New Maan Story.....kuch hatke haii😉👍 FF Ch UPDT PG 17 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Nysha11

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now i am grown up baby......🤣

Originally posted by: Nysha11

Wooowww arsh ua writing is improving⭐️

Yaar u wrote the dance sequence so well👏

Acha bhai tha thank God..😳

phirse cliffhanger kya gift hai yaar

Loved it ❤️

sb teri meharbani hai......tu encourage nhi karti toh nhi likh pati

thank you...

Ufffff so beautiful 😍 ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

You write sooo welllll!!!!!

Thanks a lot for the tag🤗

Anuj please propose kardo jaldi!! And Anu haan bolna please🥺

next update is here..........

Chapter 4 part 2

Devika - woh toh tujhe hostel jaane ke baad hi pata chalega…..😉

Anuj - aisa bhi kya hai……..ik minute kahin yeh surprise Anu se related toh nhi hai…??😒

Bunty - Wah! Anuj Anu ke saath rehke tu bhi samajhdar ho gaya hai….

Anuj - heey….tum dono kya karne waale ho..??😆

Devika - arey abhi bata diya toh surprise kesa..?

Bunty - tu bas dekhta jaa…😛

Anuj - oh…

Devika - ik min mujhe lagrahaa hai Anu bulaa rahi hai ……

Anuj - arey ….yese kese …ruk tu..

And Devika leaves running…..All sat in Adi’s car……Anu joins Adi in the front seat and the rest were in the back seat and were enjoying the Bro and sis conversation…..

In the car after the club

Anu - Adi vese teri love story aage badi ya fir wahin hai jahaan pe mene chodi thi hmm?

Devika - ooo teri konsi love story hai ……?

Anu - arey yeh wahi story hai or wahi aashiq jise mene bahot jhela hai….

Bunty - ooohoo to yahaan se aya experience…..

And they laughed….

Adi - bhai ladki ko pasand karte hai……bahot achi dost hai inki….izhar bhi kar chuke hai…..or voh haan bhi bol chuki hai….

Devika - toh love story ho toh gayi…..ab kya chahiye tujhe ?

Anu - arey shaadi ….

Adi - coughed……..kya keh rahi hai tu abhi itni jldi….mtlb?

Anu - teri kahin yeh plan toh nhi hai mtlb pehle honeymoon phir shaadi…..

And the Adi was awkward…..

Adi - kya boti rehti hai….tu….voh bhi na waqt dekhti hai na jagh…..

Anu - dekh waqt mene dekh liya hai….or jagah ka kya hai saare mere dost hai aur waise bhi aaj ki generation bahot advance hai toh malum toh sab hai….

Devika - kya Anu kyu bichare ki tang kheech rahi hai….rehne de naa

Anu - laughs….

Anu - acha vese tumhari baat kahan tak pahochi……

Adi - woh…….acha Anu teri padhai kesi ch rahi hai ?

Anu - Adi idhar dekh….

Adi faces her……kya hai ?

Anu - mere chehre pe pagal ikha hai kya ya mein choti bachi hu jo tu mujhe lollipop deke baat ghuma dega.

Adi - tu na bahot pareshan karti hai mujhe….kon behn apne bade bhai ko is tarah pareshan karti hai…?

Anu - arey ,mein karti hu…

Anuj was enjoying the sis and bro cute debate…..

Adi - tu na naraz hi theek rehti hai….?

Anu - soch le agr mein naraz ho gayi toh tere iye bhadi nuksaan ho jayega…

Adi - tu na bs chup reh….?

Anu turned silent and half an hour had passed since and she had not spoken a single word..

Anuj was worried ….

Anu was listening to music…..

Devika - arey Adi kya kr raha hai…woh bechari tujhse milke itni khush thi or tune use daat diya ….kya karta hai tu …?

Adi - yr Anu bahot pareshan karti hai ...mana meri behn hai pr …..

Anuj - Adi baat na kuch aisi hai jise hm sabse jyada pyaar karte hai usi ko satate bhi hai

Bunty - hnn Anu tujhse bahot close hai isliye toh sabse jyada tujhe pareshan kati hai…

Adi - woh toh mein janta hu…

Devika - toh mana le usse….

Adi - theek hai …..

Adi looks at Anu…..

Adi - Anu…

Anu - …..

Adi - Anu

Anu - ……

Adi - Anu

Anu - kya yaar Anu Anu Anu..nahi karni na mujhe baat….

Adi - sorry na…maan jaa na

Anu - Adi disturb mat kar…

Adi - sorry…..na abb age se pakka nahi datunga tujhe plss majaa….

Anu - tune last time bhi yahi kahaan tha…

Adi - pakka na sorry…..maan jaa….

Anu - theek hai ek shart pe ….

Adi - abb kya karna hoga…..

Anu - dekh tujhe marungi bhi mein , naraz bhi mein hungi, muh bhi mein fulaungi, baat bhi mein nhi karungi, pr manayega tu…..

Anuj smiles at her cute attics and demands…

Adi - yaar yeh kesa game hai …..

Anu - nhi kheln ok then…..

Adi - acha acha theek hai…..maan li teri shart…

Anu - awww……..fir theek hai……and she gave him a peck on his cheek….

Anu - thank you tum teno ko…..

Anuj, Devika , Bunty - hamne kya kiya…

Anu - is ghade ko samjhane ke liye…..

Adi - ik minute mtlb tu sab sun rahi thi…..

Anu showed them that her earphones were not connected with the phone…..

Adi - tu……..and he stops and smrinks

Adi - acha mein tere liye na kuch laya hai ..

Anu (excited) - kya layaa hai ?

Adi - dikki mein hai chl dikhata hu…

And he stops the car and takes her towards the car trunk….

Devika - yesa kya laya hai yeh…..

Anuj - pata nhi….

And suddenly Anu screams…

Anu - Adi ……Adi ... .dekh ise na mujhse door rakh…plss…

Hearing her scream they all get out of the car…..

Adi - arey kya Anu…..dekh yeh kitna pyaar hai…..

And he takes a step towards her…..

Anu - nhi….nhi….ruk jaa wahi….

Devika - arey wah Adi yeh toh tit for tat hai….mtlb tune Anu se badla leni ki full planning ki hai….

Adi - or kya toh na…..Anu idhar toh aa….ruk mein aata hu …..

Anu - nahi…..Anu screams and hides behind Anuj….and holds his jacket tight…

Bunty - arey Anu itna kise dar rahi hai…..

Adi - dekho yeh kitna pyara hamster 🐹 hain….or yeh Anu aise hi isse dar rahi hai…

Anuj feels warmth on his face as she clutches his jacket tighter in fear…..

Anuj - arey ... .Anu hamster hi toh hai….

Anu - wahi toh yeh hamster hai…..mujhe or kisi cheez se dar nhi lagta andhera or hamster ko chod ke….

Anu - Adi yeh na bahot galat baat hai…..mana mene tujhe pareshan kiya hai ….pr aise darayaan toh nhi tha na….

Adi - Acha…jii …yeh dekh Devika abhi bhi apni galti nhi manti….

Devika - Anu na apni mistake kabhi except nhi karti…..

Adi carefully dropped the hamster on the ground and directed it towards Anu…..and it started moving towards her and she is still hidden behind Anuj…..

Anu - a….aa..arey…Adi ise neche kyu chod diya….plss ise hata dena…..

Adi - yaar Anu mujhe bhi toh thoda majaa lene de…

And as the hamster came near to her…..she moved towards Anuj face ... ... ..facing him ... ..and holding his shoulders now…..

Anuj has not expected this ... ..that she will stand too close to him ... .as there is just a few inch difference between their faces…..

Anu - Adi ise hataa na…pls..

And as the hamster came near her feet….she buried her head in his chest and hugged him tight…and there were tears in her eyes due to fear….🤗

Anuj was surprised….not expecting this move…..in front of her brother and friends…….

And seeing that Anu is scared too much…..Adi quickly grabbed the hamster and put it in the cage and placed it back in the car trunk….

Devika - Anu….chod de Anuj ko abb chala gaya tera hamster…..

Anu realises that she hugged him and she leaves him…

Anuj - (uffffffffffff)

Anu wiping her tears...goes to Adi…..and hits him….and hugged him….

Adi, Devika and Bunty were laughing and Anuj just smiled…..

Anu - tu na bahot bura bhai hai….aise kon karta hai…jaa mein nahi baat karungi tujhse….

Adi - acha sorry…..Anu….and calm her….kya yaar Anu tu sb mein itni achi hai marcheladas mein ekdm expert…..or tu ek hamster se Dar gayi woh bhi itna jyada….

Anu breaks the hug……and wipes her tears…..

Anu - tu or Devika na yeh baat ache se janti ke bachpan se hi mujhe hamsters and rats pasand nahi hai…..mein cockroach and lizard se nhi darti pr….mujhe hamster se or andhere se bahot dr lagta hai……

Devika - 😆😊yelo…..bunty kahaan tha na mene yeh puri bachi jesi hai….

Bunty - 😆

Anuj - 😊 just love this childish nature of her Anu….

Anu- log apni behno ko bachate hai…..or yeh hai ik so mujhe hi itna darata hai…😭

Devika - arey tum bhai behn baad mein lad lena…abhi chal Adi….

Adi - haan haan chlo car mein baitho….

And they turned to sit in the car…..

Bunty screams- Anu hamster…..

Anu - mummyyyy……😨😨

Anu got scared and quickly wrapped her arms around Anuj's neck and hugged him again and this time he was just about to lose his balance…..so he wrapped his arms around her holding her tight….

And the three laughed…🤣

Anuj- kya bunty kyu dara raha hai Anu ko ?😡

Bunty - sorry….

And both come out of the hug…

Bunty took the window seat while Anuj sat in the middle….

When Devika was about to sit….

Anu - Devika tu age baith jaa…iss Adi pe na mujhe bilkul bhi bharosa nahi hai….

Devika - theek hain…..😉winks to Anuj saying enjoy with you would be gf….

Anu took the seat and they drove….

In the car….

Anuj's heart was beating faster as she was sitting so close to his right..….

Adi - kya Anu mein tujhe itna bhi pareshan nhi kiya ki tu mere sath mein baithi bhi nhi….😆

Anu - tujhpe na mujhe ab bilkul bhi bharosa nahi hai…..gift ke naam pe itna dara diya mujhe…

Bunty - Anu tu toh pehli baar mein hi itni dr gyi……😆

Devika - tu toh itna dar gyi thi ki seedha Anuj ke gale lag gyi…😆

Adi - 😎vese mein expect nhi kiya tha ki mujhe tujhe darane mein itna maza ayega…..

Anu - (beta chinta mat kar iska badla lungi) murmured and Anuj listened and broke into a wide smile….

Adi - ab aage se tu jb bhi mujhe pareshan karegi na….mein tujhpe hamster chod dunga…..😆

Anu - nahi nahi…..arey tu toh mera pyara bhai hai….

Adi - haan haan

And the 4 laughed including Anuj 🤣 ... .while Anu sat full of mouth....

Anu - aur tera backpain kesa hai….??

Adi - theek hai pr doctor ne heavy cheez uthate se mana kiya hai….

Anu - kya ik baar jyada Dumble kya utha liya tu toh bilkul baith gya….

Adi - yesa nhi hai bs ikdm se nerves mein pain hogaya tha bs…

Adi - vese Anuj tumhari family ke kon kon hai…??

Anuj - meri family mein mummy papa gk or ik choti behn hai hai mukku….

Adi - fir toh teri behn tujhe bahot pareshan karti hogi..?

Anuj - arey nak mein dum kar deti hai bs….pr haan hai bahot pyari….😃

Adi - haan choti behn hoti to bahot pyari hai …..kyu Anu ??😊

Anu - …….

Getting no response….

Anuj turns toward Anu and sees that Anu was sleeping

Anuj- arey Anu toh so gyi…

And she snuggled up to Anuj's arm….placed her head down to his shoulder..

Anuj's breath hitched….😳

Adi seeing Anu snuggled to Anuj smile…

Adi - Anu is assuming Anuj her Teddy…😆

Devika and Bunty - ohoo Mr Teddy…and giggled 😆

Anuj feels relaxed….😊he admires her face which looks cuter while she is sleeping…..

Adi - vese Devika tum log gaye kahan the…?

Devika - vo hum mall gye the ...Anu ko kuch naye outfits lene the ….so..??

Adi - toh kar li Anu ne shopping 🛍 or jarur tune hu sb choose kiya hoga…

Bunty - nhi….outfits toh Anuj ne select kiye the…hm dono ko koyi kaam tha isliye…?

Adi - vese sachmein Anu kitni badal gayi hai..kahan woh pehle kuch nhi bolti thi…bilkul chup chap rehta thi….ikdam dari dari si….or abb Dekho madam kitni bold ho gayi hai…

Devika - yeh tune sahi kahaan…Anu ke parents ke death ke baad Anu kitni bikhar gyi thi…

Anuj - accident ??

Bunty - yeh kab hua aur kaise…?

Devika - handsa tha ya pata nhi kya…yeh last year ki baat hai…jb Anu mein aur Adi with family camping kr liye gaye the….jangal mein achanak Anu ke papa ke gayi ke brakes fail ho gaye aur gayi seedha ik pedh se takrai….uncle aunty was dead on the spot….pr Anu Bach gayi….bahot chot lagi thi Anu ko almost pure 3 din tak behosh thi….aur halat bilkul serious…..jb hosh aaya toh parents ki death news sunke ikdam sadme mein chali gayi thi…..aur uss sadmein se nikalne mein kam se kam 2 mahine lage Anu ko…..

Anuj saw the innocent girl….who had to bear the pain of losing her parents…

Adi - aur Anu ko kisi tarah se Devika aur mene is trauma se bahar nikala yeh hm hi janti hai…..

Devika - arey bahut ho hogaya emotional story lo college hostel bhi aa gaya…

They reached college…. At midnight…

Devika - loo madam toh soo gyi abb inhe leke kon jayega…

Adi - arey mein bhi Anu ko utha nhi sakta….meri back mein already pain hai….

Anuj - Anu ko neend se jagate hai….shyd uth jaye..??

Anuj patted her on her cheek

Anuj - Anu….Anu….utho..

But she just snuggled deep into him…

Anuj - Anu toh uth hi nhi rahi hai…..kafi gehri neend mein hai… toh Abb ??

Devika () - abb kya…utha Anu ko god mein or leke chl room tak….

Anuj - uthaon ??

next will be later..........😆

Tag set 2

Tag 3 sorry if i missed any

May be there will be delay in further updates.......but aage ki story mazedaar hogi.....

Anu's wishes

Anuj's proposal

night together in a forest

and much more is there for you....

Teaser

Anu in Anuj's arm and her lips grazed his cheek......

Anuj - yeh tum dono ne kb click ki ......or yeh toh recent hai....😳

Adi - Anuj tumhe Anu se apne dil ki baat kehdeni chahiye.....

Bunty - abb toh ladki ke bhai ne bhi bol diya....

Devika - oh dekh bhai kudh keh raha hai i tu uski behn ko propose kar de.....🥳

Anuj - theek hai mein Anu se apne dil ka baat keh dunga......😳😳

Teaser padh ke abhi khush ho jao......baki baad mein

and sorry you will have to wait for the next part

Wahh how fab this update was🤩 the way anu and anuj r coming close, its giving me butterflies🙈💗

Anu's parents died.... poor girl 💔 Anu sleeping on Anuj's shoulder was❤️

Excited for their proposal