A Shivi FF |Maami ki Behen ki Beti |- LAST CHAPTER pg 54- 23/02/202 - Page 6

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Thank you for all the sweet comments on the previous chapter and hope that you like this one as well 🤗

Loved this update😘🥰😍

Literally she is lost that raavi which was happy true to herself is lost.......

Yes she is lost that carefree, happy, Somnath ki sabse sundar ladki is lost😒

Their flashback though❤️

Loved it ❤️

Only raavi can mess with his mind be it choti raavi or badi raavi 💙

Atleast shiva will surely realise his feeling soon 😆

I loved family part it was fun and light hearted💞

And lastly yes raavi ki smile ko nazar lag gyi hai 💔but shiva gonna bhi her nazar repellant forever💖

This is one of the best SSs i have read😍

Shiva is just

The way he is remembering little things of their childhood is♥️

The kesar-pista scene made me soo happy🥰

I can already see him falling passionately and ardently in love with Raavi🔥☺️...and i want Raavi to do the same❤️

Pls pls pls update REALLYYYTT FAST🙈🙂 Waiting eagerly🤗

THUS STORY IS SO BEAUTIFUL...... 😭😭❤️❤️

First things first, welcome to IF!!!!

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I read all your chaps in one go...

First chapter, absolutely loved your idea of portraying both povs and connecting it so well and beautifully with a bachpan parallel,oh Bhai dil mein kuch kuch hone laga mere padhte time pe.😭💕

Second chapter, indeed amazing,the gujarati flavors you're adding is winning my heart,being a gujju it breaks my heart when show forgets to show that typicality of Gujarati lehkas and mentions,but it's so amazing the way you put things!

Third,oh my heart,poor one, the way you keep adding bachpan reminisces are just out of the world, undoubtedly amazing and alluring....also....that chapli got my rolling on floor, i can imagine shiva calling raavi a chapli champa😭😂💕,it's so soo them na?!

And that little little things which you are balancing,apt and perfect!!!

Shiva and mami scenes,always a laughter riot and especially in ffs, ohgod this last update had me laughing like a maniac,loved the way you've been detailing on Raavi's pov specially and even Shiva's!!!

Looking forward to read this story,it's too intriguing!!!

Please tag me in upcoming.thank you💕

I like shiva's cares for ravi🙂

AHAAAANNN !!!!!❤️

I READ ALL THE CHAPTERSS IN ALL GO AND TRUST ME THEY ALL AREEE FREAKING AMAZINGGGG AND BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN..DIL LE LIYA POORA MERA.

THE WAY YOU PUT DOWN EVERYTHING AND CONNECT IT WITH CHOTUUU SHIVIII, ISSHHHHH MY HEART BOOM BOOM BOOMM !!!❤️

Ah!! Childhood Shiva-Raavi...

Loved it!! ❤️