Lucid Dream [SS] Abhira - Part 5 Page 24 - Page 17

Originally posted by: anuandavi

Lovely update... And finally Abhimanyu climbs down the pipe...

Yes, Abhimanyu finally climbs down the pipe from Akshara's room 😆

Thanks for leaving a comment! So happy you are enjoying the story 😃

Originally posted by: iheartChai

Hello, I wasn't sure if you wanted a tag but I saw you post a comment bookmarked and thought to inform about the update. If you don't' want to be tagged I won't take offence and I can remove you from the list.

Thank you for taking time to read the first chapter and glad you enjoyed it 😃

I truly liked the first chapter. It’s just that I didn’t get to get my hands on further updates yet. Please continue tagging me in future updates, I shall catch-up soon

Originally posted by: ChhalkiSyaahi

Now, this was an awesome update. I had missed one update due to my busy schedule but then caught up with it. This is a beautiful story and going at a perfect pace. Both Abhimanyu and Akshara are maturing a lot as a person and I like Kairav here for being the big brother. I also liked the budding chemistry between Neil and Arohi. Neil was the best person to give her the reality check and he did that. I loved the bonding there.

Waiting to see how Arohi reacts to the entire situation. And if she is not agreeable about it, I am sure Neil will help her understand the situation.

Some mature conversations and normalish scenarios 😲 Something the writers haven't really been giving us so all my thoughts of what I would like to see happen now happening here 😆

We will see what happens between Arohi and Akshara 😉

Thank you so much for your kind words. Really happy that you are enjoying the story.

Originally posted by: Hriju321

Loved reading the chapter ❤️

So now Kairav from Goenka side and Manjari from the Birla's know.

Loved that Neil could break a chip from the ice that covers Aarohi's heart.....

Biting my nails and waiting for the Akshu-Aaru conversation 😲

Thank you for your kind words 😃 Yes, Neil breaking down Arohi's walls slowly but surely.

I hope to update sooner than the last chapter. I believe it has almost been a three week break?

Originally posted by: Ambajee

Beautiful update.. !!! This chapter should be Bad Eggs and Pregnancy 🤣 Arohi - Neil.. wow such matured banter and their lunch date 😉 I wanna see more of these two now… Manjari and Akshara conversation was refreshing to see..!! I hope to see the same care in episodes.. ❤️

Shankari, that's an awesome title for Part 4 😆

I liked the Neil and Arohi pairing from the start. Hope the writers can redeem Arohi some more so I can be okay with her and Neil later in the show.

I am also hoping for some great moments between Akshara and Manjari in the show. These two ladies are the most important women in Abhi's life. Before he only said only my Ma can call me Abhi. Now he will say only my Ma and Akshu can call me Abhi 🤣

Thanks for taking the time to comment! Really appreciate it 😃

Originally posted by: Appudappu

Thank you for tagging me...

I think Arohi is more sensible here... like Neil's talks already affected her..I just hope Akshu stay stronger...

I secretly wish they were pregnant 😳..

But now ..😭

So you are on team pregnancy? 😆

Yes, trying to make Arohi more sensible here with the help of Neil.

We will see how the conversation between Akshara and Arohi goes 😉

Originally posted by: Nyxigniflex

Beautiful update.

I just love your fanfiction so much....

It was definitely worth the wait. Glad it was longer.

It's so simple yet beautiful, no unnecessary drama. The characters a of them seem like how they are in the show. Really amazing....

Keep writing and treating us...

Riddhi 🤗

Sometimes we don't need all that hyper drama. Life is dramatic enough especially navigating between family relations 😆 I know last chapter had more other character conversations then Abhira moments so I was afraid it would be boring for people. Thank you for such kind words and I'm happy you are enjoying what I've written thus far.

I just saw in one of the introduction threads that you are from Bangalore? I visited there once with one of my good friends (she happens to be watching YRKKH with me. She's my translator 😆). Her family was going back to India and invited me come with them too. I didn't get to eat dosa at MTR 😔

Originally posted by: tptwi

Wow, this is absolutely incredible! Please do tag me moving forward 🤗 You are such a talented writer.

I've added you to the tag list Pooja.

I don't know about talented 😳 but thank you so much for your kind words. I just wanted to pen something down of how I would have liked the series to be handled and how I could see the characters reacting.

Originally posted by: iheartChai

I've added you to the tag list Pooja.

I don't know about talented 😳 but thank you so much for your kind words. I just wanted to pen something down of how I would have liked the series to be handled and how I could see the characters reacting.

Not that I wanted them to be preggers...it would have been an interesting twist..ab tak Kisi ne aise likha nahi hai....and Its not that it can't happen...they are humans, in love, intoxicated that night... anything was possible!