A Shivi FF |Maami ki Behen ki Beti |- LAST CHAPTER pg 54- 23/02/202 - Page 11

Part 6 is so meaningful, they can definitely add this in serial☺️

Oh my freaking gosh I had tears just reading this part! So emotional, damn it I am loving this 😭❤️

WoW😍😍😍....2 updatessss🥳

Iam soooooo happy🥰

Just addicited to this series....love this❤️

The flashbackksss are sooo endearing and impactful👍🏼

I loved how Shiva was affected by Raavi's decision and he was the one she saw in her head♥️ Their conversation was soooo meaningful and beautiful🔥

You are creating a beautiful fairy tale for ShiVi and Iam already obsessed with the tale

Loved it🤗

I am speechless 😶. Oh my god such a beautiful description you gave. I really got goosebumps yr😳.

Raavi ka dukh dekha nhi jata😢

Raavi saw shiva not dev that mean she always loved shiva in her whole life but didn't knew herself 😍

Oh my god...what is thiss !!!!☺️

This is sooo amazing and the bond shivi shares is sooo pureee and the connection you are making between childhood shivi and adult shivi is just fabulous👏👏

I wish soooo much to watch all these scenes in the show,I know it is impossible😒

This is such a strong storyline portraying their bond of hatred and love with so much depth....soo pyaaraa

Thank you thank you soo much for writing this..keep writing this...this gives so much sukun❤️❤️

SUCHH A BEAUTIFUL CHAPTERRR..!!!

I MEANNN I DON'T HVE WORDSSS TO SAYY...IT WAS INCREDIBLE..

I M LITERALLY EMO RN..I M YOUR JABRA FAN NOW.❤️

tag me whenever you update please

This was a heartbreaking chapter to read, made the characyers emotional- Dhara, Prafulla and Anita

Shiva’s nightmare about Raavi, Raavi’s suicide attempt, both going through worst time of their lives.

Even the bond between Shiva- Dhara and Mami- Raavi- Anita are depicted much better than the show,

These are the kind is scenes and situations that bring out a real depth in characters. Kudos to you for writing this way.
Mami, finally thankful to Shiva that he saved Raavi on wedding night.
Finally Raavi sees Shiva instead of Dev when she thought was about to die and not able to comprehend what it meant to her. Hope Anita is able to help her.

No words of appreciation is enough for the childhood memories and scenes and this time it is from Raavi’s POV😍

I have been in this forum for 10 months, read several FFs, SS, OS, TS, this one easily is in the top 5 of my favorite ones,

You literally made me cry! This is the first time I have cried while reading fanfiction. I can't explain how beautiful your writing style is. Everything you write touches my heart. The scenes are so well-written that I can vividly imagine everything! Love this so so sooooooooo much!!!

God!! The sheer pain in this chapter!! 💔

Shiva's nightmares about Raavi dying, and his pain that just pours out.

Raavi's admission of wanting to die, the feeling when she thought she was actually dying, and her eventual confusion about Shiva.

One word - heartbreaking.

The way Young Shiva & Raavi interact with their older versions, sigh! (I wish the makers had used this.)

Looking forward to the next one!! ❤️

P.s. Thank you for the really quick updates!!

P.p.s Could you include the page no. of the new update in the title the next time? It'll be easier to find for the lazy ones like me. 😆

🤩🤩OMG…this chapter is so emotional, just heartbreaking beautiful…Shiva nightmares💔❤️‍🩹, and Raavi’s conversation with little/younger Shiva🥰🥰🥰..can’t wait for your next update….totally loving this story 💕💕