ache se jaanta hoo

Lekin mai tum sab ko bhi prove karke rahoonga ki wo bhi mujhse bohot pyaar karti hai aur mere liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai!

Sorry Anjali!

Mujhe to kuch kuch nahi

Itna sara bohot kuch hua lekin in zaalimo ke liye maine ye natak kiya

Armaan and Rahul go

Tu chahta kya hai ab,bataa na?

Atul goes

Arey!

Tum sab ko Anjali ki itni fikar kyu ho rahi hai?

Kal tak to meri side they na tum log?

Riddhima goes

Atul!

Ye sab drama tha

Hum chaaro is plan me they!

Muskaan goes ha yaar!

Humne to socha tha ki maza ayega Anjali ko tujhe manatey dekh

Lekin yaha to baat bohot serious ho gayi yaar

Atul goes

Come on guys

I was just joking
Mazaak tha

Jaise tum logo ne mujhse kiya waise

Armaan goes

Thik hai ,agar ye mazaak tha to aaj tujhe Anjali ke saath movie dekhne aur dinner par jaana hoga

Hum sab uske saamne pretend karengey ke hum bhi aa rahe hai

Lekin jaogey sirf tum dono hi!

Atul goes

Really?

Great idea

Konsi achi nayi film lagi hai?

Armaan goes

Atulanjali? Dekhega?

Atul goes wow Atulanjali?

Kya naam hai na,Atul and Anjali makes Atulanjali

Wow ,hum par film bhi ban gayi Anjali,
humari jodi kitni famous hai nai?
Aur dekhna ye film bhi ek dam superhit rahegi!

Konse show ki tickets hai Armaan?

Rahul goes

Raat ke Bara baje ki!

Atul goes

Lekin wo to bohot late ho jayega na yaar

Phir kal subah duty bhi to karni hai!

Koi baat nahi ,pehle dinner kar letey hai hum log

Phir film bhi dekh lengey

Riddhima and Muskaan get relieved that Atul is back to his funny self
And now they have to somehow send Anjali to the the cinema since plan one backfired

Riddhima says

Mai kuch bhi karke di ko cinema bhej doongi,

Muskaan goes

Mai aur Rahul bhi film dekhne jayengey yaar

Kyu Rahul?

Don't worry hum Anjali aur Atul se bohot door baithengey thik hai?

Rahul goes

Tujhse kisne kaha mai chaloonga tere sath?

Muskaan goes

Maine!

Chalogey na tum?

Bada mazaa ayega

Khoob masti karengey

Armaan and Rahul go

Masti? And their eyes pop out!


Hey all
Hope u all liked the update
Did it get a little serious somewhere along the middle?I thought it did
Its now become a plan on a plan and another plan and it might turn out to be a right mess in the end,but it will all be very romantic,funny and a full of masti evening for all 6 couples!
Sorry to have strectched it,but I just cudn't do any justice to the romantic evening if I am so sleepy now,so thought I'll leave it for tomorrow
Plz reply with your comments good or bad on this part
and sorry if u were disspointed in anyway
I'll be back with the missing romance soon
Take care
And love u all
Hina
Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Good Morning Di, this was such a nice part...I mean all your parts are very nice, but this had the ganging up thing, which was just so cute...the dailogues were toooooooo good....I hope Atul thoda aur attitude dekaye..its good to see Angie troubled in love for a change...Rahul & Muski too good too...its good to see Arman & Rahul bonding up...(masti sochti...) finally the Lady herself..Ridz...I must say she is a very good student, learning all secrets of trade from the one & only Arman SIR...too good...I am waiting for Angie to excute her plan but most importantly am waiting for the raat ka plan 😉 ...
but sadly I will read it only on Sunday...however if you are to update today nothing like it...but kehte hai na saber ka fhal mitta hota hai...so I will wait....thanks for giving my day a fantastic start...
take care
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Posted: 17 years ago
really a nice update thank for updating please continue it soon

Har baar dil se yeh paigaam aaye,
Jubaan kholu to tera he naam aaye,
Tum he kyon bhaye dil ko kya malum,
Jab nazroo ke saamne haseen tamaam aaye.
Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey Di!..In ur sleep u forgot to edit the topic😆😆

This was a cool,mindblowing part👏👏...I am loving AA these days 😳😉..it did get a little serious but u balanced well with Atul's funny one liners😆."Atulanjali"😆😆😆...& "Masti" also😆

I'll be specially waiting for the missing romance part😉😳

Love Kanu❤️

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Posted: 17 years ago
hinu meri jaan yaar kya baat hai aaj kal to bade bade naughty hoti jaa rahi ho hmmmmmmmmm bahut maza aya angie ne kitne minnete kiye bt atul attitude de raha as per armaan theory nd ar heeeeeeee kabhi nahi sudhrega nd gvng her sme advice gud goi nd atul abbe sale ..wow lvd tht dialogs of atul nd ar bcm so naughty heeeeeeeee raat ko omg yaar bt ridz bhi much kam nahi hai wow i realy enjoyd it yaar........................lvd it.........ab dekhte hai ridz ka surprise raat wala armaan to khushi mein jhum utha hmmmmmmmmmmmm..................
luv yachu
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: yachna

hinu meri jaan yaar kya baat hai aaj kal to bade bade naughty hoti jaa rahi ho hmmmmmmmmm bahut maza aya angie ne kitne minnete kiye bt atul attitude de raha as per armaan theory nd ar heeeeeeee kabhi nahi sudhrega nd gvng her sme advice gud goi nd atul abbe sale ..wow lvd tht dialogs of atul nd ar bcm so naughty heeeeeeeee raat ko omg yaar bt ridz bhi much kam nahi hai wow i realy enjoyd it yaar........................lvd it.........ab dekhte hai ridz ka surprise raat wala armaan to khushi mein jhum utha hmmmmmmmmmmmm..................
luv yachu

Hey Yachu,

I was wondering phir se khaa gayab ho gayi tum,chalo ab aa gayi,good

thanks yaar for liking the update,Ab to full on masti chal rahi hai Sanjeevani me,sab ek doosre ke against planning kar rahe hai,lets see result kya nikata hai

Thanks again

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Posted: 17 years ago
absulotely amazing di 👏
wat an update, enjoyed anjali's performance, kya zabraat tha 😉
aur ye atul ko kya hua? 😕 bechari anjali, hope they get back while on their date 😳 😳
the update was really cute at some points 😳 all the couples romancing hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm............ 😍
can't wait for the next part

to fhir plans pe plan banate rahiye aur hume deta rahiye sweet and romantic updates

love u heena 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: heenaz

absulotely amazing di 👏
wat an update, enjoyed anjali's performance, kya zabraat tha 😉 Madam hot Anjali
aur ye atul ko kya hua? 😕 bechari anjali, hope they get back while on their date 😳 😳 Of course they will,there's also a twist to the story here
the update was really cute at some points 😳 all the couples romancing hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm............ 😍
can't wait for the next part Aawww imagine that

to fhir plans pe plan banate rahiye aur hume deta rahiye sweet and romantic updates Zaroor!,jail me se bhi,tu bail karaney ayegi na lololol

love u heena Love u too sweety😛

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mehma24

btw this is d most colorful post i hv ever seen 😆😆😆Me too!!!

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