Hakikat ; ViDev Few shots ,Part 1 - Page 4

Beautiful part Yaar.... Story bahut realistic hai aapki... Seriously.. Vidi and dev k moments bahut hi pyare hain

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Really beautiful and unique story

Dev and Vidhi k moments bahut beautifully likhe hain aapne

thank you yaar❤️ keep reading.

thank you geeta. glad you liked it❤️

thankyou parud❤️

ha dev hai hi aisa bahut chalak, dil se bahut naughty ithe saari kwahishe hai uska kabhi vidhi ko chuneka,kabhi gaal keechne ka ,tight jhappi deneka par sach me karneka vakt aagaya tho iska confidence kaha phurrrr hojata hai pata nahi...

agar vidhi ki boldness ki vajah se chota moment ho bhi gaya tho ithna dar gaya tha ki kahi usne kuch galat to nahi kia...

dhakkan, nalayak, namune , gadha kahika hai yeh dev khud paagal hai our hum sab ko bhi pagal banadega iski dar ki vajah se.

thank you yaar .❤️. glad you liked the concept. yes dev ek aisa situation me fasa huva hai ki khud uski saamne nahi aasaktha and usko akela bhi nahi chod sakta. isiliye ab bada thyag murthi banne ka dava kar raha hai.par iski vidhi bhi kuch kam nahi hain.uski dev sir ko kaise handle karna hai usse ache se patha hai. tried to include happy ,sad , love and emottional moments of videv.i think i did good in exploring dev emotions.but ab the hardest part is vidhi's pov.dekhte hai acha likhpathi hu ya nahi..

read all the parts and let me know your view.

Read both parts now. Very soulful and emotional one. I could feel the pain of Dev here. It was heart touching yaar. Good work. Likh nahi paa rahi hun lambi kuch. Emotional kar di😪😪

Beautiful update

Love it

Waiting for next part

Originally posted by: Shinika

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Thanks for the tag

Sorry for the late reply was busy

It's great that you worte story from a very different situation and introduced aman

Quite interesting