Arylie FF: Second Chances - IMPORTANT NOTE - Page 13

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mltr16


Mahi!!! Tere liye sirf, Destiny made a comeback and added a line at the end. Check it out, girl!!

Thank you behena 🤗


I love mommy destiny. The way she taunts that man 🤭 well now I'm excited what that clause could be?

Mr gill add a new clause that miss mishra will live inside my pocket

The only safe place for her. And in this way he would also stay tension free! Otherwise bande ka pehle din hi yeh haal hei.

He already feel this protective towards her pregnancy ke wakt kya karega! Oh my god delivery par kya karega! He gonna faint!

Mr.gill add new clause she will carry the baby but i will deliver it. 😂😂😂😂


Iske clause khatam nahi honge I'm telling you. Clause = Cares of Khamba singh rathore for imaliya.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Namaskaram. Today I will post two updates just because I am so sadiyal bored!


So 5 is up now and 6 will be up in a couple of hours. Enjoy behens, double dhamaka after all the bombs from atif and the EDT wars. ❤️❤️❤️


Chapter 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/24410

Chapter 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/24615


Pooja, don't yell at me. This EDT kaand, Poojaben. I rest my case. 🙈🙈🙈🙈

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mltr16

Namaskaram. Today I will post two updates just because I am so sadiyal bored!


So 5 is up now and 6 will be up in a couple of hours. Enjoy behens, double dhamaka after all the bombs from atif and the EDT wars. ❤️❤️❤️


Chapter 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/24410

Chapter 6: Coming soon

Thank god you are sadiyal bored!🧿🙏🏻

Aaise hi bore hote rahiye!

Aur ek din me do treat dete rahiye!yesss🥳🥳🥳

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mltr16

Namaskaram. Today I will post two updates just because I am so sadiyal bored!


So 5 is up now and 6 will be up in a couple of hours. Enjoy behens, double dhamaka after all the bombs from atif and the EDT wars. ❤️❤️❤️


Chapter 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/24410

Chapter 6: Coming soon

Adaab 🙏🏼

Tab to tereko bar bar sadiyal bore bana na parega

Taki hume aise dhamake milte rahey


@red :- is note ko dekhke warning khane ka dard bhi kaam ho gaya 😆😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mahiaana

Adaab 🙏🏼

Tab to tereko bar bar sadiyal bore bana na parega

Taki hume aise dhamake milte rahey


@red :- is note ko dekhke warning khane ka dard bhi kaam ho gaya 😆😆


You and me in same boat behen. Here I am the quiet one, hardly say anything harsh to anyone. Abbb, chalo koi nai, aaj stories ka jaam uthate hain!! 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mltr16

Namaskaram. Today I will post two updates just because I am so sadiyal bored!


So 5 is up now and 6 will be up in a couple of hours. Enjoy behens, double dhamaka after all the bombs from atif and the EDT wars. ❤️❤️❤️


Chapter 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/24410

Chapter 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/24615


Pooja, don't yell at me. This EDT kaand, Poojaben. I rest my case. 🙈🙈🙈🙈


Tune dard pe jaise malham laga diya. Daant khaane ka gham kam hoga ab.


Aise hi nahi ban gayi tu doctor M.


Be back after reading ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

chapter 5


You write about little children so well! I love Cheeni. And yes, girl. You go play that basketball. Loved that! (is baby boy around 5? Age ke liye ekdum perfect inspo)


I laughed at how obvious the Rathore ladies were being and Aryan stringing them along perfectly haha. Rascal! Baap aisa hai toh beta/beti kaise honge


Aditya. Sigh. I hate his family already but I understand his need to remain in the closet. Being of a certain sexual orientation isn't a choice, but being a decent human? Now he's lost that already.


chapter 6


Not gonna lie, my eyes bugged out when I saw you posted twice. And then there was a fervent prayer to give you all the good Aryan dreams for the rest of the week so you can hit us with stories over and over again. Jai Sita Maiyya.


Dr.Verma is going to be a favorite when she comes up. She is so wonderfully crafted. The bedside manners, the gentleness, the way she explains things to Imlie. That's basically you as a doctor, no? Every detail regarding the treatment and the process was so very needed. Surrogacy in and of itself is complicated on the medical side, and to know what Imlie's body will be going through adds another layer of heartbreak.


And you know this but I'm going to say it again. My heart is with Imlie. It breaks knowing what she feels is such a real fear. She's trapped in these circumstances and she is only JUST starting to understand the impact of the sacrifices she'll be making. First pregnancies, first baby, first everything that any woman rightfully would consider is a given. Knowing that she will eventually have a happy future with Aryan brings me some comfort but her path there is long.


The four girlies together are friendship goals. So darn sweet.


That scene with the chan chan chan. OH MY LORD. I had visions of it in my head as I pictured Aryan's ears perking up to the sound. And I LAUGHED when the twin destiny came on hahaha. Yes baby, popcorn and wine. Sounds pretty perfect.

Edited by egle - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: egle

chapter 5


You write about little children so well! I love Cheeni. And yes, girl. You go play that basketball. Loved that! (is baby boy around 5? Age ke liye ekdum perfect inspo)


I laughed at how obvious the Rathore ladies were being and Aryan stringing them along perfectly haha. Rascal! Baap aisa hai toh beta/beti kaise honge


Aditya. Sigh. I hate his family already but I understand his need to remain in the closet. Being of a certain sexual orientation isn't a choice, but being a decent human? Now he's lost that already.


chapter 6


Not gonna lie, my eyes bugged out when I saw you posted twice. And then there was a fervent prayer to give you all the good Aryan dreams for the rest of the week so you can hit us with stories over and over again. Jai Sita Maiyya.


Dr.Verma is going to be a favorite when she comes up. She is so wonderfully crafted. The bedside manners, the gentleness, the way she explains things to Imlie. That's basically you as a doctor, no? Every detail regarding the treatment and the process was so very needed. Surrogacy in and of itself is complicated on the medical side, and to know what Imlie's body will be going through adds another layer of heartbreak.


And you know this but I'm going to say it again. My heart is with Imlie. It breaks knowing what she feels is such a real fear. She's trapped in these circumstances and she is only JUST starting to understand the impact of the sacrifices she'll be making. First pregnancies, first baby, first everything that any woman rightfully would consider is a given. Knowing that she will eventually have a happy future with Aryan brings me some comfort but her path there is long.


The four girlies together are friendship goals. So darn sweet.


That scene with the chan chan chan. OH MY LORD. I had visions of it in my head as I pictured Aryan's ears perking up to the sound. And I LAUGHED when the twin destiny came on hahaha. Yes baby, popcorn and wine. Sounds pretty perfect.



You analyzed the chapters so well. Pura nibandh likh daala. Shukriya behen. Perks to posting two chapters? TOH mein har hafte do daal dun! 🤣🤣

You know Pooja caught it too, but I was totally thinking of the Cham Cham scene from the show as I write the chan, chan, chan bit....🤣🤣 A tribute to the makers for giving us that awesome scene back when.

The four girls do remind me of my hostel days in med school, where you slogged over books together, endless gupshup over chai and snacks about classmates, professors, who got ragged that day, which professor ripped who a new one, sometimes we were the recipienta of said phadugiri 🤣🤣 and of course, boys, who is seeing who, who broke up with who?, Who is hot who is not and who is rakhi material, 😜😜 Movies, music, more food....college festivals....Kya din the and I got to do it twice in my life, India and in the US samjho living them all over with Imlie and her gal pals.

Thanks for the beautiful summary 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

All I can envision right now is her walking in and him just looking at her haaayeeee!!


you make Aryan look like such a good chachu/mamu. Like seriously I fall in love with how he is with kids. I can’t wait to imagine him with a baby. (Way into the Future but will we get to see that?)


The rollercoaster of emotions imlie is going thru. My heart hurts for her becuz she’s doing this for her family. No girl would be able to do this without breaking slowly. But she’ll overcome. Ugh M this was so good. I saw two chapters and got so happy today 😭😭

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Juwii29

All I can envision right now is her walking in and him just looking at her haaayeeee!!


you make Aryan look like such a good chachu/mamu. Like seriously I fall in love with how he is with kids. I can’t wait to imagine him with a baby. (Way into the Future but will we get to see that?)


The rollercoaster of emotions imlie is going thru. My heart hurts for her becuz she’s doing this for her family. No girl would be able to do this without breaking slowly. But she’ll overcome. Ugh M this was so good. I saw two chapters and got so happy today 😭😭


Oh he is going to be a good dad, just like she is going to be the sweetest mom. But this whole pregnancy is going to be a rollercoaster of the emotional sort, behen being hormonal and all 🤣🤣

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