FF#1: A love to kill - Page 4

Chapter-4

Pakhi was overseeing the preparations for Mehendi ceremony. She looked at the watch to see the time and saw Agastya's reflection in the watch glass instead. Still she pretended as if she hadn't seen him. She saw that the flower wreath in the door was starting to sag a bit. She brought a wobbly stool to stand upon to fix the wreath again. She knew well the stool was not balanced to hold her and she'll fall. And that was what precisely she wanted for it would cause Agasthya to reveal himself and save her.

Pakhi stood on the stool and as expected, the stool wobbled and she fell down,. only to be held in Agastya's arms.

"Agasthya! Tum yahaan?" Pakhi faked being surprised.

"Kyon? You are surprised?" Agasthya smirked, "Tumne to vaise bhi mera reflection apni watch me dekh liya tha."

Pakhi didn't expect Agasthya to notice that. He was sharp. In fact, the sharpest of all men she had met.

"Vo main..."Mallika practiced one of her charms, "Main hamesha tere baare me hi sochti rehti hoon na Dodo to mujhe har jagah tu hi tu dikhta hai. Mujhe laga is baar bhi mere man ka vehem hi hoga." Pakhi bit her tongue and blushed innocently.

Pakhi tried to free herself from Agastya's hold but her locks of hair got stuck in Agastya's shirt button. Agasthya and Pakhi were so close that their lips were just centimetres apart and Pakhi could hear the fast heartbeats of Agasthya. The musk scent of Agasthya's perfume filled her nostrils. Agasthya caressed her hair. Mallika had become numb to male touch after so many years of her work but Agasthya...his touch always left her burning...with hate, with disgust and with a sick wanting. However she wanted this man to be reduced to dust, she couldn't help but being flattered when she could see this man desiring her to death. Despite not wanting, she was lost in Agastya's penetrating gaze. She hated how this man made her weak in knees but suddenly realising the power she holds over him, Pakhi brought her lips close to Agastya's chest and bit off his shirt button freeing her hair. Then she left Agasthya standing spellbound.

Paakhi...that woman...how couldn't she realise how deep and strong Agastya's love for her. How she couldn't see his torment? But today watching a flicker of desire in Pakhi's eyes for him filled him with great satisfaction. She would feel the same pull towards him. He will make her love him with the same intensity- he promised her, himself and the universe.

https://youtu.be/LOLwTra4HYg

Please tell me which pairing would you like to see more of in this FF: Agasthya-Mallika, Agasthya-Pakhi, Ishaan-Mallika or Ishaan-Pakhi. And please give your feedback.

Originally posted by: Autumn09

Please let me know of your feedback:

Chapter 2

"Ishaan ab to bata do tumne Paakhi ko kahaan kaid rakha h?" Mallika said tracing Ishaan's cheek with her index finger.

"Tumhe kaafi interest hai Paakhi ke baare me jaanne ke liye?" Ishan didn't answer her question.

"Bas curiosity thi," Mallika said, "Ajeeb baat hai jis Paakhi ke peeche Agasthya itna paagal hai vo dikhti kaisi hai use ye tak nahi pata?"

Ishaan sighed, "Chatroom par mile the dono. Asli naam tak nahi pata tha ek doosre ka me. Magar virtual pehchaano ke saath hi pyaar ho gaya. Trust buildup hone ke baad naam to reveal kiye magar without surnames. Magar dono nahi jaante the ki dono dikhte kaise hain. In fact they were both quite proud of the fact ki unka pyaar chehre ki sundarta ka mohtaaj nahi h."

"Paakhi aur Agasthya ka pyaar," Mallika felt her throat tightening.

Flashback:

It was a rare summer night five years ago when Mallika was sleeping in cramped quarters. She was woken by repeated ringing of her basic Nokia phone.

"Mehek Didi? Vo bhi itni raat ko?" Mallika muttered.

She picked up the phone, "Hello. Mehek Didi?"

"I'm sorry Minnie," a sobbing voice said from other side, "Teri behen tujhe us narak se nahi nikaal paayi."

"Didi. shaant ho jaao. Kya hua?" Mallika was getting more and more stressed.

"Vo Agasthya," Mehek said, "Papa ne kitna manaa kiya tha magar fir bhi maine zid karke usse shaadi kar li. Papa ko heart attack nahi aaya tha. Unki maut ke peeche Agasthya ka haath tha. Usne mujhse shaadi sirf Papa ki property hathiyaane ke liye ki thi. Vo to kisi Paakhi ko pyaar karta h- aisa pyaar jiski na koi had hai na koi daayra. Usi ke laayak banne ke liye usne mere saath ye jhoothi shaadi ka khel khela tha."

"Didi tum chinta mat karo," Mallika tried to think calmly, "Ham log police ke paas jayenge."

"Ab kucch nahi ho sakta pagli," Mehek bitterly laughed, "Sahi kehti thi buaji. Manhoos hoon main. Pehle ham dono ke mummy papa ko khaa gayi aur ab apne Papa ko bhi jinhone koi khoon ka rishtaa na hone ke baad bhi mujhe itna pyaar diya. Saari zindagi main apni chhoti behen ko dhoondhti rahi aur tu mujhe mili bhi to kis haal m...ab to main is laayak bhi nahi rahi ki tujhe is daldal se nikaal lo."

"Didi, kahaan ho tum?" Mallika started opening the door though she was still in her night suit and slippers, "Batao mujhe. Main abhi vahaan pahunchti hoon."

"Ab bahut der ho gayi h," Mehek wistfully said, "Agasthya ne mujhe is ghar aur uski zindagi dono se nikal jaane ke liye kaha h. Theek hai. Ab main kisi ko aur pareshaan nahi karoongi. Tu apna dhyaan rakhna Minnie."

And the sound of her sister's body falling down five floors still haunted Mallika day and night.

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A woman is tied with ropes with her eyes covered with a cloth. She's struggling to free herself of the ropes...no she's writing something on her arms in the form of rope marks. The name "Agasthya" is written on her bloodied arms and a smile plays on her lips.

"Chahe duniyaa jitna zor laga le, magar duniya ki koi taakat mujhe Agasthya ko haasil karne se nahi rok sakti. Hogi tumhari dushmani Agasthya se...magar meri mohabbat aur junoon ke saamne ek ret ke zarre ki tarah chhoti h tumhari nafrat." Then she croons- Ishq PE marjaavan, tu jo kahe vo karjaavan.

Again no words to describe the progress of the story.The suspense is slowly slowly being built up by you through the revenge theme.

Such story always excites the viewers and we are taken on an amazing thrill ride.

Please continue and conclude the same by adding more spice and flavour to this wonderful story.

Originally posted by: masked

Again no words to describe the progress of the story.The suspense is slowly slowly being built up by you through the revenge theme.

Such story always excites the viewers and we are taken on an amazing thrill ride.

Please continue and conclude the same by adding more spice and flavour to this wonderful story.

Thank you so much 💗💗💗💗. I've updated chapters 3 and 4 too :)

Originally posted by: Autumn09

Pakhi was overseeing the preparations for Mehendi ceremony. She looked at the watch to see the time and saw Agastya's reflection in the watch glass instead. Still she pretended as if she hadn't seen him. She saw that the flower wreath in the door was starting to sag a bit. She brought a wobbly stool to stand upon to fix the wreath again. She knew well the stool was not balanced to hold her and she'll fall. And that was what precisely she wanted for it would cause Agasthya to reveal himself and save her.

Pakhi stood on the stool and as expected, the stool wobbled and she fell down,. only to be held in Agastya's arms.

"Agasthya! Tum yahaan?" Pakhi faked being surprised.

"Kyon? You are surprised?" Agasthya smirked, "Tumne to vaise bhi mera reflection apni watch me dekh liya tha."

Pakhi didn't expect Agasthya to notice that. He was sharp. In fact, the sharpest of all men she had met.

"Vo main..."Mallika practiced one of her charms, "Main hamesha tere baare me hi sochti rehti hoon na Dodo to mujhe har jagah tu hi tu dikhta hai. Mujhe laga is baar bhi mere man ka vehem hi hoga." Pakhi bit her tongue and blushed innocently.

Pakhi tried to free herself from Agastya's hold but her locks of hair got stuck in Agastya's shirt button. Agasthya and Pakhi were so close that their lips were just centimetres apart and Pakhi could hear the fast heartbeats of Agasthya. The musk scent of Agasthya's perfume filled her nostrils. Agasthya caressed her hair. Mallika had become numb to male touch after so many years of her work but Agasthya...his touch always left her burning...with hate, with disgust and with a sick wanting. However she wanted this man to be reduced to dust, she couldn't help but being flattered when she could see this man desiring her to death. Despite not wanting, she was lost in Agastya's penetrating gaze. She hated how this man made her weak in knees but suddenly realising the power she holds over him, Pakhi brought her lips close to Agastya's chest and bit off his shirt button freeing her hair. Then she left Agasthya standing spellbound.

Paakhi...that woman...how couldn't she realise how deep and strong Agastya's love for her. How she couldn't see his torment? But today watching a flicker of desire in Pakhi's eyes for him filled him with great satisfaction. She would feel the same pull towards him. He will make her love him with the same intensity- he promised her, himself and the universe.

https://youtu.be/LOLwTra4HYg

Please tell me which pairing would you like to see more of in this FF: Agasthya-Mallika, Agasthya-Pakhi, Ishaan-Mallika or Ishaan-Pakhi. And please give your feedback.

Well I am confused.I like the pairing of Agasthya-Mallika over Agasthya-Pakhi. If this was the reality in the serial then certainly the viewers would have liked the undeniable spark and sizzling chemistry between this pair.

It's like Ying and Yang. The perfect example to describe would be VANI from N5 with Bani being the Naagin pursued by the predator Veer who loved her intensely.

We all know about Agastya's mad love for Pakhi but if Pakhi/Mallika are different then are they twin sisters in this FF?

Who is the girl that is obsessed over Agasthya inspite of being tied up? So many possibilities.

Would Agasthya be proved innocent? And if indeed he is proved innocent who will he choose ultimately-Pakhi or Mallika?

Also in the reverse scenario if Agasthya becomes positive and Mallika genuinely falls in love with him will Agasthya forgive and accept her or lash out like Vansh did with Ridzi?

If Ishaan gets revealed as the main culprit hope Agasthya protects Mallika/Pakhi from him.

Originally posted by: masked

Well I am confused.I like the pairing of Agasthya-Mallika over Agasthya-Pakhi. If this was the reality in the serial then certainly the viewers would have liked the undeniable spark and sizzling chemistry between this pair.

It's like Ying and Yang. The perfect example to describe would be VANI from N5 with Bani being the Naagin pursued by the predator Veer who loved her intensely.

We all know about Agastya's mad love for Pakhi but if Pakhi/Mallika are different then are they twin sisters in this FF?

Who is the girl that is obsessed over Agasthya inspite of being tied up? So many possibilities.

Would Agasthya be proved innocent? And if indeed he is proved innocent who will he choose ultimately-Pakhi or Mallika?

Also in the reverse scenario if Agasthya becomes positive and Mallika genuinely falls in love with him will Agasthya forgive and accept her or lash out like Vansh did with Ridzi?

Thanks a lot. Paakhi and Mallika are different and so are their face but as Agasthya and Paakhi fell in love seven years ago in an internet chat group, they had not seen each other's faces. The tied girl is real Paakhi who's as much obsessed with Agasthya as he is with Paakhi. Now the question is will Agasthya be able to recognise his real Paakhi and who is he actually in love with- Pakhi or Mallika? Who will Mallika fall for- Agasthya or Ishaan?

Originally posted by: Autumn09

Chapter-4

Pakhi was overseeing the preparations for Mehendi ceremony. She looked at the watch to see the time and saw Agastya's reflection in the watch glass instead. Still she pretended as if she hadn't seen him. She saw that the flower wreath in the door was starting to sag a bit. She brought a wobbly stool to stand upon to fix the wreath again. She knew well the stool was not balanced to hold her and she'll fall. And that was what precisely she wanted for it would cause Agasthya to reveal himself and save her.

Pakhi stood on the stool and as expected, the stool wobbled and she fell down,. only to be held in Agastya's arms.

"Agasthya! Tum yahaan?" Pakhi faked being surprised.

"Kyon? You are surprised?" Agasthya smirked, "Tumne to vaise bhi mera reflection apni watch me dekh liya tha."

Pakhi didn't expect Agasthya to notice that. He was sharp. In fact, the sharpest of all men she had met.

"Vo main..."Mallika practiced one of her charms, "Main hamesha tere baare me hi sochti rehti hoon na Dodo to mujhe har jagah tu hi tu dikhta hai. Mujhe laga is baar bhi mere man ka vehem hi hoga." Pakhi bit her tongue and blushed innocently.

Pakhi tried to free herself from Agastya's hold but her locks of hair got stuck in Agastya's shirt button. Agasthya and Pakhi were so close that their lips were just centimetres apart and Pakhi could hear the fast heartbeats of Agasthya. The musk scent of Agasthya's perfume filled her nostrils. Agasthya caressed her hair. Mallika had become numb to male touch after so many years of her work but Agasthya...his touch always left her burning...with hate, with disgust and with a sick wanting. However she wanted this man to be reduced to dust, she couldn't help but being flattered when she could see this man desiring her to death. Despite not wanting, she was lost in Agastya's penetrating gaze. She hated how this man made her weak in knees but suddenly realising the power she holds over him, Pakhi brought her lips close to Agastya's chest and bit off his shirt button freeing her hair. Then she left Agasthya standing spellbound.

Paakhi...that woman...how couldn't she realise how deep and strong Agastya's love for her. How she couldn't see his torment? But today watching a flicker of desire in Pakhi's eyes for him filled him with great satisfaction. She would feel the same pull towards him. He will make her love him with the same intensity- he promised her, himself and the universe.

https://youtu.be/LOLwTra4HYg

Please tell me which pairing would you like to see more of in this FF: Agasthya-Mallika, Agasthya-Pakhi, Ishaan-Mallika or Ishaan-Pakhi. And please give your feedback.

I like the pair of Agastya and Mallika. Btw, is Agastya's nick name Dolu or Dodo? Actually, Pakhi called him Dolu in Chapter 1 when she had telephonic conversation with him. On the other hand, in chapter 4, she called him Dodo like the show. So, I am confused.

Originally posted by: Shirsha90

I like the pair of Agastya and Mallika. Btw, is Agastya's nick name Dolu or Dodo? Actually, Pakhi called him Dolu in Chapter 1 when she had telephonic conversation with him. On the other hand, in chapter 4, she called him Dodo like the show. So, I am confused.

Thanks for pointing this out. Actually in earlier episodes, I misheard Pakhi calling Agasthya as Dholu then I realised that it was Dodo.

Originally posted by: Autumn09

Thanks a lot. Paakhi and Mallika are different and so are their face but as Agasthya and Paakhi fell in love seven years ago in an internet chat group, they had not seen each other's faces. The tied girl is real Paakhi who's as much obsessed with Agasthya as he is with Paakhi. Now the question is will Agasthya be able to recognise his real Paakhi and who is he actually in love with- Pakhi or Mallika? Who will Mallika fall for- Agasthya or Ishaan?

Ultimately the fate of this fascinating FF lies on your hands.

Mallika's personality is as different as chalk and cheese from Pakhi. Hope they are revealed as Twin sisters and if not then it would make for an interesting duel between the two doppelgangers for Agasthya's Love.

As far as Agasthya is concerned let's see what are his real plans? Is he just obsessive or is it just a facade for his long term plans? Is he the secret Mastermind?

Mallika perhaps might have to drop or change her own revenge plans like Bani was forced to do so in case of Veer when she saw that the enemy she hated turned out to be her biggest Protector/Shield?

If Agasthya continues protecting Mallika like it was shown in the previous chapter she might start to really like the man.

Amazing Chapters. 👏

Really enjoyed them all.

The story gets gripping day by day. 😈

So both Agastya and Paakhi are obsessed with each other.

Mallika is also affected by Agastya great.

Still now I couldn't get decide Agastya and Paakhi or Agastya and Mallika 🤣

Waiting for next update 🤗

Originally posted by: Sgayuiyer

Amazing Chapters. 👏

Really enjoyed them all.

The story gets gripping day by day. 😈

So both Agastya and Paakhi are obsessed with each other.

Mallika is also affected by Agastya great.

Still now I couldn't get decide Agastya and Paakhi or Agastya and Mallika 🤣

Waiting for next update 🤗

Thank you so much Gayu 💖💖💖