FF: Dooriyan aur Nazdeekiyan part 31 pg 116 - Page 63

For update n tagging me

I hope anu doesn't take a wrong step

Absolutely loved your take

Way you described the trauma

Part 25

Hey Noorie,

yaar ye kya kiya tune.

ye taar kuch aur hi the,

jazbaat kuch alag se the,

alfaz naye, andaaz naye,

dil ko choo gaye, saaz aese the,

hamesha yaad rahe, aghaaz aesa hai

This was way too emotional, somehow while reading felt gloomy and sad for Anuj. Its no secret that I have had a soft corner for him and probably still do.

I always wish for happy endings. Honestly, we all know this would never happen in serial because ITV FL are Mahaan Perfect Sacrosanct. As you said, this reminded me of my OS Chai Pe Charcha. So, i can relate to your thought process to certain extent while writing this piece.

I was pleasantly surprised to see you include even Dolly and Sanjay along with Bapuji. Dolly has always been polished emotional manipulator who only cares for her family. For sure, if Sanjay had cheated Dolly, she would not have care about family and Bapuji would have taken her back home. The very reason he gave one portion of house to Dolly. Today, if you ask me entire SH is toxic including Kinjal, Pakhi and Samar; who see all wrongs yet ask for their rights. This is sad part people always fight for their rights but no one comes forward for the responsibility. And now Anupama herself has become toxic the way she started using Anuj and made him bend to SH folks. Glad to see at least some where this toxicity ends and makes ways for fresh air, happy endings.

As always, all your dedication and hard work is seen the way you incorporate FlashBacks so well. I always wonder if you go back and watch those episodes again before writing. I so missed your shayari's dear. This was one of my fav FF and i used to wait to read your updates even during mid-nights. Wo bhi kya din the. Keep the good work going dear and best wishes.

Originally posted by: isyhm

Busy with exams actually

Hope you are doing good

All the best! May you come out with flying colours! 👍🏼All good dear.

Originally posted by: Kitty584

Wow.. so beautiful..❤️

Loved how you made Anuj explain everything to her..so important!!!!!

The way you incorporated Anupama's insecurities is amazing too.. can't wait to see what happens next!

Waiting for Thursday ❤️

Thank you so much dear Kitty! 🤗❤️So glad you liked the update!❤️ The next part will be updated tonight.

Originally posted by: ektag06

Nooorieee❤️❤️ Ektaaaaaaa ❤️❤️

I have no words. None at all to say how beautiful this part is. Infact the word beautiful also doesn’t do justice to this. You have just hit the right chord. Wow. Just wow. Thank you for all the kind words dear! 🤗

I just want them to pick just this part up and show us 1-2 episodes just on this. I wish they do explore this topic post the wedding. But I don't have too many hopes coz they made her say something like therapy mehengi hoti hai and nowadays they are so he'll bent on the middle class thing.

Dealing and overcoming with trauma is extremely difficult but she needs to be told outright. She needs to be shown the mirror and none other than Anuj can do this. I second you. Those who truly love us the most care to show the mirror.

This scene will be more hard hitting than all of her monologues combined. Agreed

Nooorie, once again, absolutely beautiful. Please never stop writing! ❤️❤️❤️ (Too bad there is no super like option here!) Thank you once again dear for leaving your feedback after every update! Means a lot to me! 🤗

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Originally posted by: rupsii

This was surreal and wow.. such truth bombs.. they both healing each other slowly.. how gorgeous is that.. Thank you so much dear Rupsi! 🤗❤️ikr. Both of them need to heal. It's so sad to see that Anuj's wounds are not acknowledged in the show. They only talk about his intezar.

thankyou for this Noor.. loved it.. 🤗❤ Pleasure is all mine sweetheart!❤️❤️❤️ always always a pleasure reading your work💖❤

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Originally posted by: PK_MaAnlover

This was the best part till date.. partly may be bcoz I wanted this convo between MaAn. But can never happen in the show. Hey! What shall I call you dear? Thank you so much! 🤗❤️

Thank you for including it that too with sheer &blunt truth..


PS. I read your FF in one go from yesterday & it is fantastic! Main quality being very logical, sensible, unbiased story. Also your dialouge writing is great.. feels like they r actually conversing in front of my eyes.
keep writing pls.. can u update frequently plssss? I am too greeedy for good content! Wow! I'm honored. Thank you so much dear for sharing your feedback! Means a lot to me! ❤️❤️❤️I wish I could update more often but it's currently not possible. Sorry about that!

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Originally posted by: grace2021

Noorie

I loved this part. Hey Pooja!🤗 So glad you liked it! ❤️

Such a heartfelt conversation, and was much needed. Your writing was so beautiful Noorie that it didn't feel even once that I am not reading steamy romance☺️. I agree it is needed. That's a wonderful compliment! Thanks a lot! ⭐️

Beautifully written just like Maan.

Lovely ,thanks for sharing ❤️ dear. Pleasure is all mine hun! It's always a pleasure to read your comments.❤️

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Originally posted by: Mita25mita

Perfect update Noorie dear! Starting to ending each part was fabulous! Somebody needed to drill the hard hitting truths in Anupama's mahaan head! I loved the way Anuj compared her situation with Kinjal. That was the real eye opener for her. Each step of her realization was very nicely done. The college flashback was amazing as usual! You always rock with Bunty Anuj scenes! It added a nice touch of comedy to the otherwise serious part! The last paragraph won my heart. Anupama finally realized what strength it requires to be "the Anuj Kapadia!"

Thank you so much for the detailed feedback dear Mitu! 🤗Always helps the writer. Means a lot! ❤️❤️❤️Last line ⭐️Finally!