Originally posted by: heycookie
wow interesting concept
detective geet that would be interesting to read
pls do cont soo
Thanks dear. Its totally a new concept. Hope you will like it. Keep reading my fics & commenting on them
Originally posted by: heycookie
wow interesting concept
detective geet that would be interesting to read
pls do cont soo
Thanks dear. Its totally a new concept. Hope you will like it. Keep reading my fics & commenting on them
me too suspicious now
why is he asking for girls only
what is he upto
n why MSG?
cant wait to read more
Very interesting part dear
Just loved it 🤗🤗
Hmm 🙄🙄 Maan here seems mysterious & Geet is spying for him & he gave her 2 cases to find information for ☺
But what is the entire buzz around about these girls investigation & hopefully this moves to something more interesting
Waiting for more
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 🤗🤗
Part 2
Curious and Intriguing Update
Why is Geet's client after all the young ladies
I just hope he has no bad intentions
Intriguing,what is his motive,is he testing her capabilities
Looking forward to further...
He is strange n scary man . Run geet run
Why he wants information of girls hmmmmm
Nice update
Is this maan or someone else and why getting girls information can't wait to read further
Update soon
Hi thanks for the pm and update
Part 2
Superb update... greatly written
Geet seems to be an amazing detective
well she managed to find the girl with the scar aka Shalini
of cos she informs Maan?
I assume MSG is Maan???
so he did not want Geet to speak to Shalini
now he gave her another assignment to find Meenu
Geet was indeed intrigued and suspicious
she wonders if she is doing something wrong by taking on this work
curious about Maan
alas they are many girls named Meenu
great she decided to take pics and show Maan
liked how she responded to Maan
as expected she gets the information
why does he want all information about girls?
update soon
Congratulations for starting a new story Di🥳
Thanks for the pm.
Part 1
This is really different and new from the stories I have read so far.
Geet's dream is to become a detective! I love her here for standing firm of becoming what she dreamt, but still on T/C's of her dad. Finally after 6 months of opening her own agency she get's her first case from a person called MSG!?
And this MSG has asked her to get the information about a girl?
I guess MSG is Maan here! But what does G stand for?
Not to forget loved the bond Geet and Chintu share.
Beautifully written❤️
2
nice update
geet is doing her assignment for money she is getting but worried that she not the part of some wrong motive
her concious is alerting her hope geet's worry is not true n no body is trapping her
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