A Shivi FF |Maami ki Behen ki Beti |- LAST CHAPTER pg 54- 23/02/202 - Page 14

It was reallly a beautiful chapter💗💗

Both of them know more about eachother than themselves😭😭😭this unnamed relation has whole of my heart❤❤💖

The way u beautifully intertwin their past and present is so magical 💞

The way raavi was convincing herself more about her firstkiss yess she always used to be in dilemma or rather uncertain since childhood about her choices

Lastly bring the spark let whole somnath burn and witness their shiddat wala pyaar ☺️❤️

Ohh this chapter was ... something else .. nahin matlab I was totally following this fic but I chapter ke baad wait karna mushkil ho jayega ☺️❤️

Adored the chapter!!

They know each other, understand and have expectations of that person, but this new versions seem to leave them baffled.

The interactions of their younger versions...

Looking forward to the next one!! ❤️

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WHAT. HOW. BEAUTIFUL. WHY. ❤️

The way each chapter has a bachpan ka connection, and how their feelings are developing, while simultaneously fighting their inner demons is so 😭💕

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WHAT. HOW. BEAUTIFUL. WHY. ❤️

The way each chapter has a bachpan ka connection, and how their feelings are developing, while simultaneously fighting their inner demons is so 😭💕

I am so overwhelmed right now.

So immensely overwhelmed.

The first half was spectacular. With all the emotions that these words...all of them hit my heart's crevices so wonderfully. I had to pause in between to bring my breathing back on track.

The way Raavi said "Kuch samaj nahi aaraha..." and This is what my life is right now...a mess. I don't think I could have related to anything else with such passion. I saw myself there...sitting exhausted on the bed around the clutter and wishing to move away from all of it only to be stuck in an indefinite loop.

The build-up to the almost kiss was something I could LEARN as a writer myself. Truly, you've got to give me tips. The intensity in that was mad. I've always struggled there...I mean yeah...a lot.

The memory just elevated everything to another heights. Above the obvious attraction by Shiva and 'Dobi-ness' of Raavi the 'Tere Sivaa aur hai ki kon mera...' & 'Ab jo hai tu hi hai...' was the thing for me. So lonely, so freaking alone and so starved that she'd latch onto anything, be it anyone or any notion or idea. She's deprived of affection in her own way...starving people would eat up anything.

I missed the double update yesterday. Lurked around here a little extra for it. Lol. Not requesting or anything just telling that I love this story.

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Oh this was soo deep yet subtle😭💖

Please tag me in next updates

The only word I have for this one is beautiful

She should be backing off, or stopping him, or anything but for now, this seemed nicer. She shut her eyes, in pure reflex, letting her heart to just go with the flow, this was nice.

This was nice, Shiva thought, forgetting all sort of boundaries, this was nice

This had me completely

And just when I thought they might kiss we got another glimpse of their early years. ❤️

Now I am waiting for that something to come out loud enough for both of them to understand what they are for each other.❤️

Beautiful as usual ❤️

This story will be in my re-reading list 👏

OFFFOOOO>>>>> THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND HOWWW !!

I JST LOVE THISSS.

THE WAY YOU ARE SHOWING THE SHADES OF THEM AND CONNECTING IT WITH CHOTU SHIVII !!

MERA DIL FUTTT JAYEGAA❤️