A Shivi FF |Maami ki Behen ki Beti |- LAST CHAPTER pg 54- 23/02/202 - Page 35

Awesome! Loved it! ❤️

Awesome ❤❤❤

Love the whole story 😍❤

Wowww ❤️

Beautiful is the only word i can say.

The confession was so well written.

" Mai tujhse pyaar karta hu. Woh meri problem hai dobi.teri nahi "

This is shiva pandya. The guy who loves selflessly and expects nothing in return. When you truly love someone, you don't expect them to love you with the same intensity. All you want is to see a smile on their face.this is the kind of love i adore and respect, though I believe it's one of the most difficult form of love and that's what makes it so special.

Raavi. The girl has no strength left to love. She is scared but also guilty. She has had her heart broken once and is apprehensive. I understand her, but i am sure shiva's love and devotion would drive away her fear bit by bit and fill her heart with love.

I love your dhara.infact every character of your story.you have captured the core of the characters so aptly.

Honestly, I’m glad that Raavi and Shiva reacted in the way they did. I’m so happy that Shiva understands that Raavi owes him nothing! Humara Shiva sachi mein heera hai yaar :) also, Raavi is so sweet, she doesn’t want Shiva to be broken like her but she cannot give him love for now because she herself is broken. So glad you chose to depict Shiva and Raavi like this!

side note: I literally jumped and smiled so much when I saw that you updated the story 🤪

You know what this is a very beautiful chapter because it's actually very tough to love someone else when you have loved one person through out your life and I'm happy that Raavi told Shiva that she doesn't love him now, I'm happy that she is choosing herself because before loving anyone else she need to go through the path of loving herself.

And Shiva, he is such a selfless person (in your story not in PS). All through the story he is thinking about Raavi, I'm all hearts for this story

This version Shiva takes a lot of courage to be like this.

Whatever it is, I dont find Dev the wisest of all here, spineless yes!

You are shaping this beautifully ❣️❣️

Update soon........

Yesssss!! So beautiful!! You vision and story telling are so very beautiful! Raavi is in no headspace wherein she can understand her heart, which probably she will have to wait a little more to trust again. Her head and heart are so messed up, just like her room!!! She is just betrayed by some of her closest people unintentionally and understanding or rather trying to understand that the her love, which was her whole world was nothing but a big fat lie. She was living a lie. At this point she will never be able to reciprocate Shiva's pure love and she cares for Shiva enough to be honest about it and acknowledge that he did deserve the pain of one sided love.

Shiva is just so pure, he understands that you can never hold on to love, it either stays with you or doesn't. If it is yours it will come to you no matter what.

He loves Raavi enough to care for her, acknowledge her pain, her one sided love and the venerable state that she is in. He only wishes that the girl he loves should live life and as enchanting and magical as Raavi is, She deserved happiness for herself.

Your writing is so very realistic in terms of understanding and portraying what you think a person would do and not do in a situation. That is really a great and awesome. To be able to be true to the characters you have created. Letting them be flawed and selfless enough to make them go through the situation not unscathed. Marks of a true writer.

Thanks again, this story is a treat to read. And absolute thanks for not making us wait long for the updates.

Can I just fire show's writers and appoint you in their place. How beautiful this story looks with my imaginations and visualisations only.... Thinking about how marvellously this plot can be portrayed by concerned actors just gives me goosebumps.

Roch, you were right about the realistic plot... This is how normal human beings function in real life scenario.

Shiva's state after confessing was so aptly described.. He was feeling light after sharing his heart and rightly so. His love is not demanding, its giving and that adds so much beauty to his feelings. His mera pyaar meri problem hai teri nahi... Main dekh lunga.. This shiva is goals❤️

Raaavi... My girl... Just a week went by and she has faced a heartbreak and a proposal....She definitely is not in a condition to think about love again...rightly so.Her feelings were flown so naturally and were so heartfelt that one cant help but tear up at her condition. Her regret, her pain of not being able to give shiva her love.. Feeling remorseful...for she does not shiva to have same fate as hers... Everything just establishes that she has a heart that is pure and khara sona.

I love your portrayal of each and every character.. Every one is sane here.

Loved it ❤️

That is my shiva a boy with selfless love ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Pyaar main karta hu raavi voh meri problem hai teri nahi dobi❤️❤️❤️❤️

This line was awesome

Waiting for next update 💕

Wonderful ff ❤️❤️❤️