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Posted: 17 years ago
oh yh nd everyone cum to my sis's mehndi today pls!!includin u star!!!waise if u go to BMTD forum then go popular topics nd click sharas weddin wid a memeber of IF then check it out!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh star.....that was tooooo short!!! Oh well, I will wait for that large update and I am very interested in the plan!!! You just left us hanging and the best part is I am not able to guesss what that plan might be! 🤔 Excellent suspense!!! Last part I was able to guess that Raunak might be the alternate dancer but this part I can't imagine what Robbie's plan is!

And the part where he felt bad seeing her upset.....very cute, something starting up here, eh??? 😉 😆 😆
I really feel bad for Sia that she will have to dance with Raunak but I guess she has to do it! 😕 And Raunak.........still calling her 2 by 2?? What happened to the remorse he was feeling for his actions?? 😡

Will wait for the update!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey ..star .very Beautifull Part 👏..and veryyy welll written 😳

Par yee tumne kaha stop kar diya ??😕.wesse kya hai Robbie ka plan ??..jaldi batayo na 😆..i can't wait...and next time Parttttt long postttt karnaaaa..cos bahut jaldi khatam ho jaata hai 😆

and Raunak ko kya huya?? ..kal tak toh guilty feel kar raha tha ..lekin phir wahi purana attitute wapis

Continue Sooonnnnnnnnnnnn 😳

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago
gr8 part... im sure robbie n kasturi will be able to convince them to dance wid each other.
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ priya: ha ha ha...ya i read ur post abt the mehendi..v cute n funny!...will b dere 4sure!

@pragz: srrrry...i kno it was short but i didnt hv the next part fully written out..but hv it now..will update soooon!..aww..u can't guess it?...welll gud...i as starting to think im too predictable!...but the plan isn't very complicated...so ya...but hopefully u'll like it!...and Ro felling sad....ya finally kuch kuch hone laga hain!....hehe the 2 by 2....just cldnt resist...coz nowadayz Ranbir nanda is all mushy mushy wit Kanya so he won't call her dat...n i miss it!...he he he

@manpreet: thnchuuuu! aur fikar not next part looong hoga...aur jaldi update karungi!....and as for ra's behaviour...i cldn't change his attitude all of a sudden...i mean he has lil moments of humanity...but then reverts back to being a jerk...he he he...taking the improvement in baby steps...

@ neha: thcnhu!...n ya hope they do! 😉

thnk u all for ur lovely comments!...luv reading them...next part will b up sooon! pwomisse!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Recap: Ro suggests that Sia dance with Ra; she refuses; Ro and Ka plan to get both Sia and Ra to agree; Ro asks Ra and he declines

PART 13:

Ok...w/o further ado, I will get to the plan and how it works out, because I want to get on with the main focus of this FF...(LOL..not just the RoKa romance...but something else!)

At college the next day, Sia and Kasturi are talking about Robbie's suggestion yesterday.

Sia: Nahi Kas...you know how I feel about him....I just...I mean 'hate' is too small a word for it...😡

Kas: You know what? You're right!....I just thought that.....but yes. I completely agree....aur..waise bhi..I bet he sucks at dancing...I mean Robbie is his best friend...and that's probably why he thinks so highly of him....

Sia (happy that her best friend agrees with her): Ha ha ha...yeah...I bet he has two left feet!....Probably dances like a monkey...no no....actually..that would be insulting to monkeys..😆😆

Kas: Ha ha ha...very true...and I'm sure if you danced with him....we would never win anyway....😛

Sia: Yeah...and he'd make us both look like fools....."Best dancer"....my foot!.....Like that SKB could ever dance!....

While the two friends are busy making fun of Raunak, a third person is eavesdropping on their conversation, and his blood boils to like 😡100 degrees!...He thinks, "How dare she!....'dance like a monkey'....hah!....I had you pegged right the first time '2-by-2'...you're nothing but words....now I will show you!..Just wait and watch!". Obviously, this is Raunak.

Boiling with anger he walks towards Robbie, who gives him a questioning look.😡

Rob: Kya hua Raunak? Itna gussa kyun?😕

Raunak: Woh...That....'2-by-2'....what does she think of herself?....😡

Rob: Kyun? Ab kya kiya usne?

Raunak: She said ...(and he tells Robbie about the convo he heard b/w Kas and Sia)....

Rob: Really? How dare she! I mean...you...and a monkey....bechara monkey!...he he he😆

Rau: Robbie! You're my best friend!

Rob: Sorry.....but really...she shouldn't have said that...she hasn't even seen you dance...

Rau: Exactly!.....You know what? I bet she's scared!

Rob: Scared...why?

Rau: Scared of dancing with me....because she's afraid she'll look like a moron in front of me....scaredy cat!

Rob: Ummm...😕

Rau: Ha ha ha...I bet she's insecure about her own dancing skills...or the lack thereof!...I bet she can't even dance herself...

Rob: MmmHmm

Rau: She's afraid she'll look like a gadha in front of me...the greatest dancer this college has ever seen...and will ever see...

Just as he is about to finish bashing Sia....who walks in on the convo but '2-by-2' herself...fuming!😡

Sia: Ohhhh...how dare you!....I'm scared...of you?....."the best dancer in the college"...a bit too cocky aren't we?

Rau: Nahi toh kya? Otherwise...why would you reject Robbie's offer...huh?

Sia: Because I...I.......why did you do the same?..

Rau: Because I.....

Both together: Because I hate you!....Well....so do I!...Ugh...stop!...😡😡

Rau: If you're not scared...then I dare you...say 'yes'!

Sia: Well...Sia kisi se nahi darti....and why don't you say 'yes'...I dare you back!

Rau: Ha Ha...like I thought...you're the dog...kehte hain na the one who barks and never bites!😆

Sia: Oh no you didn't!

Raunak: Oh yes I did!...The question is...what are you going to do about it?

Sia: Me?...hmmm..let's see...nothing much...I AM GOING TO KICK YOUR BUTT ON THE DANCE FLOOR!

Rau: Yeah?....Well...bring it on!

Sia: Good.....then we have a challenge...and just so you know....I never lose!

Rau: Neither do I!

Both Kasturi and Robbie are smiling slyly...and then say:😉😉

Kas and Rob: You know...you have to shake hands to officiate the deal...

Sia and Raunak reluctantly then shake hands, turn around and walk away with a defiant look on their face.

Robbie turns to Kasturi and says: Maine kaha tha na...I knew the plan would work...

Kas: I wasn't sure...but now I'm glad...

Robbie: What? You didn't trust me! Kasturi...I am disappointed!

Kas: Nahi nahi...aisi baat nahi hain....

Rob: Don't worry!....I was just kidding...I had a few doubts myself...but its good it worked out...

Kas: I knew Sia would never turn down a challenge...

Rob: And neither would Raunak.....

Kas: Well...now we just have to pray that they get along long enough for them to perform....

Rob: Yeah...and that will be an uphill battle (SORRY PRAGZ...USING UR WORDS...)

Kas: I hope not an impossible one...

Rob: Arre Kasturi....tum itna tension kyun leti ho? Just leave it all up to God now.......waise...I have to admit...we make a good team!

Kas: Well...more than that...you make good plans!....I mean to make them both insult each other and then listen to themselves being insulted....that was smart!...neither of them can handle their ego being hurt....waise a bad trait...par hamare kaam agaya....the only thing is felt bad insulting Raunak....I mean not that I'm a big fan of his...but I don't know hil well enough to comment like that...😕

Rob: Well...thank you!.....and about the insulting...don't worry....it was all just in good fun!And the plan? Well I'm not one to boast...but I must say....I am one heck of an intelligent guy!

Kas (smiling at this): He he...obviously...you're not the boastful type....hain na?

Robbie looks at her sweet smile...and once again feels a sudden pang...though a happy one he must admit. He just stares at the way her face lights up when she smiles, and wonders why he's suddenly feeling this way.😳 He lets out a huge sigh, and then wonders for the millionth time as to why his mind always wanders around and comes back to her.

I mean sure, she was completely different from all the other girls he had ever met. But why was it that he could never take his eyes off of her when she smiled...or spoke to him...or sang....with that sweet voice of hers? Coming up with no response for the millionth time again, Robbie looked at her face and gave up trying to make sense of his thoughts.

------------------------------------THE END---------------------------------------

Ok guys...so that was the plan...and it worked...so hope you liked it!....I wanted to get on with the story so had to push up my plans and cut down on Robbie's plan...hehe...Newayz....thank you for reading...and do comment or criticize...or... ummm...just say something...THANKS!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: RoKa4eva

Ooooh...sooooo sorry star....was reallly reallly busy and dint hav time to read....but now i did!

nice to c u bak roka4eva!..n dun wrry abt it!...glad u finally got free..


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the last few parts were really good..aww poor laksh...feel bad for him...but raunak's stepping in ha?...ab to kuch zaroor hone waala hai

i know i fell bad for him too..but had to do this! sowwie!...and Ra...well...keep reading to find out!

robbie's thingking about kasturi?...wow...really cute...and adorable....and he's confused and doesn't understand...very natural...

thnchu!...ya he's getting me confused now 2!...he he he

loved the plan...part 13 was nice....ego issues always make people angry enough to do anything...ha ha ha....

glad u liked the plan...i thot it was too predictable and simple...but seeing as Ra and Sia's character;s are both egotistical..this was fun!

what can i say? u are a greeeeaaaat writer star....and u shine just like ur name!

aww...that means a loooot!...thnchu sooooo much...u made my day!

hope roka get together soon...though kasturi doesn't feel anything for him yet!

they will get together...soon?...i can't say yet!...n ya...Kas is oblivious as of now...but....😉...keep reading!

hurry up and update soon...because now i'm finally free and will read as soon as u update...ok?

will update more regularly now...hope u can read it and like it!

lots of loveeeeee,
roka4eva

lotsa luvvvvv bak 2 u!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey very beautiful part dear hamesha ki tarah 😳

so dekhte hai aage kya hota hai 😆..aggar wo ek dance karte bhi hai ..toh mujhe darr hai ki kahi perfomace karte waqt na fight karne lage😆...aur ek dusre ke baal haath meh ho🤣🤣

Anyways ..kab likh rahi ho next part ??😳

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago
star........the plan was simple but perfect!!!! 😆 😆 I just could not guess that Robbie was going to enact a drama to insult them and get themt o hear it!!! 😆 😆 I guess Kasturi joining him was the best part!!! And Sia and Raunak's anger was just too cute, I tell you!
Hey np about the words, why sorry for that? 😊

Ah....so something else is in store for us in the FF, is it?? OK, lets get there quickly 😃 and I loved the last part of this part, the description of Robbie's emotions......that was very well put!!! 👏 👏 👏
Both the pairs are just too cute, star!!!!
As always....waiting for the next part...... 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
@ manpreet: ha ha ha...ROTFL!...dat is a very brilliant idea!....well...u'll just hv 2 wait n watch if it happens...thnchu sooo much hun!...next part....will update soon!...

@ pragz:he he he...ya it was kinda uncharacteristic of robbie wasn't it?...tho i had fun making him the mater planner...n thnchu for letting me use ur words!...n the something else...yeah coming up soon...in the next 4-5 parts....btw its not new...its just something i already mentioned in the intro that has to b disclosed...but after that the whole story will change!...so watch out for it!...thnchu soooo much for liking it and commenting!..

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