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Posted: 3 years ago
#41

Am not replying to everyone's messages in this thread as earlier I had only 13 posts in a day.i am really thankful for all the appreciation and encouragement. Please keep commenting. Also pls give your suggestions to improve my writing

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Posted: 3 years ago
#42

Oho no i did nt expect this even though she is capable of doing all this.....

Plz dont show virakhi together....after all this crime if she gets virat it means evil winning over good.....in serial all the time evil is winning atleast not in fanfictions.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#43

I have not planned that as of now. I will try to accommodate this request. I want her to face legal consequences of her actions tbh

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Posted: 3 years ago
#44

Wow! Looks like Sai is gonna get out of the hell hole cutting off all ties. Nothing to hold her back..

You know, I'm always in 2 minds about Sai-V. While i absolutely detest V as he is portrayed currently there was a time when we were all rooting for Sairat and the fact that Sai loves him makes it hard not to look past everything just because you want Sai to be happy. Biit i think when situations get SO bad that the whole foundation of your relationship is shook then no use hanging on.

I look forward to seeing V regret, pp pay for her sims, divine justice and Sai leaving with her head held high

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Posted: 3 years ago
#45

Cannot wait for Part 7.

You are doing wonderful 👏 ❤ 💕


Want to see how Virat will react to this news. Hopefully he does not take Pakhi as he wife. I don't mind is Sai divorce Virat for all his sins. But Virat cannot forgive and marry Pakhi just because she did switcharu at the hospital...noting going into logistics on how she pulled the switch.

Pakhi needs to be in jail for at least 10 years, Virat too needs to pay for not trusting Sai, and abusing her. He too needs jail time.


Kaku is equal partner in Pakhi’s crime, she too deserves jail time.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#46

Good that you showed Vinu is Virakhi's child because that will make Sai free from Virat's jootha pyar web... Virat was always being bad news for Sai... That's the bottom line for Sairat's relationship... I always wanted Sai to get raid from this toxic atmosphere and relationship... Let Sai lead her life the way she wants and becoming a successful doctor rather she should be one of the best doctors in India getting more recognition worldwide.. will be the best thing for Sai... And chavans will always come in between her success she can adopt a child if she wants... There are many such successful people who are single parent...

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Posted: 3 years ago
#47

As much as I liked that vinu is not sai baby, I hope ahe gets to have her own child in future with a more appropriate partner.


Loved the part!!!


Y only 15 replies allowed for you?? 🧐🧐

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Posted: 3 years ago
#48

Part 7.


Virat could feel his life slipping away from him. He did a grave mistake. Inorder to please a cheater woman, he hurted the perfect woman he could have ever gotten in his life. He looked at Sai and he realized that he lost her and it is solely his mistake. He is disgusted with himself, he got the kid but not with the woman he wanted and he has no one else to blame except himself.

" I have warned you again and again,Virat Sir. Countless times, I have begged you to not let her come in between us. Look at us now, we can never be one now. You made me the other woman in my own marriage" Cried Sai letting all the tears flow.


Bhavani Chavan felt helpless. She never felt like this, not even when she lost her husband at a very young age and burdened with responsibilities. She badly wanted a chirag but virat and Pakhi's kid? Incest! She supported it like a fool. Years and years of experience, yet she failed to understand Pakhi's intentions. In her blind rage of not getting a Maratha bahu, her hatred towards Sai was channelized as support towards Pakhi.


Ashwini realized that Virat and Sai could be never together. Nobody could say anything.


Sai observed Pakhi. While she looked troubled, there is no regret in her eyes. Well, why would she feel bad? She got what she want, a child and a means to get Virat. No, Pakhi didi, i will not let you have Virat thought Sai


"Don't be happy that you would now get Virat Sir Pakhi didi: said Sai shocking Pakhi. Pakhi got irritated. Why can't this girl, the biggest thorn, get away from them? As if reading her thoughts, Sai continued " I will not stay with Virat sir. Am a police man's daughter. I follow law. You will pay for your sins."


Turning towards DIG sir, Sai added " Please ensure that she gets maxium punishment as per the case I filed few hours back"


"I will ensure it Beta" said DIG sir with a nod.


" Virat sir, please sign these divorce papers" said Sai handing over the cover to Virat. Virat is numb. He wants to beg Sai for another chance.



" Please Sai, we can sort this" said Virat controlling his tears.


" I have already sorted Virat sir. I can never trust you. You never loved me. Do you know whom you loved? Pakhi didi! You trusted her like anything, supported her and finally let her destroy us" Sai could no longer contain the hatred he felt for this man.


" Vinu, this innocent kid has no fault in this and trust me, neither you nor Pakhi didi deserve this child, And I will make sure that he gets the best parents" Said Sai while passing a smile to Pulkit who reciprocated her smile and moved towards Virat with an envelope which has legal adoption papers.


" Me and Devi will raise Vinu" declared Pulkit.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#49

Pulkit and devi, this is something i have added at the last moment. I feel this is the perfect justice for all the drama they created in Pulkit and devi's life. They tried to take away Harini and make her orphan, now the chirag they si wanted should be raised by Pulkit only. Am not aware of law procedures, just wrote it.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#50

Donno, it happened earlier so i was cautious.

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