Mineil FF"Shades of love" part -34 date 8-9-2023page:55 - Page 6

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Posted: 3 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

Finally got some time to read missed out parts😆


Neil is real chugalkhor in part 2🤣🤣

And jalankhor also🤣

He is very jealous towards mini❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part:6


Neil looked at Mini's face before going to his room. She was looking at priya and neil. Her eyes were wet too.neil looked at her and laughed sarcastically. Seeing his tail of laughter made Minnie angry and sad.


In the days that followed, Neil kept doing things like this to make mini jealous.mini didn't felt only jealous ... she was hurt.Most days at night she looked at Babita's photo and started crying.


"do you miss your mom"preet asked once.

"I have never seen my mother to miss," said Minni, wiping tears from her face.


"He's showing love to his mother like this to hurt you," Preet said.

"i know it preet...but preet i need my mom's love"mini said like a kid.


"Tell your pappa to remarry," Preet said.

"when i say it,daddy cool will loss his cool "mini said with a smile.


"oh i see ... mini you Ignore his showoff. You pay more attention to your studies,after two months we have entrance exam" Preet said.

"hmm"mini shook her head.


Meanwhile, Neena's marriage is fixed . The groom's name was Abhinav. He is a bank clerk..

Nina's engagement is the day before mini's entrance exam.


"Oh god yaar .. If she writes the entrance there will be rank anyway.my pappa will compare my entrance rank with her and make fun of me, "Neil told his friends.


"It's very annoying that our parents compare us to the kids in the neighborhood."Neil's new friend vikram said.


"not only annoying it's maddening me..."neil replied.


"She should not write the entrance, I want to do something for it" Neil said looking at his friends.


"Yeah..neil don't be tense for it now.. tomorrow is your sister's engagement. We can make preparations for it" Arjun told Neil.


"Yes .. we can go to your house now. Didn't you tell me there are some works?" Bobby said.


"yeah yeah .come lets go"neil said to his friends

"Neil, I'll be back tomorrow. I'm little busy today," Vikram said.


"Ok "neil said.neil went to his house with Bobby and Arjun from the play ground.


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The next morning Vikram came to Neil's house. Neil, Bobby and Arjun were decorating the house with flowers.


"Arey Bobby Arjun ... when did you arrived?" Vikram asked.


"We both stayed here yesterday," Bobby said. Vikram also joined to decorate the house with them.


"neil ... where is your enemy? Will she not attend the engagement as she has an exam tomorrow?" Vikram asked.


"She finished everything a week ago. She's been doing revision for two days 🥴" neil replied.


"Omg... Where is she?

I have not seen her yet "Vikram said.

" She is in neena's room. "said Neil.


An hour later, Nina's fiance and family arrived. Neil, his friends and his relatives welcomed them and brought them inside.


After putting the groom on stage, Amar asked Priya to bring Neena.


"Bhabhi...I will go to bring her "said Imarti and went to Neena's room.


"Vikram.....mini is the girl wearing that red anarkali"neil said pointing towards mini.


Vikram forgot about himself and looked at mini who was coming with Neena.


"Oh my godddd.....How can you see such a beautiful girl as an enemy? If I were you, I would make her my girlfriend.how hot she is.. how gorgeous she is "vikram said to neil.


"Hot .. gorgeous .. she? myfoot ..she is a devil.If there are two horns she will completely became a devil."neil said angrily.


"hey neil... calm down"vikram said to neil

"vikram There is a devil behind this beautiful face of hers. That devil has hurt our neil so much. She's broken 6 relationships of our neil."arjun said.


"What?"vikram asked.


"Yes it's a long story...We'll tell you about it after lunch."Bobby said to vikram.


Engagement rituals started. With the blessings of all, abhinav and neena exchange the rings.

Later they introduced each other to their relatives and friends.



then the groom's cousins ​​danced,Arya and Arav danced.After that mini danced with the kids of priya's younger sister who are two three years younger than mini..They danced to the song of barso re megha from the movie guru.


"Arey neil...just look at her.uske baal bahuth lambe hai"vikram said looking at mini.


"Yeah.yeah devil's have long hair. I read it in a story book."neil replied.


"neil... just look her eyes. it's pretty as lotus petals."Vikram said.


"Lotus petal?what a joke yaar... Her eyes are like cockroach"he replied with a sarcastic smile.


"Neil...she have chubby cheeks "vikram said

"chubby cheeks... her cheeks is like Anabelle's cheek😏"neil replied.


"Neil just look her lips.. It is...."


"tere problem kya hai? neil asked irritably before vikram could finish his statement.

"i just admiring her beauty... she is look like an angel neil.just look her lips neil.it's like a red rose petal."vikram said.


"Red rose petel."They're so red because she smeared lipstick on her lips😡"neil said angrily.


"whatever.... she is really beautiful "vikram said while looking at mini.


"Aren't you hungry? Come on, let's go eat some food. Or we'll still have to listen the beauty description of that devil"Neil said and pulled vikram to food area. arjun and bobby also went with them.


The four of them started having lunch.

"mere hone wale bacche ki baap" mini looked at Neil from behind and called.


"Kya😡?"neil asked angrily.

"Amar Uncle told to pay the catering cash before this evening" mini replied.


"Haa... Okay "neil replied and he continued to eat food.mini went from there.


"Hone vaali bacche ki baap?When did this happen? Is she pregnant with your baby? Vikram asked in a weeping voice.


"yeah she is carrying my kid from last two years😡. Have your meal vikram "neil said angry.

"It's a long story yaar" Arjun and Bobby told him the tom and jerry fight story of the last two and a half years mini and neil.


to be continued....


Please forgive me for my grammar mistakes and give your comments.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#53

She is carrying my baby since two years🤣🤣🤣


Devil has long hairs...she smeared on lipstick on her lips🤣🤣


All those lines cracked me up🤣🤣

Ye dono buddhu ko kab realised hoga ki ye ek dusre se dushmani nahi actually mein pyar nibha rahe hain🤣

Edited by Bechain_Bulbul - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

She is carrying my baby since two years🤣🤣🤣


Devil has long hairs...she smeared no lipstick on her lips🤣🤣


All those lines cracked me up🤣🤣

Ye dono buddhu ko kab realised hoga ki ye ek dusre se dushmani nahi actually mein pyar nibha rahe hain🤣


yeah .... both of them will realize their love but it will take time.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Her style of addressing him 🤣 hone wale baccho ki baap🤣 she should continue this after marriage also to irritate him Mere baccho ke baap 🤣

When increase in demand : mere hone wale baccho ke baap🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Her style of addressing him 🤣 hone wale baccho ki baap🤣 she should continue this after marriage also to irritate him Mere baccho ke baap 🤣

When increase in demand : mere hone wale baccho ke baap🤣

she will continue to call this to irritate him❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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🤣🤣

Neil was jealous also that Vikram was noticing details about mini 🤣 And finally he took him away from there 🤣 And Mini🤣 Way she irritates Neil 🤣 Bacche ke pita 🤣 ,devil with long hairs , lipstick🤣 Carrying baby from two years 🤣

Edited by su_94 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: su_94

🤣🤣

Neil was jealous also that Vikram was noticing details about mini 🤣 And finally he took him away from there 🤣 And Mini🤣 Way she irritates Neil 🤣 Baccho ke pita 🤣 ,devil with long hairs , lipstick🤣 Carrying baby form two years 🤣

yes he felt jealous when vikram start to admired her beauty❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loving this story😆

Seems like this Vikram is going to become Mini's fan boy ,Neil is going to give him hard time😆

Update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Crazy🤣 those contrast I loved🤣 when Vikram was describing Mini and Neil describing Mini🤣 that red anarkali salwar Neil comparing to red devil with horns😈 🤣 long hairs Devil 🤣 Annabelle cheeks🤣but but why Neil got highly irritated when Vikram talked about lips 🤣 though he covered it up with red lipstick thing but did he remember kiss ?🤣 mini calling him bacche ke pita🤣 hilarious🤣

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