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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Thank u my dear friends for the lovely comments.



Love over lies Part5

Rishab went to the terrace and started drinking.

Rishab:Why i feel so much of pain?

Pratha who came there saw Rishab drinking with a shock.

Pratha:What happened to Rishabji suddenly?

Pratha ran to the room and cried.

Rishab took a photograph from his purse and looked at it.

Rishab:I miss you.If you were here with me,I would have got an emotional support and I would not have gone weak.

Suddenly he heard a voice.

"I am here Rishab".

Rishab turned back.He was surprised to see that person.

It was Rishab's look alike.

Rishab called him emotionally:Virat!

They hugged each other.

Rishab:I missed you.

Virat:I also missed you.

Rishab:I am depressed.Seeing you,I got relief.

Virat:Why are you upset even after marrying the woman you love?I came to know about your wedding from your sister in law Thapki.

Rishab was surprised

Rishab:You know Thapki?

Virat:Yes.She is my friend.She works with me.

Rishab was surprised.

Rishab:I am depressed because....

Rishab told him why he married Pratha.

Virat was shocked.

Virat:You are depressed because you are guilty.Because you did a sin by cheating an innocent woman.You feel guilty of betraying Pratha because you have started loving her.

Rishab remembered getting attracted to Pratha and trying to kiss her.He shed tears.

Virat:Please back out from what you are doing.

Rishab:No,I can't. I have to protect my family.

Virat:Rishab.. trust me.You can't save your family by cheating and breaking the heart of the woman who loves you blindly.

Rishab felt upset.

Virat:And I really feel that our so called family is lying.They lied to you to achieve their goal which is purely evil.

Rishab was stunned.

Rishab:Virat,still you are suspecting them?

Virat:I am not suspecting them...I am 100 percent sure about them.Because I have experienced it.

Rishab:Virat,you are misunderstanding them.

Virat:No Rishab.They are greedy people who do black magic to gain success.Dadi is an evil woman who does black magic to get naagmani.She wants Naagmani for herself to be eternal and rule this world.But you trust them kindly.To safeguard the reputation of the family,it was necessary for them to shut my mouth.So our so called father..our step dad portrayed me as a drug addict and put me in the jail.If you had not saved me,I would have been in the jail itself.Since my name got ruined,I stole your name and identity to open my own business.Even my own staffs think that I am Rishab Gujral.I even introduced myself as Rishab Gujral to Thapki.All because of Lalit Gujral and family.

Rishab:Virat..I am sure that dad was not the one who was behind your scandal and arrest.Even though he is our step dad,he loves us.

Virat:Nobody loves us.All are using us.One day you will understand the truth.But make sure that you don't become late.And cheating the woman who loves us is a sin.I also a love a Naagin.I fell in love with Thapki at first sight itself.Since I do research on Naagins seeing her eyes itself I understood that she is a Naagin.But my love for her did not stop there.Because my love is true.

Rishab was shocked.

Virat:Anyways,I am with you my brother.Now I have to go.See you!

They had a hug and Virat left.

Rishab was in a dilemma.



The next morning...

Pratha went near Rishab.

Pratha:Rishabji,yesterday night you behaved strangely.Are you still the same?I hope not.

Rishab:My mood is still the same Pratha.I hope everything gets cleared and I will become normal.

Pratha got confused.

Pratha:I am your wife Rishabji.You can share it with me.Maybe I can help you out.

Rishab thought:How can I tell you the truth Pratha?

Rishab:No Pratha.Let it be in my mind itself.

Pratha:Why?You don't trust me?

Rishab replied in his mind:I trust you.But I am not trustworthy.

Rishab:It's not like that Pratha.I just need some time and space for myself.

Pratha:Ok.

Rishab walked away.

Pratha:What is disturbing Rishabji all of a sudden?




Virat and Thapki were on the way to a meeting.Thapki got Pratha's phone call.

Pratha:Thapki,have you started from their for the reception party?

Thapki:I am go...go...going for a mee...mee...meeting.Rishab ji..ji...jiju is with me.

We both will reach there af...af...ter the mee...mee...meeting.

Pratha:Ok.

Virat was observing Thapki.

Virat thought:Oh no...Thapki thinks that I am Rishab.So she will be thinking why a newly wed Rishab is attending the meeting when his reception party is near.Thapki will be doubtful if Pratha tells her that Rishab was with her when I was with her at the meeting.How will I manage the situation?Anyways I will have to inform this to Rishab.

While Thapki was speaking to Pratha,Virat messaged Rishab about this.

Thapki stopped talking to Pratha as Pratha went to get ready for the party.

Virat got a phone call.He was relieved.

He told Thapki:Our meeting got cancelled.It's postponed to Tuesday by them.

Thapki:Oh!So now you can reach your party on time.

Virat:Thapki,I will drop you to your house.You can get ready to attend the party.I have to go to the men's parlour before the party.

Thapki was amused.

Thapki:You go to the parlour?

Virat:Not really.But before the party I have to go,otherwise I will be nothing before beautiful girls like you and your sister.

Thapki and he giggled.

Virat thought:Today I escaped.But I have to tell the truth to Thapki soon.Otherwise she will consider me as her brother in law and I can't bear it.Because I love her.




Party....

Rishab and Pratha were dancing romantically.Pratha was upset thinking of Rishab's cold behaviour.



Hmm Hmmm..

Mohabbat Mein Yun Hadd Ko Paar Kiya
Mohabbat Mein Yun Hadd Ko Paar Kiya
Tumse Bhi Zyada Tumse Pyar Kiya
Tumse Bhi Jyada Tumse Pyar Kiya

Dard Ki Hadon Ko Bhi Paar Kiya
Dard Ki Hadon Ko Bhi Paar Kiya
Tumse Bhi Zyada Tumse Pyar Kiya
Ho Tumse Bhi Jyada Tumse Pyar Kiya

Tu Meri Thi Meri Hai
Agar Khabar Aa Jaaye
Besabre Se Dil Ko
Bewaqt Sabar Aa Jaaye

Khushi Deke Tumko Gham Udhar Liya
Khushi Deke Tumko Gham Udhar Liya
Tumse Bhi Zyada Tumse Pyar Kiya
Ho Tumse Bhi Jyada Tumse Pyar Kiya

Ho Ho Ho Ho Ho…

Ho Yeh Tadap Kaisi Hai
Yeh Jalan Hai Kaisi
Halanki Dono Mein
Hai Wafa Pehle Si

Jo Rang Tera Hai
Woh Rang Hai Mera
Kuchh Main Tere Jaisa
Kuchh Tu Mere Jaisi

Judai Ne Humko Ik Saar Kiya
Judai Ne Humko Ik Saar Kiya
Tumse Bhi Zyada Tumse Pyar Kiya
Ho Tumse Bhi Jyada Tumse Pyar Kiya

Mohabbat Mein Yun Hadd Ko Paar Kiya
Mohabbat Mein Yun Hadd Ko Paar Kiya
Ho Tumse Bhi Zyada Tumse Pyar Kiya
Ho Tumse Bhi Jyada Tumse Pyar Kiya

Hmmm.. Aa Gale Mil Phir Se
Phir Zara Chain Aaye
Ho Mere Honthon Pe
Phir Tere Hi Saaye

Bin Tere Jeena Bhi
Maut Hi Lagta Hai
Ya Tu Aa Jaaye
Ya Saans Bhi Na Aaye

Duaon Mein Aisa Izhaar Kiya
Duaon Mein Aisa Izhaar Kiya
Tumse Bhi Zyada Tumse Pyar Kiya
Ho Tumse Bhi Jyada Tumse Pyar Kiya

Mohabbat Mein Yun Hadd Ko Paar Kiya
Mohabbat Mein Yun Hadd Ko Paar Kiya
Tumse Bhi Zyada Tumse Pyar Kiya
Ho Tumse Bhi Jyada Tumse Pyar Kiya

Ho Ho Ho Ho Ho(Tadap)



Rishab slept on the couch shocking Pratha.

Pratha remembered their romantic moments.

She became upset.

She thought:Why suddenly Rishabji is avoiding me?

Pratha too stopped avoiding Rishab.Rishab could not bear it.

Rishab went to the kitchen in search of Pratha.

Rishab:What are you doing here Pratha?

Pratha did not even look at Rishab.

Pratha:Can't you see what I am doing?I am cooking.

Rishab:Fine.But why are you avoiding me?I really feel angry.

Pratha:Why are you feeling angry when I avoid you?You are also avoiding me.Right?

Rishab became silent.

Rishab:I did not avoid you purposefully Pratha.I have some business tensions.That's why.

Pratha looked at Rishab in disbelief.

Pratha:Is it?

Rishab:Yes.Sorry for avoiding you.I could see only business problems before me.Only if I sort out the problems I can be peaceful.

Pratha was relieved as Rishab was not avoiding her purposefully.

Pratha:Don't worry Rishabji.Everything will be fine.I will pray to Bolenath.

Rishab thought:I wish everything gets fine.But....

Rishab:Pratha,I want to tell you something.You know Thapki...

Pratha:Thapki is working with you.Right?She had told me.

Rishab:No.She is working with my twin brother Virat.

Pratha was surprised.

Pratha:You have a twin brother who looks like you?

Rishab:Yes.But he is living with my identity now as his identity got ruined.Because somebody trapped him in a drug case.So our own family disowned him as they also misunderstood him.Since the society tagged him as a criminal, I gave my identity to him.So Thapki thinks that Virat is me.

Pratha was shocked.

Pratha:I really feel sad for Virat.Hope his innocence gets proved and our family accepts him back.

Rishab:Please don't tell this to Thapki now.Virat himself wants to tell the truth to Thapki.Because he loves Thapki.

Pratha was surprised.

Pratha:What?Virat loves Thapki.

Rishab:Yes.

Pratha:I am so happy that finally someone loves my sister with her defect.

He smiled.




Pratha was looking at a photo frame.

Rishab:Who is this Pratha?

Pratha:This is my grand mother Shivanya.She is my mother's mother.My mother Shivangi also looks like her.

Rishab thought:So this is the evil Naagin because of which our family is suffering.

Pratha:My mom used to say that Shivanya Nani and Ritik Nana were an ideal couple.They used to give couple goals.They both had golden hearts.They loved everyone and helped others risking their lives.They both tried to save their clan from an evil family who did black magic.But they got killed by that evil family.

Pratha was becoming emotional while revealing her grand parents' sad story.Seema was watching them with a shock.

Rishab was shocked.

Seema thought:Will Rishab come to know the truth through Pratha?Then what will happen?

He thought:But the story which Dadi told was completely different.Is Virat right about dadi?Is Dadi lying about Pratha's Nani?If Virat is right,then is the evil family who killed Pratha's grand parents my own family?


Interesting eventhough i never watched thapki i am looking forward to this story and can you please avoid getting any characters(even if you get them give some context who are they) from thapki as its hard for me to relate to them 😊

Loved this judwa twist and eagerly waiting for the day when virat will reveal the truth to thapki as she is heart broken.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Posted part5 with a twist.plz give ur views.

i just now finished reading its great
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Posted: 3 years ago
#63

Even I have not watched Thapki n other than the leads I dont know anyone from that show.I named jigyasa thapki as she stammers.There is no character from Thapki other than Thapki.Thanks a lot.



Originally posted by: firewings_diya

Interesting eventhough i never watched thapki i am looking forward to this story and can you please avoid getting any characters(even if you get them give some context who are they) from thapki as its hard for me to relate to them 😊

Loved this judwa twist and eagerly waiting for the day when virat will reveal the truth to thapki as she is heart broken.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#64

Thank you so much 4 the encouraging comments




Love over lies Part 6

Rishab went to Seema and told her about what Pratha told him about her grand parents.

Seema became dull.

Seema:Maybe Pratha is not aware of the truth.So she she thinks that her grand mother was nice and she sacrificed her life while saving people.

Rishab:Ya mom.I also think so.

Seema thought:Glad that Rishab does'nt have doubt anymore.

A woman came to visit Seema.They both hugged each other.

Seema:Uvashi,you did not come for my son's wedding.

Urvashi:Sorry Seema.I was busy with pilgrimage.But I want to see your daughter in law.

Seema:Sure.

Rishab and Pratha came.

Seema:This is my daughter in law Pratha.

Urvashi:Your daughter in law is very beautiful Seema.

Rishab,Seema and Pratha smiled.

Seema:This is my friend Urvashi.She is always into pujas and pilgrimages.So God has blessed her with the magical power to heal people.She is known as Guru Mata.

Pratha was surprised.

Pratha thought:Why she does'nt look like someone who is involved in devotional activities?Appearances are deceptive.She may not be looking like Guru Mata.But she is.

Seema:Rishab and Pratha...Dadi wants both of you to visit Urvashi's Ashram at Megha Mountain to get blessings.

Rishab's heart was pricked.

He looked at Pratha thought:Pratha will be kept in captive by Guru Mata as her slave.Poor Pratha!Will she lose her life also there?Will she be killed there?

Pratha:Sure.We will go there.

Urvashi,Dadi and Seema smirked.

Virat took Thapki somewhere.

Thapki found it strange.

Thapki:We were go...go...going for a mee..mee..meeting.Then why did you bri...bri...bring me here?

Virat:Because I want to tell you an important matter.You are my friend too.So if I hide it from you,it will be like cheating you.I can't cheat you anymore.

Thapki was stunned.

Thapki:Secret?What secret Ji...ji...jiju?

Virat got irritated and burst out.

Virat:For heaven sake stop calling me jiju.I am not your jiju.I am your jiju Rishab's twin brother Virat.

Thapki was shocked:What?

Virat:I am saying the truth Thapki.I was trapped by someone in a drug case and my reputation got ruined.There was no one to stand for me except Rishab.I was not able to live in this society.So Rishab let me use his identity to survive in this world.

Thapki was shocked.But Thapki was relieved too.

Thapki thought:I was guilty about loving my brother in law.Now I am guilt free as I loved my friend,not my brother in law.I have not lost the man I love.

Thapki was feeling happy.

Virat:Sorry for hiding the truth from Thapki.Sorry for betraying you.

Thapki felt guilty.

Thapki thought:I also cheated Virat by hiding my identity from him.Since Virat revealed the truth to me,I should also reveal my identity to him.But if he hates me for that?I have to face his hatred also.But I should not cheat him anymore.

Thapki:I am also sorry Virat.I also hid my identity from you.

Thapki turned into her Naagin form.

Thapki said emotionally:This is my real form.If you hate me fo...fo..for this then...

Virat:Why should I hate you for this?Just like I was born as a human being,you were born as an Ichaadari Naagin.That's it.

Thapki was relieved.She smiled emotionally.

Virat:Since I do research on shape shifting serpents at first sight itself I realized that you were a Naagin.But i pretended as if I did'nt identify you as I respected your privacy.

Thapki was surprised.

Thapki:Why di...did..did you re..re...search on Naagins?

Virat:Out of curiosity.I myself did not know why I was so interested in knowing more about Naagins.But now I think that God made me do that as a Naagin was destined for me.

Thapki:What?

Virat:Because God gave me a Naagin as my closest friend.

Thapki smiled.

Suddenly Thapki thought:Does he know that Pratha di too is a Naagin?

Thapki:Do you know anything about Pra...Pra..Pratha di?

Virat:Yes.Not only me,Rishab also knows that Pratha is a Naagin.But he is also pretending as if he does'nt know her identity.Until she herself reveals it,he won't question her.

Thapki became emotional.

She thought:Rishab jiju loves Pratha di truly.

Seema asked Pratha:Pratha,are you ready to go to the ashram?

Pratha:Yes mummiji.

Rishab's heart was pierced.

He thought:Oh God!What will happen at the ashram?I am feeling scared.

Pratha noticed Rishab's dull face.

Pratha:What happened Rishabji?

Rishab:Nothing.

Seema became dull as she could understand why Rishab was looking upset.

Rishab walked away.

Pratha:What happened to Rishabji?

Seema smiled in an artificial manner.

Seema:Nothing like that Pratha.Basically he is a serious guy.That's why.

Pratha smiled.

Rishab and Pratha went to Urvashi's Ashram at the Megha Mountain.

Urvashi welcomed them.

Pratha found the ashram strange as there was no God's idol there.

Pratha:Why there is no God's Idol in the ashram?

Urvashi:Because I don't think God needs any form to appear before us.God is with us always in an invisible form.Then why should we need God's idols here?We don't need to see God's form created by human beings to communicate with God.

Pratha was amazed by her words.

Pratha:You are right Guru Mata.

Urvashi thought in her mind:The real season I don't keep God's Idols here is because I am a witch who is into witch crafts and black magic.

Urvashi:Can I speak to Pratha alone?

Rishab:Sure.

Rishab went out.

Rishab was feeling restless.

Rishab:What does Guru Mata want to tell Pratha?

Pratha asked Urvashi:What do you want to tell me in Rishabji's absence?

Urvashi:To tell you the family secret.

Pratha:Secret?

Urvashi:Yes.

Urvashi told her about Lalit's disease.

Pratha was shocked.

Pratha was very upset:I did'nt know about Papa's disease.

Urvashi:The biggest secret is only you can save the sinking family of your husband.

Pratha was confused:Me?How?

Urvashi:Only a naagin who has a special zodiac sign can save the family.Because only that Naagin can touch the Naagmani other than the Naagin who is the protector of Naagmani.Only the naagmani can save your family.You are that Naagin who can bring the naagmani to the Gujral family.

Pratha was shocked.

Urvashi:You may be thinking how I realized that you are a Naagin.Right?Because God blessed me with the magical power to identify animals as I am a God's true devotee.If I am not wrong.please show your Naagin form to me.

Pratha took her Naagin form.

Urvashi smiled:So I was right about you.

Urvashi:Anyways if you want your husband's family to safe,bring the naagmani.Otherwise the next victims will be Seema and Rishab.The whole family will perish.Everything is in your hands Pratha.

Pratha was in complete shock.

Rishab was becoming restless.

Rishab:Will Guru Mata harm Pratha?No..I won't allow it.I will have to save Pratha.

He rushed to the ashram.

There he saw Urvashi and Pratha coming out.He was relieved to see Pratha.

Rishab cupped her face in his hands:Pratha,are you alright?

Pratha nodded.

Pratha:Yes Rishabji.Why did you ask so?

Rishab thought:Unfortunately I can't tell anything to Pratha.

Urvashi:Pratha is completely alright.Everyone will be perfectly alright in an ashram where God's blessing is there.I am happy that you both came here.

She touched their heads and said:I bless you both on God's behalf.

They touched her feet.

Rishab:Ok...we are going back now.

Urvashi:Ok.Keep visiting here.

Pratha:Yes Guru Mata.

Rishab thought:I don't feel like bringing Pratha here again.

After they left Urvashi smirked.

Urvashi:Your husband's family has no problems Pratha.It was our trick to convince Rishab to use you for naagmani.So that we can share Naagmani.But I will not let those foolish Gujrals to take Naagmani.I will take the naagmani for myself and rule this world like a Queen.For that I need your help to get the naagmani Pratha.After your job is done,I will kill you.

Urvashi laughed in an evil manner.

Thapki told Pratha about Virat.

Pratha:I knew it Thapki.Rishab had told me.

Thapki was surprised.

Thapki:You also have a ha...happy news di.Rishab jiju already knows tha...tha..that you are a Naagin.

Pratha was shocked:What?

Thapki:Yes di.He has no prob...pro...problem with your identity.

Pratha could not believe it.

Pratha was standing under the shower.

Pratha was lost in thoughts.

Seeing the bathroom door open,Rishab peeped in and saw Pratha under shower.

Rishab:Pratha...why are you standing here like this?

Pratha:Tell me Rishabji,you know that I am a naagin?

Rishab was stunned.

He thought:How did Pratha know this?

Pratha:Virat told like that to Thapki.

Rishab:Yes,I knew it.

Pratha:Then why did'nt you question me?

Rishab:Why should I question you regarding your identity Pratha?I love you and I care only about that.Whether you are a human being or a serpent does'nt matter to me.

Pratha became very emotional.

Pratha:Your love is so pure Rishabji.I love you more now.

She embraced him emotionally under the shower.Rishab became emotional.

Rishab said in his mind:I also love you more and more Pratha.I will let anyone to harm you.For that I will stand against my own family.

Pratha:Rishabji...does your family also know about my identity?

Rishab nodded.

Rishab:It's mom who saw you first in the naagin form.That's how I also came to know that you were a Naagin.

Pratha became emotional.

Pratha:They also knew it.Still they accepted me.I am blessed to get such a nice family.I will do anything for this lovely family.I will bring naagmani here to save this family from misfortune.

Rishab was shocked:What?

Pratha:Guru Mata told me about the problems our family is facing.She told me that only I can touch the naagmani and bring it here to save our family.I will do that and then we all will live happily together Rishabji.

Rishab smiled emotionally.

Rishab:Thank you very much Pratha.

They embraced each other again.

He thought:That means Pratha does'nt have to be Guru Mata's slave to save our family.Thank God!Pratha will be safe.

Rishab:Animals may have more resistance power.But we human beings will have to change wet clothes,otherwise we will fall sick.

Pratha and Rishab giggled.

They changed their wet clothes.

Rishab:I have never seen your naagin form.Can I see your Naagin look?

Pratha:Are you sure?

Rishab:Yes.

She nodded.

She took the form of a Naagin.

Rishab was amazed by her Naagin look.

Rishab:I never knew that serpents can look so gorgeous.

Pratha blushed.


Edited by jasminerahul - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#65

Loved it dear

Awesome adorable & sweet part

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗😌🙏

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Another great update, it’s good they all now about each other but when will Pratha/Rishab find out what his family

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Posted: 3 years ago
#67

Great update ❤️waiting for next 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#68

Part 6


Absolutely Fabulous

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thanks for the pm

outstanding update

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Amazing story. Urvashi is a witch. That's intresting. Loved it i was lost reading it. There is a lot of twist. Wonderful👏. Do update soon🤗

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