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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

No no,new thread for this story only

Arey, itne threads banwaoge, main idhar udhar ghum jaogi sahi thread tak pahunchte pahunchte.

Par chalo, bola hai toh banaati hoon. I have another idea, jahan par Karan remembers Param, toh maybe a "Brotherly Love" waala OS type of thread? How's that?

Edited by NoeticLife - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

Arey, itne threads banwaoge, main idhar udhar ghum jaogi sahi thread tak pahunchte pahunchte.

Par chalo, bola hai toh banaati hoon. I have another idea, jahan par Karan remembers Param, toh maybe a "Brotherly Love" waala OS type of thread? How's that?

Arre behen.. bana do, forum activity badhti hai😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

Arre behen.. bana do, forum activity badhti hai😆

Main toh teen mein hi ghum gayi hoon, par chalo... keh rahi ho, toh banaati hoon.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya1994

Everyone is telling so socha main bhi bata du😆

1. Watch a show for atleast 3-5 episodes as trial.

2. Watching it after reading WU or checking twitter or other platforms to know what happened in episode.

3. Watch as a regular viewer.

4. Watch in Fast Forward mode, skipping scenes in which I am not interested.

5. Watching on and off.

6. Stop watching only reading updates or checking SM platforms.

7. Completely stop watching, not all interested to know what is happening there.


Crossed all the stages and currently on 7th stage.

😆 so you aren't less 😆 those steps I mentioned after selection procedure😆


@bold😭

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: FarSay

Everyones bubble burst !! 😅

Kya se kya go gaya dekhte dekhte 😜...

No wonder dey had an advance valentine cz writers k dimag mein yeh sab gobar chal raha tha 😅

I knew this is coming ..smiley36


I'm happy smiley40for The people who wanted to see Third angle /jealous Karan smiley36 ..


actually it was their Demand & in the Process we got Half baked Track smiley44..


I'm not going to Compare it With Kundan track but purpose of Aneesh Track isn't Clear ..Dr. Mahajan as we know and can Assumed in advance that he'll be biggest obstacle ..

I'm yet to understand importance of Aneesh here ,

if he is Monami's Secret Lover/psycho lover then his madness looks sooooo funny .

if he is here for Some entertainment then unfortunately neither he is entertaining viewers like me nor adding any funny elements ..

if he is here as Dr. Mahajan Student cum informer then His Teacher will feel proud to Have such jerk who don't know how to respect a women ,who don't know value of friendship & who don't know the weight of Doctor's Oath Nor duty of A Doctor


And for CV/PH who Sold/mortgage their Brain For Function/party ,only TRP can Put/bring back their brain in right direction..


Can happily skip Few more Episode or 🤔 week.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: NoeticLife

"Janaab", Faizi pounded on the door, the academy in mourning silence around him. "Karan!"

"Faizi, mera baat karne ka bilkul mood nahi hai", he snapped back. "Chala jaa."

Karan stared at the picture, silent tears tracing down his face. He wiped them angrily, fed up of the seemingly endless tears.

'Karan, yeh tere bhai Param ki request nahi hai.'

'Kuch bhi ho jaaye, tu waapas nahi aayega, Karan.'

'Nahi, nahi, nahi! Yeh nahi ho sakta! Karan, tu... tu toh tha uske saath. Param ko kuch nahi hua, na? Tu jhooth bol raha hai, na? Mazaak hai, na, yeh? Bol, na, Karan!'

He snarled in frustration, hitting the desk harshly.

'Bhaiya! Main aapse better solider banooga! Dekh lena.'
'Shoes ke laces toh baandna seekh le pehle, gadhe.'
He looked at his untied laces, before looking up at his older brother, who was combing his hair, both in school uniform. He lifted his legs, staring at him hopefully. 'Ek aur baar bataana, kaise baandhte hain.'
He sighed, shaking his head. He knelt down, patiently teaching him how to tie his shoes, for the hundredth time.

Sobs racked his body and he slid to the ground, his chest tightening uncomfortably. A scream bubbled in his throat, and he pulled at his hair. It hurt. It hurt so much!

"Bhaiya", he sobbed. He stared at the picture of the two of them, vision blurring from the tears. "Bhaiya, I am sorry. Main aapko bacha nahi paaya. Aap better soldier ho, please waapas aa jao. I promise, main aapki har baat maanooga. I promise. Please waapas aa jao. Main aapke bina nahi reh sakta."

A knock sounded on the door. "Karan", Faizi called.

"Jaa, na, Faizi!" He screamed, clutching the nearest thing which happened to be a paperweight, throwing it across the room at the door. It clanked harshly, a dent appearing on the frame, before it fell to the ground, shattering into pieces.

He tilted his head back, resting it on the wall, as sobs racked his body. His chest tightened uncomfortably, a painful lump in his throat, and he screamed. The pain didn't ease. He screamed again, screaming till he couldn't hear his own voice, silent sobs taking over them.

'Tum log andar kaise phase?' Colonel Batra asked.
'They're drunk', a doctor declared, finishing checking over them.
'Yeh nashe mein the, galti se border cross liya', one's father said. Karan's fists clenched. 'Inko punishment mil gayi hai. Le dekar baat khatam karte hain?'
His temper broke, and he crossed the room, clutching his collar and slamming him into a wall. 'Inki wajah se mera bhai shaheed ho gaya hai.'
'We're sorry, but tum logon ke liye toh yeh honor ki baat hai, na?' One of them asked. 'Humne honor dilaa diya tumhe.' He chuckled.
Karan wrapped his hand around his throat, snarling as his fists found him over and over again. Arms pulled him back, and he screamed in his face, fighting against them. 'Tumhaari wajah se mera bhai mar gaya, and tumhe farak hi nahi padta', he screamed.
'Karan! Karan!' A voice screamed.
'Shergill', Colonel Batra said, standing in front of them. 'Main samajhta hoon tumhaari feelings, par this is not the solution.'
'Iss baat ka koi solution hai hi nahi!' He screamed. 'My brother's dead, aur sab inki galti hai. You selfish brats!'

Karan's jaw clenched. "Tum logon ki wajah se mere bhaiya shaheed ho gaye. Zindagi mein sab kuch itni asaani se mila hai ki kisi ki jaan tak ki parwaah nahi. Ameerzaade.'

The door burst open, and his jaw clenched in irritation as he saw Faizi.

"Faizi, yaar, samajh nahi aata tujhe", he said, his voice hoarse from all the screaming. "Akela chodh de mujhe!"

"Haath dekho tum apna", he snapped back. He lifted it, and Karan stared at the blood dripping down his palm. Blood was on the floor around him, and it was then, he realized he had been hitting it in anger.

He deserved it. He couldn't save his brother. He deserved it. He deserved it!

"Deserve karta hoon main yeh", he said, ripping his hand away from his grip. His throat burned with exertion, stinging and he welcomed the pain. "Bhaiya ko main nahi bacha paaya."

"Tumhaari galti nahi hai, Karan", Faizi said. "Tumhaari koi galti nahi hai. Bina galti ke khud ko sazaa mat do."

"Sazaa toh mil chuki hai. Bhaiya... Faizi, wo mujhe hamesha ke liye chhod kar chale gaye", he sobbed, throwing himself in his arms, and his best friend wrapped his arms around him, rubbing his back. "Wo hamesha ke liye chale gaye. Bhaiya chale gaye. Wo mujhe chhodkar chale gaye."

He was dead.

He was gone. Forever.

And he had to live the rest of his life without him.


😭😭😭 Noe 🤗

Karan's gulit , hatred to Those Selfish brat 💔

Faizi's concern❤️ , Param -Karan FB 😭

I wish u r in CV team 👏👏

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: kavya1994

Start se hi main introducing Kundan for JuJu and third angle for KarMi ke favour mein nahi thi, so bahut kam chances the ki main iss parallel track ko like karti.

As expected they failed to execute parallel story for both couples in a proper way, atleast for me. Initially I liked how they introduced Kundan but then sab kachra kar diya show makers ne

aur dusre side ke baare mein kya hi bolu, that 3rd angle is just there to drag the story, nothing else.

@bold even I wasn't ..

@ italic

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Sana_Jannat


😭😭😭 Noe 🤗

Karan's gulit , hatred to Those Selfish brat 💔

Faizi's concern❤️ , Param -Karan FB 😭

I wish u r in CV team 👏👏

Thank you!

@bold- Aaj kuch zyaada hi logon ne yeh bol diya hai. Main toh ab apply karne ka hi sochne lagi hoon 😂😂

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Posted: 4 years ago

I neva enjoy third angle cz most of d time itv turns dem negative... i mean y... cant third angles have brains be sensible n only act as catalyst to bring d leads closer or be as a genuine 2nd option for the lead...

Itv needs to get above dis ema 3rd angles till den we will have such cliches only...

Aneesh only purpose was to delay karans confession...its over...

Now dey jus using him to bring small rifts btwn d couple bt practically u dont need to have a 3rd person to do so...in a relationship der r tons of ways to bring dem out bt ITV hasnt learnt yet...

So we'll be served dis only till den 😁

I find zdmn betr den oder shows on itv for obvious reasons (ema saas bahu sister rivalry bas yahi hai)...

I need some tp some entertainment so watching...d day i dont get il move on 😉

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: iAmSphere

Baat shaadi tak pahuch hi gai, ab kya yeh dulhe ki costume mein pitega

https://www.instagram.com/p/CZuLcrfPu2H/?utm_medium=copy_link

wow! Can I expect dulhe beating by Dulhan & her Team 🤞

I mean SAF beating Kundan's team for hurting/kidnapping Sid & illegal activities

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