Arylie SS: Sabr - Part 17 Pg. 61 Homecoming NEW UPDATE!!! - Page 44

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-

Oh wow !☺️☺️

Was that his apology ? Damn hot apology .

I will come back again when things settle .I have to rush out the butterflie who have taken home within me. Okay 😆


You made me laugh out loud ha!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: dumas

Love without trust cannot make a marriage.Perfect wording I loved that he told her even if it hurt her because their marriages is about trust and communication I loved that they talked it out better that the doubt is uprooted and destroyed than fester and grow.I am glad the made up and open ending for our imagination lol 😈😈😈😈😈😈.Awesome Update beautiful as always.


Thank you. I want them to have frank talks so that they connect without misunderstandings.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Dear Mary 🤗

I am so glad and my heart danced a little with happiness when I saw the new update..

It was my lunchtime read today..

Aww poor Aryan wrong question during a beautiful romantic date… He wanted to talk in the context of Arpita but Imlie’s reply removed all his insecurities… loved that part..

The best part was Imlie running around little bunny in kitchen garden.. so cute..

Loved it..


I am so happy you liked the bunny scene. Two of my favorite scenes influenced it - Jodha Akbar's rabbit scene with Aish and Leap Year's kitchen garden scene in Ireland.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: mltr16


That makes at least two of us MaryBarton. 😆😆 I absolutely loved this update. Aryan's subconscious insecurity, his possessive internal dialogue was so well conveyed. I love this mature, grounded, playful Imlie. The make up games were great fodder for imagination indeed. Mmmhmmm...50/50 ke partners and all, somebody one-upping someone. Uh-huh, two can certainly play that game 😳 Loved the spiciness 🤗


Happy you liked it 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Marybarton


His name is pretty grand and in Rajput history it's a royal name, so I added that bit. Yes, there are little hints in the early parts.


The jump is a plot point for humor because she ends up putting it on afterall. That's a fight Aryan won because it was too close to the interview and she didn't want to offend his family.


Imlie in my story did not keep the job with Aryan, she went on to become a magistrate after finishing college. I didn't like that they made her a college drop out just because she got a job in the show. But she's knows the drill of interviews and she's peeved at Aryan for keeping his title a secret.


I really just did it to serve it to Malini because this is the thing that will affect her and her mother the most. Aryan only has a title and royalty is defunct in India, so it's not a big deal. He says so. But it explains the old money Rathode name that his mother hints at when she says that Arpita's dad was rich. I am just adding some background to explain Aryan's source of wealth. He's not self-made with 10 companies, though he has them as he says to Imlie. He's young and his enterprise is handled by his brother in law when he's just a student. But he is sent to military cadet school for an education in my story to add to his family history. He only steps in when his brother in law dies. His father died long ago, the brother in law was just the keeper of things and then Aryan is jolted with the shock and anger of having to take up all this responsibility thanks to Aditya and the accident. That's the kind of thing that would only seem like a hardship to an overindulged rich kid - in addition to the loss of Arpita's husband. So that this background works for that.




I am loving your story!!!! I can't stop laughing!!!
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Posted: 4 years ago

Honestly, so far this story has been so beautiful. It really takes you to another world. I love their cute nok-joks, romance and their silent understanding. I also love your comedy timing. This story is perfect, can't wait to read more!!! Also just wanted to know, do you also plan on uploading this story maybe on wattpad?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Hasina98

Honestly, so far this story has been so beautiful. It really takes you to another world. I love their cute nok-joks, romance and their silent understanding. I also love your comedy timing. This story is perfect, can't wait to read more!!! Also just wanted to know, do you also plan on uploading this story maybe on wattpad?


Is there an Indian audience that reads on Whattpad? People tell me to upload my stories there all the time, but I have not participated before.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Marybarton


Is there an Indian audience that reads on Whattpad? People tell me to upload my stories there all the time, but I have not participated before.

Yes Mary dear.. there are lots of members of IF who are on wattpad as well..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hey do let us know if you are on wattpad

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Priti1610

Hey do let us know if you are on wattpad


I am not, but I plan to update it here today at some point.

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