Shaleen - Kaveri {KarMi} •AT #11• |Tum ho saath mere ✨❤️| - Page 49

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Posted: 4 years ago

Its lovely 👍

U managed to moisten my eyes...😪

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Bodhianveshika

Well done! Way to go, girl!

Thanks 😊😊😊.

Romance nahi likha jaata mujhse . Cause jo kuch likhti hun kuch feel hi nahi hota.😂😂😂 But socha try kar lun ek baar .

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: FarSay

Its lovely 👍

U managed to moisten my eyes...😪

Thanks😊😊😊.

Hope it was ok.😂

Mujha Laaga maar padegi monami ko karvane ka liya.😂😂😂

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Not_James_bond

Thanks 😊😊😊.

Romance nahi likha jaata mujhse . Cause jo kuch likhti hun kuch feel hi nahi hota.😂😂😂 But socha try kar lun ek baar .


And you did a fab job!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Not_James_bond

Thanks😊😊😊.

Hope it was ok.😂

Mujha Laaga maar padegi monami ko karvane ka liya.😂😂😂

It was beautiful ❤️

Well written 👏🏻

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Posted: 4 years ago

Ab isse acha kya hi hoga


Next ki umeed kab kar skte hai😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

It was fab 💗

Hahah... in fanfic kuch b karlo 😉...bt dont kill her in d show...wont be able to see dat...

Imagining 1 scene of ur OS was ordy heavy 😓

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Posted: 4 years ago

Exactly, yeh dil maange more! You should write more often.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Bodhianveshika

Exactly, yeh dil maange more! You should write more often.

Will surely write bas comedy likhungi .😂😂😂

Romance ka liya na jaane kitna bollywood movies ka plot yaad karne padta hain.😂😂😂

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Not_James_bond

Okay so here goes the OS I promised.😂😂😂 Bhai ek hi likhungi yeh Romance nahi hota mujhse.im better of with comedy.

Acha laage toh baata dena naa laage toh koi na ab nahi Laaga acha toh koi kya hi kar sakta hain.😂😂😂


Love beyond measures.......❤️❤️❤️


We must let her go karan it's been three years and there is no change in her condition. Keeping her on life support for any longer will just give her pain and misery.No.. no I can't , Karan choked as he tried to prevent his tears from spilling . Karan... Please no Papa he said gritting his teeth , he hurriedly got up and ran out of the cabin.

He felt weak in the stomach ,his vision began to blur ,his legs were giving up on him but he still ran down the corridor and headed up to the hospital terrace pushing back his worried friends Faizi and Sid.Karan Faizi called out but he payed no heed and ran past them. The moment he reached the terrace ,he collapsed as his knees beneath him buckled , he felt his bile rising, he tried to get a hold on himself but failed and when he could take it no more he let out a scream crying and howling like a wounded soul.

It was an unbearable sight ,it seemed that even the heavens pitied him crying looking at him in pain as they darkened with clouds and the lighting stroke. Whyyyyyyy? he shouted looking up at the sky in agony roaring and calling out to all the gods residing in heaven. Is this your way of getting back at me , is this your revenge for having never believed in your existence after I lost bhaiya. If it is so you could have ruined me ,why her she always believed in you , always prayed to you then why? You know what if you think you can snatch her away from me ,ur wrong I'll fight for her till my last breathe and burn down this whole world if I have to ,I'm not letting you win no not this time. If you don't want people to stop believing in you , you have to give her back ,you can't harm an innocent soul. He begged for her. A man of pride who never bowed before anyone even in the face of death , kneeled today with his head down. That is how deeply he loved her, so much that he surrendered to the almighty he had long stopped believing in.

Today he was a man defeated, on the verge of losing that one person who meant the world to him , for whom he could give up anything his own life if needed. He sat there crying for ages crying and whimpering hoping that if the gods did exist , they heard and mercied upon him giving him back his Monami. The light and the joy in his life who spread nothing but happiness in all the lives she entered. A soul so beautiful and pious that even the fairies up in the seventh heaven would feel envied for truly there was none like her .

As he sat there dejected and lifeless he felt a slight breeze on his cheek, it felt as if somebody had kissed his cheek to awaken him. As he opened his eyes he was astound to find himself standing in the same academy where they had both confessed their feelings, a place where they had created their own world ,enveloped in their unconditional love for one another away from the sight of the rest of the world.

This is where they had shared all their firsts , first time they had hesitantly held hands , first time that they had hugged , first time that their quivering but excited lips met , first time they had made love , he slightly smiled as all the best moments of his life flashed before his eyes.

He suddenly heard someone call out to him , he turned towards where the sound had come from ,to see her standing before him laughing as her eyes twinkled .

He couldn't believe what he was seeing, he rubbed his eyes to see if he was dreaming but no he wasn't she was really there .

Monami he slowly whispered as he couldn't fathom the sight he was seeing.

Oyy Mr khadoos shergill she giggled as she called out to him are you just going to stand there or are you going to come catch me .

He started running after her to catch her as she began running away from him laughing and teasing him as they ran through the corridors of the academy. He finally caught her and pulled her to himself . You love, troubling me don't you Rani Sahiba , you love seeing me worried for you. Do you even know how many deaths I died even at the thought of losing you . Papa said you weren't coming back but I knew you would for you know that ur khadoos Shergill is nothing without you . I'm not letting you get this time I've already lost bhaiya I'm not losing you .

Promise me you you'll always stay with me . Uve broken your promise once but not again, promise me he said.

Karan she said looked at him with all the love she had as her eyes glistened with tears . I never left you , I was always there it's just that you keep looking for me in the wrong place. I'm not on that hospital bed ,I'm in every tear that drops out of your eyes, in every laugh that escapes your mouth, every breathe that you take , in every heart beat of yours she said kissing his chest , I'm within you, in your veins, in your heart, your dreams , your aspirations , your determination to serve our nation, your prayers, your wishes, I am you. We are not different we are one.

Nobody can separate us not even the horizons after life, we are together till eternity . The only place I don't exist is in that physical body lying on the hospital bed.

It's painful lying there watching you mourn ,it hurts to see you hurting please let go of that body for I no longer exist in it. Stop holding onto what has already slipped out of your fists , let go learn to set the ones you love free, don't cage them as when you do that you are only limiting and binding yourself to the non existent.

Don't push me away karan. I wish to be the wind beneath your wings and not the shackles that hold you back. Please my love set me free for I'm within you. As she said she pulled him in for a kiss, It was blissful to be able to feel her again.He closed his eyes to be able to feel the essence of that very moment. After what seemed like ions they broke apart he felt her whispering good by khadoos Shergill . He slowly opened his eyes only to realise and look around and see the same old hospital terrace .He shook his head his head to realise he had actually been dreaming .

He stood up and brushed himself ,wiped away his tears and headed down towards Dr Mahajan's cabin to do what was needed. To set his love free only to reunite for eternity. As their love was truly beyond measures.❤️❤️❤️🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗


The End..........


Bhai yeh romance naa hoga humse promise kiya tha iss liya likh diya.


Rula do bas tum.😢💔

Bittersweet ending..but next needs to be a happy one..😁

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