| ShiVi DRABBLE : Mera Kuch Samaan | | Her POV | - Page 5

Originally posted by: Amy_march_02

thank you so much ❤you tagged megonna read it now 😉

Originally posted by: Kfof

Loved it 😍❤❤

Thank You SO Much Kshama! 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

This is so beautiful, Ritu ❤️

Raavi walking away from a forced marriage she was intent in carrying out, realising that she can't force Shiva into it, and just walking away when she felt he wouldn't come back!

But he did, because all he needed was a little space, a little clear head to think that all he ever wanted was her, and within a few moments he came back to her <3

Just like the wedding, when he took a step forward, and she jerked his hand away, only to take his hand again, similarly, all Raavi had to do was step bacj and he took the step forward.

I like how you didn't demean Shiva or Raavi here, just showed them exactly how they felt, Shiva, in need of time away and Raavi in need of space.

It's beautiful! Shiva ke POV se bhi ek likh do parallel drabble? 👉🏻👈🏻

Awww Kaagazzzz 🥺❤️😭

The first wedding track was BOMB max. I don't think I will ever get over it in this life. You finding similarities in my writing is a BIG THING for me. 😭

This piece was centric on one thing and that is - Grief. The song shows yearning for the lost love and that is exactly what I wanted to do. Nothing more, nothing less.

Shiva's POV will come in some time okie? Imma about to bring something VERY good and that is taking up my time. I am confident about an idea after 2017 lol. But let's hope I deliver what my brain conjured. 🤪😆

PS : I've added the song link on Page One if you're interested 😳

Originally posted by: firsttimehere

So many feels Ritu .. it's awesome ❤️

I loved that you let them have their happy ending ..

I could literally picture every word of yours in front of my eyes ..

I hope there is a continuation to this .. they will have to talk and I want to read that talk.. so can you continue this pretty please ?😳

Awww Thank you so muchhh Dee! 🥺❤️

Always the one for happy endings. My characters always have their happiness in the end - even if its bittersweet somehow. 😃

There IS A continuation...a Shiva's POV of sorts and him finally wanting to get back with her 😳

Will post it as soon as my brain makes me write it 😆

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Don't kill me, please? 😒😭

Kuch bhi...Chup bilkul! 😡😆

Originally posted by: Prizi

Will read soon☺️

Originally posted by: Radhi12

Love it

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Ritu loved this Drabble ♥️

How you have captured Raavi’s each and every emotion

Also I didn’t knew you could write something short 😆because you have this way to open each and every emotion like going deeper and deeper always ❤️

Awww thank you betuuuu 🥺❤️

Hayiiillloooo Xcooj Me!

Pichhla wala was just 1600 words haan 😆

Originally posted by: Pinkbell

The mangalsutra part was amazing, the way raavi was attached to it was so pure!❤

At last, shiva's entry was gajab🤩

Loved the drabble.

❤❤

Awww thank you so muchhh! ❤️

Haha 'Gajab' was the reaction I was going for. My work here is done!!! 🥳🤗

Originally posted by: Yahvi

How beautiful is this 💕

You have a way with words❤️

Awww Thank you so much dee 🥺❤️😭

Means the world 🤗