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U posted just when I was going through previous page ka comments lol

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Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

U posted just when I was going through previous page ka comments lol

Aaj kal timings kaafi match karne lagi hai. Chapter 29 jab post kiya tha, tab bhi Angel (Anwaya) ke saath match hua. 🤣

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Oooh... Abhi thoda dukhi hu last part padh ke... Laxman 🥺 ye kiski aankhen kaan itne khule hai jo Karan k informer tak pahunch gaye? 😲

Pata nahi. Woh toh dekhne waali baat hai.

Karan k Darr se bechara peddler .. chalo, thodi si information to haath lagi... Why would someone remove nazar wala dhaga? Naya kyu nahi pehna? Are they different people then? Two bosses, interesting. 👏

Dekhte hain. Do bosses ya koi aur baat, maybe?

Monu ke notes 👏 noice!! She's learning new things so dedicatedly..👍🏼 😳

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Sanju 😆 isse control na ho payego.. 😆 need more lovesick Sanj ⭐️😳

🤣Sanju has Monu and Sid's aatma from the show- eager and crazy in love.

Sid-Bala my favourite duo! Kaafi detailed instructions, you've mastered the art of writing instructions 👍🏼 mast tha :) waise sab ko ek lappy mila hai ya ek group mein ek? Inn dono k paas ek ek hai.. 🤔 that would be quite expensive for everyone.

Maine net par search maara tha.
Cadets do get their own laptops for research and studying since ek point ke baad, they also have to learn a lot of tech and be comfortable with it. It belongs to the academy; training khatam hone ke baad, waapas unko return karna hota hai, damages ka fine cadets bharte hain.
Military has a good budget and this is pretty important part since tech is exceedingly used- for information, hacking, surveillance etc. jo special agents ke liye bahut zaroori hota hai.

Koel Faizi's scene was cute! 😳

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Questions k answers : I think you haven't properly introduced the person but maybe there's a slight hint.. one of those agents who were in the party? It's nicely laid out. Keep up the good work!

❤️ Hmm, dekhte hain kaun hoga spy.

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Ek batao, why can't Param share his experience with Karan when Karan is stuck or finding answers. Haan mission details share nahin kar sakte but question poochne ke air bhi you tareeqe hain jisme Karan kushal hain.

Can Param not be on the advisory of the Academy?

Unless, like on the show, you are tempted to turn him bitter.

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Originally posted by: Bodhianveshika

Yet to read you will reserve pointers for later.


Ek batao, why can't Param share his experience with Karan when Karan is stuck or finding answers. Haan mission details share nahin kar sakte but question poochne ke air bhi you tareeqe hain jisme Karan kushal hain.

Can Param not be on the advisory of the Academy?

Unless, like on the show, you are tempted to turn him bitter.

Karan technically can. Depending on the missions. Spy is a very hush hush job toh uske baare mein kisi ko hint dena, especially someone who is not actively in military is a big no no. Spy ke baare mein even one detail or even the slightest hint can be something that can get Karan in trouble since it's a big thing. Par baaki us mein, it's not prohibited.

I do have some plans regarding Param as a special agent- in the sense that his commando side and knowledge will be explored. Abhi tak Karan has not yet been stuck on anything that is not concerning the spy and technically, bina missions ke detail bataaye, there is almost nothing that Param can tell him.
Theory toh Karan ko bhi pata hai, it's just the specific details jo missing hoti hain. Like, bina details bataaye Param can just vaguely comment and is mostly talking hypothetical things jo Karan ko mostly pata hongi and anyway he isn't quite "stuck" in things as of now, except the spy.

Sure, if he wants advice or validation for a move, that's a different matter and as I said, not prohibited.


Waise toh I don't like giving out spoilers, par yeh main de deti hoon. No, Param is not going to be a negative character. The whole reason I made Param alive was because I wanted to explore some bonds and because I wanted to highlight the strength soldiers have to bear things even if they have had some difficult circumstances.
Param had lived in a military academy for a very long time and was very dedicated to the service. He might have felt resentment towards the situation- struggling to accept things and hating to be disabled- but not his country, because his country wasn't the one who wronged him in any shape or form.

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arey 30 agaya....... topic title to change karo 🤣

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Karan technically can. Depending on the missions. Spy is a very hush hush job toh uske baare mein kisi ko hint dena, especially someone who is not actively in military is a big no no. Spy ke baare mein even one detail or even the slightest hint can be something that can get Karan in trouble since it's a big thing. Par baaki us mein, it's not prohibited.

I do have some plans regarding Param as a special agent- in the sense that his commando side and knowledge will be explored. Abhi tak Karan has not yet been stuck on anything that is not concerning the spy and technically, bina missions ke detail bataaye, there is almost nothing that Param can tell him.
Theory toh Karan ko bhi pata hai, it's just the specific details jo missing hoti hain. Like, bina details bataaye Param can just vaguely comment and is mostly talking hypothetical things jo Karan ko mostly pata hongi and anyway he isn't quite "stuck" in things as of now, except the spy.

Sure, if he wants advice or validation for a move, that's a different matter and as I said, not prohibited.


Waise toh I don't like giving out spoilers, par yeh main de deti hoon. No, Param is not going to be a negative character. The whole reason I made Param alive was because I wanted to explore some bonds and because I wanted to highlight the strength soldiers have to bear things even if they have had some difficult circumstances.
Param had lived in a military academy for a very long time and was very dedicated to the service. He might have felt resentment towards the situation- struggling to accept things and hating to be disabled- but not his country, because his country wasn't the one who wronged him in any shape or form.


Sach kahu toh I am relieved about Param ka sketch. Show me bhi I had not liked it. Thank you.

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CHAPTER 31

INTUITION

"Laxman ka phone aakhri baar 7:24 par Delhi mein on hua tha. 15 minute ke liye on tha, aur phir band ho gaya. Uske baad on nahi hua", Ustaad ji said.

Karan tapped the pen on the table. "15 minute mein kisi se baat, koi message?"

"Nahi, Sir ji. Kuchh bhi nahi."

He hummed. He took the map, pinning it up. "Phone flight se gaya hai. Mumbai ki."

"Sir ji, aapko kaise pata?" Sanju asked.

"Laxman ne mujhe 2 baje ke baad call kara tha. Agar woh 7:30 baje Delhi pahuncha tha, toh flight toh leni hi padegi. Deolali ke paas major airport Mumbai ka hai. Uske alaawa Nasik ka airport hai. Nasik ke airport par itni raat ko Delhi ki koi flight nahi chalti." He uncapped the pen. "Phone yahan se Mumbai gaya. Earliest, 5 baje pahuncha hoga. Ustaad ji, pata kijiye. 5 baje ke aas paas Mumbai se Delhi kaunsi flight jaa rahi thi. Aur jinhone board kara, unki list aur details nikaaliye."

"Ji, Sir ji", Ustaad ji said.

"Sanju, jahan se Laxman ne mujhe call kara tha, wahan jaa. GPS ke hisaab se bahut door nahi gaya tha before his phone was switched off." She nodded, moving out of the debrief as well. "Faizi, Delhi mein apne network ko activate kar. Police se baat kar. Dekh, yeh jahan uska phone on hua tha, wahan par koi clue mile toh."

Karan stared at the map, his mind swirling with the information he had. The door opened and he glanced away. Ustaad ji came in, holding a file. He held it out. "5:05 par ek flight nikli thi. 7:15 par land hui. Par Laxman jaisa dikhne waala koi nahi hai."

"Sab passengers ki list hai?" He asked. He nodded. "Yeh dekho ki kisne recently ticket khareedi thi."

He flipped through the pages, flipping them before holding out some forms. "Yeh paanch log hain, Sir ji, jinhone take off se sirf 6 ghante pehle ticket khareedi hain."

Karan took the pages, reading through the details. A couple of businesspeople, some employees. Nothing out of the ordinary. But there rarely was ever on the surface. "Details nikaalo. Verify karo sab kuchh. Ek ek cheez check karo inke baare mein."

"Ji, Sir ji."

'Sir ji, academy ki baat hai.'

'Pata nahi kiski aankhein kahan hai, Sir ji.'

'Par un logon se toh achhe hi hain, Sir ji, jo fauji hokar bhi desh ke nahi hain.'

'Kab kaun dhokha de jaaye, pata nahi, yeh toh phir machine hai.'

Karan's grip tightened on the table. 'Kya Laxman ko spy ke baare mein...'

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"Academy mein kuchh toh locha hua hai", Bala said. Koel paused in her chewing, before continuing and glancing up at him.

"Kyun? Kya hua?" Suman ji asked.

He glanced around. He shrugged slightly. "Pata nahi. Par sab special agents kaafi tension mein lag rahe hain." He leaned in slightly. "Abhi Karan Sir ji, Faizi Sir ji, Sanju madam aur Ustaad ji ko idhar udhar jaate dekha. Itne serious toh woh chhape se pehle bhi nahi the. Aur woh the, na, humaare attacker, chalte phirte beizzati ki dukaan- Raghav Sir ji- woh bhi badhe serious lag rahe the."

'Kahan ho tum? Tum... tum theek ho, na?'

'Ho na ho, this has something to do with that call', Koel thought. 'Sounded so serious. Aur Faizi bhi itni jaldi mein bhaag gaya tha. Mujhe kuchh achhi feeling nahi aa rahi hai. Kuchh hone waala hai kya?'

"#Investigation karein?" Chitra proposed excitedly.

"Nahi", almost everyone else said together.

"Paagal ho gayi hai kya?" Bala said. "Academy ka andar ka maamla hai. Beech mein padhna sahi nahi."

"K-Koi kuchh n-nahi k-karega", Monami spoke up. "Ch-Chitra, koi m-mazaak n-nahi hai. C-Could be s-serious. Tr-Trainers ke k-kaam ke b-beech nahi aa-aana ch-chahiye."

Chitra pouted a little. "#True", she said.

"Tu, na, padhai mein chala dimaag, hashtag", Koel said. "Waise bhi bahut zyaada lag nahi raha hai. Kharch ho jaayega saara."

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Sanket stared at the location of the phone. There seemed to be something weird. He frowned, opening all the files up again and checking the details in as well. They seemed to be just fine.

The door was pushed open and he glanced up. Karan walked in, and Sanket straightened up, saluting him. "Kuchh mila?" Karan asked.

"Nahi, Sir. Par..."

"Par kya?"

"Kuchh gadhbadh lag rahi hai."

Karan raised an eyebrow. "I want something more than 'kuchh gadhbadh lag rahi hai', Sanket."

"Yeh jo signal hai, it's not quite as strong as it should be", he said. "Almost as if... koi beech mein intercept kar raha hai."

He frowned. "Matlab?"

"I am not sure." He typed in a few things, before staring at the screen. "But... I think yeh location completely accurate nahi hai. Aisa lag raha hai ki kisi ne kisi aur city mein baithkar Delhi mein signal bheja hai, jisne upar satellite ko signal bheja jo signal humaare records mein aaya. It's faded."

"Tumhaare kehne ka matlab hai ki Laxman ka phone kabhi Delhi mein tha hi nahi?"

"Mere kehne ka matlab hai ki jo phone Delhi mein on hua hai, chances hai ki woh phone Laxman ka nahi hai. This means ki humaare paas koi idea nahi hai ki aapse baat karne ke baad, woh kahan gaya hai." He paused. "Sir, yeh koi chhota sa kaam nahi hai. This takes a lot of skills. Aur kaafi saara equipment bhi. And the work's clean. I almost didn't catch it. This is... this is a big job."

"Tum yeh city trace kar sakte ho, jahan par yeh original signal bheja tha?"

Sanket hesitated. He didn't like saying no to Karan. "Sir... try kar sakta hoon but chances bahut kam hain. It's a very clean work. Even signal bhi thoda bahut hi fade hua hai, which means ki shayad beech mein kahin par inhone ek aur jagah signal bheja hoga, which strengthened it before sending it to Delhi."

"Aur... aur jahan par Delhi mein bheja, wahan par bhi toh equipment lagta hoga. We have the exact location in Delhi. Usse kuchh idea mil sakta hai?"

He shrugged. "Bas ek insaan wahan par hona chahiye. It's really not that heavy. Portable hai. Par shayad aap logon ko kuchh mil jaaye. Tech help toh nahi hogi."

Karan nodded, sighing. He patted his back. "Good job, Sanket."

"Thank you, Sir."

Sanket turned back to his computer. Retracing the signal... maybe he could do it.

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"Sab theek hai kya?" Koel asked, keeping her head on his shoulder. "Tum... tum kal se thode tensed lag rahe ho. Is it a mission?"

Faizi clutched her hand, lightly rubbing his thumb over the back of her hand. "Not exactly."

"Iska kya matlab hua? 'Not exactly.'" Faizi hesitated. "Confidential hai?"

"Haan."

"Okay", she muttered. "Koi baat nahi." She sighed slightly. "Sab... Sab theek hai, na? I mean... tum, Karan Sir, Sanju ma'am... you guys are safe, right?"

"Koel..."

"Okay. Okay, sorry", she said. "Mujhe..."

"Tumhe darne ki zaroorat nahi hai." He pulled away. He turned slightly to face her, clutching her hands. "Hume pata hai ignorance mein rehne se zyaada tension hoti hai, and academy mein bhi shayad tumhe kuchh baatein sunne ko mili hongi. Hum tumhe kuchh bataa nahi sakte hain. Par itna zaroor assure kar sakte hain ki jitna tum tension le rahi ho, utna khatra nahi hai. Thoda bahut khatra toh hamesha rahega, na? Woh toh kabhi bhi, kaise bhi aa sakta hai."

She nodded. "Yeah." She sighed a little. "It's just... aisa lag raha hai ki kuchh hone waala hai."

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"Aisa lag raha hai ki kuchh hone waala hai", Karan said quietly into the phone. "Pata nahi kitna badha, kya, just that... that sense of foreboding... ki kuchh toh hai, jo aane waala hai. All these clues, these signs, they... they have to point to somewhere, right?"

Param paused on the other side of the line. "I know that feeling", he said quietly.

"Kya karoon main? What do I do?"

"Kuchh nahi kar sakta tu. Ignore karne ki koshish kar. Jo hona hai, woh toh hokar rahega. You can only wait until you have something to act on."

"Mujhe achha nahi lag raha, Bhaiya. Achhi feeling nahi aa rahi. I think... I think Laxman mar chuka hai. I think hum use nahi, uski laash ko dhoond rahe hain. I think... there's a lot we don't know that we should know. Bahut kuchh ho raha hai and we're... we're not seeing it. We're blind." Karan clutched the table. He was blind. The scene was black.

Param hummed slightly. "Zaroori nahi hai jo tu feel kar raha hai, woh sahi hai. I know bahut kuchh ho raha hoga jo tu mujhe nahi bataa sakta. Par sometimes, dimaag trick ho jaata hai. Hamesha lagta rehta hai ki kuchh aa raha hai, par woh sirf dimaag ki chal hoti hai. Tu tense environment mein hai, shayad isliye bhi yeh feeling aa rahi ho. Stress lene se koi faida nahi hai."

"Yeah. Maybe you're right. Just... thoda edge par hoon main. Maybe it's nothing."

"Do you think... do you think you're in danger, Karan?"

"Pata nahi. I don't know. I don't think so."

"Laxman ne tujhe raat ko phone kyun kara tha? Kuchh bataaya usne?"

He paused a beat. He couldn't trust the phone. "Nahi", he replied. "Kuchh nahi. Bas milne ko kaha tha."

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"Sab passengers check kar liye, Sir ji", Ustaad ji said. "Unn paanch mein se teen ko kisi meeting mein jaana tha, ek ki behen ka accident ho gaya, aur ek ki maa ka dehaant ho gaya. Baaki files bhi check kari, par sab saaf lag rahe hain."

Karan nodded. "Theek hai", he muttered. He tapped the pen against the table.

'Matlab, koi flight mein tha hi nahi. Phone nahi gaya Delhi, sirf signal gaya.' He stood up. Back to the scene, it was then.

"Usne yahin se kahin tumse baat kari hogi", Faizi said when the two were at the location. "Phone kaatne ke exactly 3 minute 12 second baad, uska phone baad ho gaya."

"Usne kaha, woh dukaan par jaa raha tha", Karan said. He glanced up in the direction. "Time note kar." The two began walking at a fairly mediocre speed.

"Bas", Faizi said.

Karan glanced around. It seemed empty. He glanced back at the commandos who were quietly following them. "Search the area", he ordered.

"Do din ho gaye hain, Karan. Yahan kya hi milega? Sanju ne kara tha search sabke saath. Kuchh nahi mila tha."

"Aur kya option hain humaare paas?" He muttered to him. He glanced around. "Laxman ko kuchh academy ke baare mein pata tha and uski baatein sunkar lag raha tha ki... ki kuchh badha hai." He shook his head slightly. "Hawaa mein se aaye chaahe, par we need something. Ho naa ho, this is about the spy."

"Sir", a commando said, walking up to them. "Kuchh bhi nahi mil raha."

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"Aap p-pareshaan l-lag r-rahe hain", Monami said softly. Karan glanced up from the coffee mug. "Usually, naa b-bolne w-waala d-department toh m-mera h-hota hai, na?"

He smiled slightly. He shook his head, sighing a little. "Just tired", he assured. She hummed. "Main... main tumse ek baat puchhoon? Agar tumhe nahi jawaab dena, toh it's fine." She nodded. "Tumhe... tumhe nightmares aate hain." Her face fell and she glanced away. "And I know uss din jab tumhe kaanch se chot lagi thi, you had a panic attack because of the nightmares, because... because woh tumhaare dimaag mein ghoom rahe the."

"Aapka... Aa-Aapka q-question?" She said.

"How do you turn it off?" He asked quietly. "I have... I have a lot on my mind."

"Usually, S-Sid m-mujhse b-baat karta hai. Yaa e-even b-better, he h-hums a s-song."

"Kaunsa song?"

"Bas... k-koi bhi. J-Just... J-Just have s-something e-else to f-focus on." She looked up at him. "Is it w-work jo aa-aapko t-tang k-kar raha hai?" He nodded. "C-Confidential?" He nodded again. She nodded back slightly. "F-Faizi S-Sir se b-baat kar lo."

He opened his mouth before sighing. "I... That's... That's not for me", he admitted.

"B-Baat k-karna?"

He nodded. He clicked his tongue in frustration. He took a big gulp of the coffee, his tongue and throat burning with the heat. He winced slightly.

A hum made him look at the girl next to him. She had her eyes closed, humming a soft tune. He stared at her. She was... humming. It was kind of nice. He let his eyes slide shut, quietly listening.

'J-Just... J-Just have s-something e-else to f-focus on.'

A distraction. That was needed.

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"I think we have hit a dead end", Faizi said quietly. Karan stared at the information they had laid out on the board.

"Hume bhi yeh hi lagto hai, Sir ji", Sanju said. "Kuchh naa bacha hogo. Delhi mein phone tha hi nahi, flight mein koi naa tha, jahan se Laxman gayab hua wahan bhi koi naa tha, naa kuchh pehle ka pata chal raho hai. Laxman hawaa mein gayab hogo."

Karan hummed slightly, nodding. "Pull off the team", he said, sighing a little. "Kuchh bhi nahi hai. Faizi, Sanju, networks active rakho apne. We'll pick this up again when we get something." The two said their verbal agreement, nodding.

'Bahut kuchh ho raha hai, and we're... we're not seeing it. We're blind.'

'You can only wait until you have something to act on.'

Karan closed his eyes, leaning his head on his folded hands.

'Sir ji, academy ki baat hai.'

'Pata nahi kiski aankhein kahan hai, Sir ji.'

'Par un logon se toh achhe hi hain, Sir ji, jo fauji hokar bhi desh ke nahi hain.'

'Laxman ke gayab hone ke peechhe kiska haath hai? Is it... Is it the spy? Is he the one jo yeh sab kuchh kar raha hai? Yaa koi doosra bhi hai? Kitne log hain? Kise dhoonda hai?'

He gritted his teeth in frustration. His informer. Laxman was his informer.

'J-Just... J-Just have s-something e-else to f-focus on.'

He stood up, taking a deep breath. He found her on the terrace. He paused at the doorway, watching her for a moment. Her open hair flew slightly from the wind as she sat on the parapet, gazing out at the city. He walked closer.

"Monami..."

She smiled when she saw him. She crossed her legs, gesturing him to sit. "H-Hello."

"I... I need a distraction", he admitted, sitting down. "Kya... Kya tum... please?" She leaned her head back, closing her eyes. She hummed a soft tune. He closed his eyes, listening to her quietly.

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"Hum kya soch rahe the..." Faizi started. "Ek break lete hain."

"Diwali aa toh rahi hai", Karan said. "Break hi break hai ek hafte ke liye. Thoda sa time hi toh reh gaya."

He clicked his tongue. "Hum aaj ki baat kar rahe hain", he said. "Saturday hai. Koel ko date par lekar chalte hain. 3-4 din se dhang se baat bhi nahi kar paaye hain hum usse. Woh bhi thoda tension mein thi."

"Tension kis baat ki?"

"Ignorance mein zyaada tension hoti hai", Faizi reminded. "Use kuchh nahi pata isliye probably, dimaag mein kahaaniyan banaa li hongi."

Karan hummed, nodding. "Plan toh kari nahi date tune?"

"Date se zyaada, thoda relax ho jaayenge", he muttered. "Woh bhi, aur hum bhi. Thoda bas... academy ke tense mauhal se door."

A boy walked up to them before he could respond, a brown packed box in his hand. "Karan Sir, aapke liye parcel aaya hai."

Karan frowned slightly. "Parcel?"

"Explosives ke liye check kar liya hai. It's all clear", he said. He held it out to him. Karan took it.

Faizi glanced it over, frowning. He shrugged. "Explosives nahi hain." He grabbed a glass of water. "Kisi dost ne kuchh bhej diya hoga. Dekho toh sahi."

He grabbed the knife, cutting the tape off. A strong scent of chemical hit him and he coughed a little, his eyes watering slightly. What the hell smelled so strong?

"Kya hai yeh?" Faizi said, coughing and pulling the lid of the box back better. The glass slipped from his hand, shattering on the floor of the mess. Karan stared into the box.

It was a human arm.


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NOTE FOR CHAPTER 31:

Yeh daily updates ki aadat mat daal lena. I just had these things planned well isliye kaafi jaldi likha jaa raha hai. 😆 I hope you guys liked it.


A few things:

1. A lot of times, people like Karan- people with very active brains- can have problems trying to switch their minds over to something lighter. If something heavy- like some trauma, some intense brain workout- is stuck in your mind for a long time, it can cause mental exhaustion that is very hard to deal with. Hence, why he actually went to Monami to get some distraction, and also, why Monami was so desperately searching for Sid when she got a panic attack in Chapter 22.
Humming is something which takes your mind off from the thing at hand- it takes some effort because tuning someone out is a thing- but it's better if it's a person doing it, because people aren't perfect in their tunes so the mind is less likely to be able to tune it out.


2. I am not very knowledgeable about tech stuff. But usko chaahe toh creative liberty le lo, even though I think this should be able to be done in real life as well. It's basically bouncing signals.
To give an example, imagine a room full of lots of mirrors. You shine a laser light on one of them, the light gets reflected a lot of times. Now, it's hard to tell where the light originally came from. Now, go one step further, and construct a sort of pathway which only shows the last beam of light. For the person viewing, you think it's just one beam of light and you can easily tell the source, but if you remove that pathway, you'll realize it's just a trick.
Same thing except with signals, which can sometimes fade a little or not "feel" right.
[Mujhe nahi pata kitna samajh aaya hai tum logon ko... par nahi aaya, toh... try karungi samjhaane ki warna isko bina samjhe hi aage badh jaao]


3. The entire chapter isn't set in one day. It started on Wednesday and ended on Saturday morning, with the investigation taking place over that period.


4. Karan didn't tell Param a lot of things. All he had told him was that his informer- Laxman- was missing and they were looking for him. It's not a very confidential thing since almost every SA in academy knows, and undoubtedly, the people who were responsible for him missing would know that the academy was looking for him.


5. I wanted there to be some tension in this chapter- not sure I was able to do that. It's the reason why I didn't show any "sweet" scenes and even the couple conversations weren't random and entirely related to the mission.
I didn't show any of Sid-Sanju because Sanju isn't quite as worried, since she doesn't know about the spy. Missing informers is a serious thing, but since Karan-Faizi knows they could have finally gotten some information about the spy, they are more tensed than the others about the possible reasons and meaning and how far the EFR would go to keep them from knowing anything.


6. Getting cut body parts might be common in movies, but in real life, it's very rare. At least, I think so. It's usually photos or videos or things that are sent as threats.


Yeh toh kaafi lamba ho gaya... 😆


A question:

1. Favorite moment of every couple- MoRan, SidSa, and KoeZi?

Edited by NoeticLife - 3 years ago
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I was so happy to be first after so many days but the last line has me Image


That signal bouncing thing is real. A Wednesday mein bhi dikhaya tha. It is quite doable with right equipments. 👍🏼 and your explanation is right about how it works, physics mein achhe marks aane chahiye 😈

Human arm and smell of formaldehyde - pretty apt. The way it stings eyes and irritates nose. 👍🏼 pretty traumatic as well.


Karan is tired of finding Laxman and his head is in a bad place. Yes the worst thoughts come over at times like these. Param bhaiya did help❤️🤗 loved their convo ❤️


Cadets trying to understand what's happening and knowing they can't help ❤️ not yet. Koel to Chitra 🤣 jyada dimag mat chala kharch ho jayega 🤣


Faizi assuring Koel sab thik hai even when he knows it's not😭😒

Kahin bhi kuch haath nahi laga investigation mein.. except ye jo haath aaya hai samne se chal ke 😲🥺 let's see how our SAs find their way out. 👍🏼 this spy is smart.

If it is Abhi... Shaktiman Gangadhar wala situation to nahi? Pretending to be dumb so that no one can guess it's him.. 🤔


Monu humming to make Karan feel better was good. 😳 Karan needs to learn some distracting practices, songs help always! 👍🏼


🤗

AOTD : KarMi - loving their coffee moments and subah subah wale 😳

SidSa - workout/practice sessions are lovely 😳

KoeZi - their date was lovely

Edited by DelusionsOfNeha - 3 years ago

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