Arylie FF: Borrowed but Mine, Link Updated, Chapter 56, Page 9

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Chapter 9 updated. Trigger warning included. Please read at your discretion. --- Love, M

https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/32032

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Posted: 3 years ago

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Thank you..

Loving this new journey. ❤️

In a way it's never just a story for most of us, because we feel and connect with the characters. And what a beautiful journey this one promises to be.

Not sure, is it right, but I could actually connect and understand why Imlie tried to take that step. Didn't felt wrong to me to be honest, her only purpose in life right now seems Aryan, her Dev and he was not happy. Her face, her body will keep reminding and hurting him, even if he were to accept her as Imlie. That step may seem wrong but it did seem natural to me.

And so does her words "Will you wish me dead?" It was his words only which caused that glitch, made her stay back.

While it did hurt but again I could so well connect with the thought process.

And while Aryan keeps calling her Madhu, I will wait for day when he calls her Imlie. It's not just his body but his subconscious mind too which has realised it's not Madhu. But poor guy is confused and the situation he is in, can't blame him either.

Honestly, I can't believe Aryan would have taken that kind of liberty or attitude with Madhu ever; like changing clothes, taking shower or drying hair. He keeps saying you're my wife, probably more for him than for her, doesn't he find himself being more intimate with Imlie now than he ever was with Madhu.

And Archer, he proved dog is indeed best friend. 😘

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Hey. Thank you for reflecting on this Chapter because it was meant to be one to reflect on. And you've connected so well to this character.

I think Aryan recognizes that she is not all there. Whoever she is. To him, unless proven otherwise, she is Madhulika his wife. Is there a shadow of a doubt? I think so. He says things subconsciously like - who are you? But then his rational mind tells him what he sees is who she is aka Madhulika his wife.

The shower was a threat. He called her bluff well. But drying her hair and the rest is both his attraction, his curiosity and maybe his innate nature. He is a good man. Just wronged by Madhulika 1.0

Just some rambling thoughts as I go along my work day!! ♥️

Love,

M

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