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Posted: 3 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

I wonder how I missed reading this gem?? But probably real life ke lafde had kept me away from this gem..

But I finally found it n I am in Love 🥰 with it

Read all 3 chapters in one go today.. first time in ages I am going to write a long post

Disclaimer- This post is going to be long so please bear with me..

Chapter 1 -

This chapter is maybe naah definitely the cutest of all I have read.. just like AnuGun ❤️

Their feelings are changing n not may be but definitely changing..

I am in love with each word you have written ..


After the cuteness of chapter 1 .. moving on to

Chapter 2 -

Ohh girl the emotions you have penned down I had a emotional 😭 roller coaster ride while reading.. carried away with the emotions…

Especially the scene with Sargam and badi maa n
I sniffed, I cried silently with Gungun

n then got angry on Dr. Maya 😔

Aww Anu climbing to her bedroom window

If GC and gand would have known they would tease hims saying

Scientist of the year bana spider man 🤣

AnuGun heart to heart talk aww..

M at the end felt so happy with AnuGun giving each other a chance and ohh my my forget to mention the Hug 🤗 😍😍


“Anubhav.” His name had never sounded so sweetly.

Uff Anubhav ke dil mein ghantiyaan baj gayi 😆


Can I get a hug please.”

Aww Gungun you are so cute..

Tumhe permission mangne ke koi zaroorat nai hai.”


This line has my heart… haaye dil Khush kar ditta


N the hug 🤗 aww kya hi kahun how happy I am imagining AnuGun hug n he twirling her around.. 😍


Chapter 3 -

Ohho Gungun getting ready for her boi oops sorry her man.. 😳

bua ke saath date decorations ki planning 👍🏼

This pagla guy has to mess the perfect moment..

Gungun’s outburst is genuine..

Golu chachu is good for nothing 😆 ( atleast in this scenario) where Garima bua smartly helped Anu 😆

N the date aww 🥰 N the kiss 😘 though it was on cheeks.. 😆 aww how much I will say they are so cute n sound like a broken record 😆
beautiful chapter.. Now I lost all the words which I thought to write down

But SS is turning out so good n cute and soothing you have captured each and every character’s essence really well.. 👏

I’m glad you found it! 💛

Ahhh!!! Thank you so much for this long comment! Especially since you given a comment for each chapter! I appreciate it!
Glad you’re enjoying the SS! Hopefully you’ll continue to enjoy it! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: livetodream257

This is an epic update! Already read it several times - the budding romance is simply too delicious to read just once 😊 And the stolen cheek kisses were the cherry on the top! Another cute detail I loved was Anu “zooming past” Garima and Ridhesh on his way to speak to Gungun. Of course he’s gonna zoom past - ah, I can picture the scene in my head…

Thank you for commenting!
Ahhh!! Glad you enjoyed it so much!!
Haha yeah our Anu was impatient 😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: MinMIN2

Gungun is such a sweetheart❣️ Her insecurity and hopes towards this new relation is depicted so nicely.

I was so angry on Anu idiot bechari ka dil dukha diya that too on her engagement. But then you described his nervousness and it was so realistic.

Their first date so intimate and so lovely. The matchmaking pros did not disappoint.

That kiss uff was a nice touch. Chant chasmish is very chaloo.

Before reading the chapters I always think that I will write a long appreciation message bt jb likhne aati hoon to blank 🙈

I really really love you writing Author mam🤩❤️❤️❤️


Precap: Our Anu agreed to dance, so obviously we need a little intimate moment. 😂


(Maybe it’s even time for their first kiss) 😂


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I can't wait I am so so soooooooo excited Anugun dance😍

First kiss

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Ahh!! You’re such a sweetheart! Love the gifs!! 💛

Thank you for commenting! Don’t worry about the length of the comment 😂
Although I do enjoy reading them! Especially yours! ❤️

Thank you for appreciating my writing! Sending you lots of of love! ❤️
I’m hoping I fit in the dance and a kiss scene for the next update! Pray writers block doesn’t hit me 😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: chulbul2111

How can someone write so good❤️

It was breathtaking for me

please update soon!!can't wait to read more

Awww!!! You’re so nice!!
Thanks for commenting! 💛

Will definitely try to update soon!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Piyaazzz

This is a masterpiece

M not good at expressing my appreciation n admiration but ur writing style is wow !

And also the sanskari anu's transition was so perfectly done😆

Jab show me hoga to pagla hi jaungi me to 🤣☺️


Waiting for your next update😎

N thanks for tagging😳

Ahh you’re too nice!!! Idk about masterpiece, but I’m glad you’re enjoying it! 💜

Thanks for commenting and appreciating it! 💛
Omds!! I’ll be equally crazy when we’ll have a romantic Anubhav! 😂

You’re welcome! Hopefully will update soon! 💛

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Posted: 3 years ago
#86

Firstly, I am so sorry for coming across this so late! I was down with bad sinusitis and couldn't look at the screen for too long without burning my eyes!

Second, thank you so much for the loveliest update and tag!! Sacchi mein, I've fallen in love with this story.

Okay, so Gungun got ready for someone else for the first time, and who? Her Chant Chasmish!

Garima legit represents the fandom seeing the ship sailing.😆 She's so cute. Boo, Dil le lo!🤗

I can't get tired of saying this but you take me by awe whenever I read your description of Anubhav Kulshreshth. You always have described him so apt and this was nothing less. I'm so glad you kept him to his character yet a slightly more gentleman-ish version of him. Your Anubhav is becoming my favourite.

Uff! These two are beginning to act like an old married couple! The poor guy is trying to say sorry while his wife complains. I literally see them as the younger version of Badi Ma and Bade Papa.😆

Ufff, the feels you created whilst writing the part they officially got engaged! Along with Gungun's doubts and Anu's guilt- You're a genius!

I love how straight-forward Bua is and didn't mind outright asking him, not having the typical "I can't question him because he is our son-in-law" mentality. Honestly, this woman is Gungun's mom from every side.❤️

Awwwwhhh! Anubhav and Chachu's scene had me.😆

His pyaare chachu knew something was definitely wrong with his nephew the minute he heard his phool-like voice as he sugar-coatedly talked to him.😆 (Speaking of which, please write a small scen where Chachu teases him over Anu's desperation to talking to his wife.😳)

Gungun is actually so mature, and this made me realise it. She didn't want any other person getting to know of her and Anubhav's little incident and also because she didn't want to hurt her in-laws, hence went to meet them. This girl is pure gold.❤️

“Aap toh kisi kam ke bhi nai nikle! Sab kuch toh Garima Aunty ne kiya.” This is what desperation to talk to your future wife sounds like, Mr Anubhav Kulshreshth.😆

Again, these two are already an old married couple to me- Gungun animatedly complaining of him was written so beautiful that I actually went awwwh. And mind you, that usually only happens when I watch, not read!


SHUT. UP!



HE. CONFESSED!!!! OMG!!


"Tumhe dekha toh socha ke kash tum mere liye tyaar huwi ho, ke tum aaj Anubhav ke Gungun ho, ke tum aaj sab ke samne Mrs. Anubhav Kulshreshth banne ay ho. Tum mujhe ache lagne lage ho.”


"Main tumhara hoon, tumhare liye main kuch bhi kar sakta hoon.”


Haayyyeee!!! The number of times I read these lines is insane. Gungun ka pata nahi, but he stole my heart.


omg- the hug, once again, managed to create such an impact on me, sacchi! I love how you emphasised him tightening his grip on her. I could so imagine this and-


AND HE KISSED HER!!!!


am I dreaming? no

did your surprise leave me speechless? yes


Oh my, this guy is so in love with Gungun and he's yet to realise the intensity of his feelings. This is just gold.


Sacchi mein, this date will forever be memorable for me. And I doubt the makers will ever match the standard of this. No lies, you're damn talented and you've yet again aced this chapter!😳


Waiting for their dance and for the next chapter.🤗❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: GHKPM

Oh wow...that was an interesting turn of events...a date, a confession, a lovely kiss...wow just wow...loved the way the incidents unfolded...so believable...so lovely👍😍❤🌹😊

Thank you! Glad it ended up in flow. Appreciate you commenting! 💛

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Posted: 3 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: lovereading14


Thanks for the tag... what a fantastic update! I was curious to see where the story would go and oh.my.god I cannot wait for the next update!


It would be so sad to lose a writer like you to a writer's block (that stuff is bad... trust me ik) I would, if you ever need it, would be happy to discuss your block and give some suggestions/inspiration. I am just a pm away 😉


Update soon, and tag me when you do ❤️

Ahh!! Thank you so much for your offer! Thanks for understanding. Luckily, last night I had found some random inspiration whilst half asleep. 😂

I’m going to try attempting to write the next piece on my day off since that’s the only time I’ll fully be able to concentrate. 😂

If I’m ever stuck, I’m deffo going to come running to you. 😂💛

Hoping to give an update by next week. Will definitely tag you. Thanks for the love. ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

First of all thanku so much for tagging me..❤ And Omg this is one of the best AnuGun chapter I've ever read! 😍 How GG wanted to do something special only for her Chant Chashmish. And her n Bua's moment was so cute. 😆 And boom AnuGun came ready for each other. Haye my babies. But humare chant chashmish ne apni ghabrahat mein garbar kar diya but hurting his Gungun. 🥺 Aaj toh Bua badi kaam aayi. Rest of the days its GC n gang who becomes cupid BTW AnuGun but today that role was played by Garima bua. 😊 Anu had already realized what blunder he did. 🥴 Chalo jo bhi ho acche k liye hota hai. Isi bahane he confessed to her that he have started liking her. Aur AnuGun moment ka toh kya hi kehna? ❤❤❤❤ My babies r already adorable n u made them more cute n adorable with your beautiful words threaded in their lovely moments. 😍😍😍 Anu was way too surprised with his Papa ki Pari today. 😉🤭 Can't wait for Gungun to confess her liking for Anu too. 🤭 And I'm way too excited for AnuGun's dance in the next chapter, hehe! 🤪🥳 Maybe its Gungun's turn to get surprised that her Anu isn't the uncle type she thinks n can dance really well, who knows? 😉


You’re welcome. Thank you for commenting. 💛

Yes!! On usual days it’s Golu Chachu and Gang, but in a way I felt like Bua and Dr. Riddhesh also ship them, from their reaction when Anubhav visited Gungun, so thought to change things up. 😂

Ahh! Yess!! Getting Gungun to confess is something I’m working on. Don’t want to just let her confess for the sake of it. 😂

I want her feelings to be conveyed in natural way, so this next update will probably take awhile.
I can’t imagine our Anu dancing, so for Gungun it would be the furthers thing from reality. 😆
Sending you lots of love. ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Oh okay I forgot to add that she was already surprised with her Mr. Old Lucknow kissing on her cheek. 😆 Maybe she will get more surprise package on her bachelorrete? 😋

Haha! Maybe she will get a surprise. Maybe her Chant Chashmish is more romantic than she thinks. 😉

We’ll just have to wait and see. 😂💛

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