Originally posted by: Poojac2510
This is so beautiful, I just loved it.😊❤
Thank you for the feedback ❤️. So glad you liked it .
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Originally posted by: Poojac2510
This is so beautiful, I just loved it.😊❤
Thank you for the feedback ❤️. So glad you liked it .
Originally posted by: Jaren93.
Amazing OS! You write so beautifully!
Thank you ❤️. So glad you liked the OS.
Originally posted by: DahtPluviophile
I don’t even have words anymore. You write so exceptionally. This piece is BEAUTIFUL!! 🥺❤️
Thank you for the lovely feedback. So glad you liked it ❤️
You almost made me cry🥺. Especially the priya's part was so beautifully written. ❤️
I have been hoping that Ram gets to know
about truth right from priya in a similar manner even since before the leap😅
But it's this OS is not but absolute truth of thes characters. The explanation which is not given upfront in the show. Bcz apparantly emotions are worthless to these people and drama is the key!! 😬😬
But what you wrote is magic.
Originally posted by: BeyondHorizon
WOW in capital letters 👏👏👏 this is hands down one of the best pieces I have read on the revelation ⭐️ and one thing I loved the most in your story which I seldom see in others, is the importance you have given to supporting characters and used them well. They r no mere props and I loved that. How I wish the minister track could unfold this way if CVs had enough brains things wouldn’t go this bad in the show. But if anyone were to do damage control to this show they would have written it the way u did. Brilliant and I hope u continue to write on RaYa 👍🏼
Thank you for the lovely feedback. So glad you liked it ❤️.
Well I do try to write for more than one person perspective because it gives an overall few than just the main characters. While I admit in FF and such most would prefer main character centric updates. This is something I have been experimenting for some time now.
I do have another OS idea. I am bit hesitant on writing it out as it might change certain aspect of what happened pre leap. I am not trying to whitewash the characters actions but I felt it would make for a compelling OS. So not sure, if I will pen it down as of now.
Originally posted by: LoveMyself_sri
Loved it... This is so beautiful.... Do write more on Raya... Awesome it is
Thank you ❤️. Glad you liked the OS. Will try to write more if possible. 👍🏼
This is so beautiful 💞 Idk if thr Kanika thingy is canon, but I need a sping off of that one🤣🙈
Originally posted by: tournesol
You giving it a try means a lot to me 🤗 and I am glad you added this character arc for Kanika, because it gave a new dimension to the story. Keep writing more. ❤
You shouldn't encourage me to write more or I might get out of control 😆. But thanks Tia for the support ❤️🤗
Originally posted by: RitikaS99
You almost made me cry🥺. Especially the priya's part was so beautifully written. ❤️ Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it ❤️.
I have been hoping that Ram gets to know
about truth right from priya in a similar manner even since before the leap😅. At this point in the show we all want him to know the truth at least any part of the truth. But yeah I do prefer him to hear it from Priya.
But it's this OS is not but absolute truth of thes characters. The explanation which is not given upfront in the show. Bcz apparantly emotions are worthless to these people and drama is the key!! 😬😬. What emotions. Male leads only knew the emotion called anger, female lead are known to suppress their emotions because they are Mahaan and can't be show with real emotions . I do miss Ram 1.0 and Priya 1.0.
But what you wrote is magic. Thank you ❤️
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