Dard bhari Daastan: ViDev Moment - Page 2

Happy wali likhi hai. Saathiya naam hein OS kaa. Yeh waali aaj ke episode ke Dev Sir ko pain mein dekhkar mujhe bahut painful lagi toh aise likhi maine. Thanks Shweta

Thanks a lot Sumaishu

we want to see this passionate love...Thanks for this piece of writing Revutty.

Thanks a lot banhi 😌

Originally posted by: Revutty

Happy wali likhi hai. Saathiya naam hein OS kaa. Yeh waali aaj ke episode ke Dev Sir ko pain mein dekhkar mujhe bahut painful lagi toh aise likhi maine. Thanks Shweta

han woh saathiya OS padha tha maine kal. acha tha woh bhi. 😳

Originally posted by: sumaishu

Very nice but painful. 🤝

Mjhe is videv moment pe ek song yaad aaya---

Dard dilon k kam ho jate

Main aur tum agr hum ho jate

Kitne haseen alam ho jate

Main Or tum agar hum ho jate

Thanks a lot Parud 😌 very apt lines.

Beautiful ❤️❤️

U Beautifully presented his pain.. ❤️❤️😭

The pain he is going through is hardest thing to see. 😒😞😞

I hope bs ye jaldi khtm ho sb.

My heart break into million of pieces whenever i see him in pain.. 😭😭

Why he is so perfect itna kuch kha aj usko is vimla ne.. jis me hmre hero ki koi galti hi ni ha.. but still out of respect for Vidhi's family he stays quite.. 😞😞

He doesn't deserve all this.. 😔😔

Thank you so much yaar dev ki side dikhane k liye... Uska pain... Kaash ye scene show mein bhi aa jaye yaar

Originally posted by: Revutty

Bimla: Yeh overcoat uss admi ke abb tak sambhalke rakha hai tu , itna sab kuch hone ke bawajood bhi. Isse toh mein jala lungi

Vidhi: Maa, maa please.... Aisa mat keejiye.

Bimla : Lauta de usse yeh....

Vidhi: Ji

Bimla walks from Vidhi's room in anger.

Vidhi makes a phone call to Dev

Dev : Vidhi !!!! Tumhare Chaacha aake yeh resignation letter di tumhari. Vidhi Hari Prasad ji kaise hain?

Vidhi tried hard to control her tears and said; Paapa discharge hoke Ghar aa chuke hein. Pehle se theek hai. Sir mujhe milna hein aapse , baal Ghar mein.

Dev : Mein aata hoon Vidhi.

Vidhi cuts the call and takes the overcoat.

As soon as both of them met at the Baalghar Vidhi and Dev looked each other's eyes.

Dev : Vidhi!!! Kuch kaho Vidhi. Kuch toh bolo

Vidhi : Maa isse aag mein jalane waali thi. Mujhse dekha nahi gaya toh unhone kaha kee mein isse lauta dun.....Sir aapke yeh overcoat tab se meri almari mein padi hein....Jiss raat mein nashe mein thi aur aapne mujhe yeh pehnaye thand se mujhe bachane ke liye. Par samaj ki taanon se hum Bach nahin sakte Sir.

Dev takes the overcoat and looks her

Dev : Tumhari dee huyi shirt mere cupboard mein hein Vidhi.

Vidhi: Aap rakh to sakhte hein, mein woh bhi nahi kar sakti. Maa ne kaha kee Mera koyi rishta nahi hona chahiye aapke...

Vidhi cried bitterly....

Dev held her hands

Dev : Tumhare parents se mein maafi maangunga. Iss tarah tumhein mein takleef mein nahi dekh sakta.... Unhein mujhse problem hein naa ?

Vidhi : Sir pata nahi aage kya hoga? Mein zyada der yahan ruk nahi sakti....Jaldi waapis nahi jawungi toh pata nahi kya kuch sunne ko milenge?

Dev : Vidhi!!! Mein tumhein ghar chod dunga. Jinko joh bolna hein bolne de...

Vidhi: Nahin Sir. Mere mohalle waale bahut kuch bolenge...Sir aap...

Dev : Vidhi !!!

Vidhi: Sir aap pe bharosa hein mujhe. Mein akeli aayi thi toh waapis ghar akeli jawungi. Utni himmat toh hein mujhe. Sir mein jawun?

Dev : Agar rukne ke liye bolun toh kya rukogi ?

Vidhi; Kaash mein ruk paati. Par mere kadmon ko woh azaadi nahi mili hein .....I am Sorry

Dev : Dubara kab milenge Vidhi?

Vidhi: Pata nahi Sir

Dev : Vidhi, dard bardaasht ke saare haadh paar karenge naa tab mein apne kadmon ko nahi rokunga. Mein Milapini maa ke aangan mein awunga.

Vidhi: Mein intezaar karungi apne Dev Sir ke liye..

Vidhi gently took away her hands from his hands and walked away from there with teary eyes. Dev kept that overcoat towards his chest and bend down at his knees and screamed: Vidhi !!!!

Hearing the scream Vidhi ran towards Dev and touched his shoulder.

Dev embraced her with his arms emotionally and she cried bitterly by keeping her tiny hands at his back head

Dev : Aise hi mere dard ke sath toh khadi ho jawo Vidhi Kam se kam. Kyunki dard abb bardaasht ke bahar hein....

I wanted to see this moment onscreen because the way Dev's pain was portrayed today I felt Dev definitely need to cry out his pain and I wrote this in pain.

I literally scanned over the episode in a minute so don’t know what they showed about Dev and his pain. Kya hota hai na, I know ki sab kuch ITV par bakwas hi hota hai par jab tak thoda hasi khushi dikhate hain makers I can disconnect from the irrationality of the plot. Par jab yeh sazishen, yeh chudail jaisi ek dusri aurat, aur phir roti bisoorti heroine aur dard pata hero jhela nahi jaata.

Par yahan tumne jo likha wo bahut emotional tha. It was heartbreaking to read about a practical and always composed Dev. Well written.