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Posted: 3 years ago
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After Sai-jags revelation, and Savi's paternity truth coming out, Virat is in guilt mode and also on cloud 9 that his girl was only his and angry at himself that how could he suspect her with her molester. He thinks to make it up to both his girls and get them back. He thinks but is wary of his behaviour throughout and the impact it must have had. He thinks Sai always had forgiven him, he should try once more, in the hope to get her back, to get his family back. He goes to her rented house, knocks. Savi comes open the door...

Savi: arre, police uncle, Vinayak nahi aaya...

Virat: beta, police uncle nahi, baba...

Savi: baba? Nahi, mere baba aayenge, mujhe pedo ne bataaya hai...aap to Vinayak ke baba ho...

Virat: beta aapka bhi...

Savi: mere?

Sai comes there...

Savi: dekho na aayi, police uncle kya keh rahe hai...ye mere baba...ye to Vinayak ke baba the na, uski perfect family hai, uske aayi baba aur Vinayak to ye mere baba kaise..

Sai asks her to go inside, Sai insists, she asks Usha maushi to take her in...

Sai: kyu aaye hai aap yaha...ab Vinayak theek hai, hum bhi vaapas KK jaa rahe hai...

Virat: tabhi to yaha aaya hu ki tum kahi mat jaao, is baar to nahi...

Sai: aur kis haq se?

Virat: mujhe mera haq kya yaad dilati rehti ho, maza aata hai jawaab sunne me?... Ab to double haq hai...

Sai: matlab?

Virat: mai tumhara pati aur Savi ka ba...

Sai interrupts him... Kaunse pati aur kaunse baba...aap bas apni best friend sorry Mrs Virat Chavan ke pati hai aur Vinu ke baba... Humare koi nahi, sivaay mere patient ke baba ke... Aur ab to Vinu bhi theek hai to ab aap humare kuch nahi...aap apne raaste Mai apne...

Virat: mere liye nahi to aai ke liye aa jaao, Vinu ke liye...

Sai: Aai nahi vo ma'am hai, mere aur meri beti dono ke liye, aur Vinu ke liye aapki best wife hai na... Patralekha Virat Chavan...Mr Virat Chavan... Ab ho gaya ho to jaaiye, humare nikalne ka waqt ho raha hai...

Virat: mai tumhe kahi nahi jaane dunga, is baar nahi...

Sai: aur aapki patni ka kya...

Virat: lambi kahaani hai, abhi chalo, tumhe sab samjhaaunga...

Sai: kaha chalo?

Virat: apne ghar...

Sai: mera ghar? Aap bhool rahe hai, mai anaath hu... Vo mera ghar nahi hai...

Virat: Sai...

Sai: jaaiye...apni patni ke paas...jaise aap aage badh gaye hai, vaise mai bhi aage badh gayi hu...

Virat: mai aage nahi badha hu... Aaj bhi tumhara intezar hai mujhe...

Sai: smirks... Mera intezaar? Patralekha se shaadi karke, uske saath aapka bachcha bhi hai... Aapko sharam nahi aati jhoot bolte hue, Zara bhi nahi...

Virat: jhoot nahi bol Raha hu..

Sai: good! mujhe jhoot se nafrat hai...ab jaaiye

Virat joins hand, pleading...

Virat: Sai, tum mujhe phir galat samajh rahi ho...

Sai: ha, aapke liye ya to mai galat hu, ya aapko galat samajhti hu, tabhi to bol rahi hu, jaaiye...aapke liye jo sahi hai uske paas...

Virat: tum kyu nahi samajhti...

Sai: mai nahi samajhti, keh to rahi hu, jo aapko samajhti hai, jaaiye na unke paas...

Virat now loses control and holds her tight... Tumhe samajh nahi aa raha hai, itni der se bol raha hu... Mere aur Patralekha ke beech kuch nahi hai...

Sai: aur mai jo itne din se dekh rahi ho, vo sab kya tha?

Virat: frustrated, tum aaj bhi vaisi hi ho na, bilkul nahi badli...

Sai: aapko kisne kaha mai nahi badli, mai vo Sai nahi hu jise aap jaante the...

Virat: smirks... Theek hai tum badal gayi ho, Maan liye...

Sai: good, ab mujhe chhodiye, dard ho raha hai mujhe...

Virat: aur mere dard ka kya...mujhe maaf karo aur ghar chalo...

Sai: kaunsa ghar? Vo ghar jaha aapne mere sare haq, meri jagah apni patni ko de di... Yaha tak ki humara kamra bhi...

Virat: phir vahi baat, mere aur Pakhi ke beech kuch nahi hai...

Sai: sirf ek bachcha aur bohot si pyaar bhari baate, vo bhi tab jab vo mere yaha se jaane ki vajah thi...jab unhone kya kuch nahi kiya...par aap unhe nahi chhod paaye aur mere jaaye hi unse shaadi kar li... Aapki perfect family... Aapka pehla pyaar, aapki patni, aapka parivaar... Isme mai kaha hu... Na mai hu, na meri jagah hai yaha...

Virat: Sai, tum jaanti ho, tum....

Sai: aur aap ye sab isliye kar rahe hai na kyunki aapko savi chahiye...

Virat: nahi Sai...

Sai: mai aapko savi as milne se nahi rokungi par aap uspar apna haq bhi nahi jata sakte... Vo meri beti hai... Mai hi uski aayi aur baba hu...

Virat: humari beti...

Sai: nahi, aap uske liye police uncle hai aur kuch nahi....

Virat: Sai tum...

Sai: ab jaaiye yaha se...

Virat: nahi jaaunga... Tum nahi aaogi ki mai yahi rahunga par tumhare aur humari beti ke bina nahi jaaunga... saying this Virat comes closer to Sai...

Sai is conscious...

Virat starts to move closer and touch her...

Sai: kya kar rahe hai?

Virat: tumhe fark pad raha hai...

Sai: nahi mujhe koi fark nahi padta... Her being breathless...

Virat: nahi padta to karne do...

Sai: ye galat hai Virat...aap shaadi shuda hain

Virat: galat kaise? Tumne sahi kaha mai shaadi shuda hu, tum meri patni...

Sai: koi dekh lega, Sai starts losing control...

Virat coming closer... When Sai remembers Pakhi and her watchman duty...she pushes him...

Sai: aap shaadi shuda hai, Pakhi aapki patni hai... Unke paas jaaiye aur kabhi vaapas mat aaiyega...

Virat: baat to suno meri, Sai...

Sai runs inside and locks herself, thinking about what just happened

Savi comes and calls her out...

Savi: aai, kya hua, aai...

Sai: takes control of herself and takes Savi in and hugs her... Mai tumhe kahi nahi jaane dungi savi... Sab aate hai, chale jaate hai, par savi nahi jaayega...

Savi: mai kaha Jaa Rahi hu aai... Aapke paas hu mai ..

Sai (asking usha maushi): maushi, dekhiye Virat gaye kya...

Virat after sometime left, meanwhile Sai hides herself and SaVi, mentally preparing to just leave asap...

They start leaving with luggage, when a hiding Virat comes out of hiding... Gives vaada to take care of him and give them everything they need...

Sai: hum bas yahi chahte hai ki aap jaaiye... Please...

Virat goes but follows them to their home...

Virat again meets them at KK home, kaha tha maine tum jaha mai vaha... Tum mere, sorry humare ghar nahi aana chahti to mai aa gaya...ab mai yahi rahunga...

Sai: aur Pakhi ka kya? Mai aapki happy family nahi todna chahti... Vinu se uske baaba nahi chheenna chahti...

Savi: police uncle, aap yaha kyu? Vinu ke bina, vinu ko le aate to mai khel leti uske saath...

Virat: usko bhi le aaunga.... Talks to himself, pehle apna intezaam to karu...

Sai: looking at him with a look that a young girl is more responsible than her ex husband... Aap kya chahte hai? Mai yaha se bhi chali jaau... Nagpur se aapne mujhe nikaala, aapse bachne ke liye maine GC bhi chhod diya, ab aap bole to yaha se bhi...

Virat: tum kyu jaana chahti ho yaha se... Meri biwi ho tum...

Sai: ex- biwi....

And this goes on and on...


PS: I want Virat to Belo papad when the revelation comes alive, given the mess he has created and has been creating each day for himself.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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i doubt that we will get V doing any papad-beloing. The makers are always hell bent on whitewashing him and making Sai the one to be blamed. Instead of guilt he will only blame Sai for hiding Savi's truth and guilt her for keeping Savi away from family etc and all the CN folks will join that chorus. looking at Savi, i worry that she will turn against Sai too....she is a child and she is obsessed with her baba sadly...

I just hope Sai doesnt lose Savi in this whole process. I am scared .

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hii Nikita

How are you? Hope all fine.

After long time your story so nice want to see virat like this. But will makers give it is for us?

Hoping some good in story. Some progress. Ghum is just dragging stretching like bubble gum.

If they stretch with leads okk but they are doing it with pl very irritating .

Nice story.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Good to have you back, Dr Saahiba.

Nice read.

Virat has to do a lot more than this. And what about his family members? Even they should...

Sai should ask V "Aapne mere bacche ko mujhse chhen ke PL ko de diya tha, ab kya Savi ko bhi...?"

And V should remember all that too...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nja91

i doubt that we will get V doing any papad-beloing. The makers are always hell bent on whitewashing him and making Sai the one to be blamed. Instead of guilt he will only blame Sai for hiding Savi's truth and guilt her for keeping Savi away from family etc and all the CN folks will join that chorus. looking at Savi, i worry that she will turn against Sai too....she is a child and she is obsessed with her baba sadly...

I just hope Sai doesnt lose Savi in this whole process. I am scared .

The reason I wrote this, i know that something like this won't happen, that's why wrote it... creating own story and satisfaction 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aruna34

Hii Nikita

How are you? Hope all fine.

After long time your story so nice want to see virat like this. But will makers give it is for us?

Hoping some good in story. Some progress. Ghum is just dragging stretching like bubble gum.

If they stretch with leads okk but they are doing it with pl very irritating .

Nice story.

Happy Dussehra Aruna!! I am good, hope you are too...

Have been busy, try to read updates, and other's reactions, however, not been able to interact much..had some time, thought to write something and share as a means to interact with you all.

Hmm, actually they never had a story...the reason of all the miscommunication...if they show everything without dragging, they will be out of ideas and stories after 2 days, so...

Thank you...good to interact with you after long time...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sagi97

Good to have you back, Dr Saahiba.

Nice read.

Virat has to do a lot more than this. And what about his family members? Even they should...

Sai should ask V "Aapne mere bacche ko mujhse chhen ke PL ko de diya tha, ab kya Savi ko bhi...?"

And V should remember all that too...

Good to see you too, Sagarika...how is your writing going on? Happy Dussehra...

I know Virat has to, but will they show even this much i don't think so... Other members are and were always Anti Sai, so no hopes, they get TRPs for abusing Sai and creating drama around it.

V should realise everything, sadly he hasn't still, i was hoping that Sai's death news would make him introspect but still...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice to see your prompt reply.

There is a post from me going on right now. I have not tagged you, because didnt know that you were reading on the forum.

It is titled "Saahas Chavan..." must have gone on pg 3 by now. Saahas Chavan is the son (on paper) of Virat Chavan.

My writing is going on fine, currently with another project.

Looking forward to more from you.

I want to see Virat go on his knees to Sai...In front of all his family members..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Happy Dussehra Nikita.

Ya I know it's TV serial. Dragging is must.

Now a days feeling bored to see ml and pl scenes every day.

Happy to see u too. Watching ghum.?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aruna34

Happy Dussehra Nikita.

Ya I know it's TV serial. Dragging is must.

Now a days feeling bored to see ml and pl scenes every day.

Happy to see u too. Watching ghum.?

I read updates, some clips here and there on Twitter or Instagram, sometimes full episodes, but updated with the story. You watching? I guess so, your frustration says so😆

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