FF: Ishq-e-Watan *Chapter 78 Posted* - Page 66

Dekha aur padh bhi liya, I do agree with you, let's see how Noe writes ahead. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

Woohooo!! First aur iklauti hun yahan 🤣🥳🥳🥳

First toh sahi hai. Ek lauti achha nahi hai. 😆

Firstly, I love this quick recap into the past. Like a lot of things are known, more unknown but still, a good lot is revealed, loved the pacing and style too.

Yes. There are still questions- Monami and Sid's side of things might be a tad bit different, plus everything that happened after Param left, plus why Dr. Mahajan is so cold to Monami. But the basic premise of the past is revealed now.

Param being nervous to meet Juhi to being her most trusted man that was a journey that ended on a really terrible note. 🥺

A beautiful bond with a heartbreaking end. 😭

AMJ kahin ye EFR walo se mile huye to nahi? I somehow have that feeling. Let's see how things unfold 😳

Sabko woh hi kyun laga jaa raha hai? Kuchh cheezen unrelated bhi ho sakti hain.

The action scenes were well penned, I could feel then play in my head very vividly 👍🏼👏

❤️😳

Cleanup mein kuch karcha chhut gaya 🥺 and ooofff what they did was sooo much worse.

Kachre ne kaafi damage kar diya. 😭🤬

Kudos for writing it so succinctly, making the picture clear yet nothing very explicit. 👍🏼

It didn't make sense that Param would narrate the details of Monami's torture to Karan, even if he knew. That's not only something you would in general, skip over, but also something that's private and something, if Karan finds out about it, should be from Monami and not someone else.

I don't want to imagine the torture, it must've been so bad, young Monu 🥺 my heart aches for her. 43 days in captivity 😭 kaise log hote hai, bedard, daravne 😭

43 days is a lot of time to spend in an enemy camp. Even a week is a week too much but that's 6 weeks. Way too much time.

I didn't want to dump the scenes. There would never be everything explored in it, but there would be parts of it that would be explored through nightmares- some vague, some with modified scenes, some just a tiny flashback- so the rest of the chapter would mostly ease the horror of the torture.

Param leaving since he that's the only choice he had and having to live with the guilt 🥺

"You have to live with everything you do." 👏very true, indeed. The memories haunt us till our deathbeds.

True. Some mistakes and decisions- no matter how right, how necessary or how situation appropriate- haunt you and are a source of your guilt, especially if they have been scraped open- like Param's have with the academy tour and finding stuff that reminded him of Juhi and Monami and seeing Monami.

It's one of the hardest things to get past for people like Karan and Param who value life too much to be able to brush things away.

Karan has his answers now and vowed to find and make them pay. 👍🏼

If I ever decide to bring AMJ back- I am not sure if I would, tbh, at this point- it would be amazing to see the reactions and Karan and Param would be on fire.

It was a very heavy chapter, well done kiddo. 👍🏼👏🤗

Thank you.😳

AMJ kahin ye EFR walo se mile huye to nahi?

Sabko woh hi kyun laga jaa raha hai? Kuchh cheezen unrelated bhi ho sakti hain.

😆 simply cuz most terrorist organisations are linked with each other, they usually start off as a sister organization of the main one, functioning in a specific area and sometimes grow to be worse than the og or stay as a subsystem. I could give a list of how a whole lot of various organisations developed and how their leaders were trained by same people and their connections.

So it is very logical to them being connected. Maybe one of the deputy of the leader, jo kachre se bach gaya was asked to setup a sister organization with a different name to stay out of radar for a while and they grew into a new thing.

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

AMJ kahin ye EFR walo se mile huye to nahi?

Sabko woh hi kyun laga jaa raha hai? Kuchh cheezen unrelated bhi ho sakti hain.

😆 simply cuz most terrorist organisations are linked with each other, they usually start off as a sister organization of the main one, functioning in a specific area and sometimes grow to be worse than the og or stay as a subsystem. I could give a list of how a whole lot of various organisations developed and how their leaders were trained by same people and their connections.

So it is very logical to them being connected. Maybe one of the deputy of the leader, jo kachre se bach gaya was asked to setup a sister organization with a different name to stay out of radar for a while and they grew into a new thing.

Sacchi? 😲

Mujhe yeh sab nahi pata tha. Hmm, I would need to work on some backgrounds. Abhi recent tracks mein nahi aayega AMJ, baad mein shayad aaye. Pata nahi. Abhi tak socha nahi

I like your name for AMJ's left leaders- kachra. 🤣

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Sacchi? 😲

Yes. You can look up HM, LeT, or literally any organisation that functions in and around Indian subcontinent. There's plenty info.

Mujhe yeh sab nahi pata tha. Hmm, I would need to work on some backgrounds. Abhi recent tracks mein nahi aayega AMJ, baad mein shayad aaye. Pata nahi. Abhi tak socha nahi

I like your name for AMJ's left leaders- kachra. 🤣

🤣 haan toh Jo cleanup mein Bach Gaye... remember that little strip of dust that never gets into the dust pan - meme 🤣

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

🤣 haan toh Jo cleanup mein Bach Gaye... remember that little strip of dust that never gets into the dust pan - meme 🤣

This is so true.

Hi

Sorry😔 couldnt reply earlier was busy with work due dates and family functions

Sad update but superb one👏. Now want to know monami and sid's side story.

College happened 🤣

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

College happened 🤣

Well.........

Curiosity killed the cat.

I swear the days are flying by so fast. I hadn't realized it had been so long since I updated.

There is so much I want to do. Societies, study, classes, hanging out with friends and pata nahi kya kya. But it's really fun. Isliye pata hi nahi chala.

Abhi likh rahi hoon chapter. About 2400 words likh liye (2.5 convos mein hi ho gaye itne toh. ) Hopefully jaldi ho jaaye and I'll post soon.