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Posted: 4 years ago

Ok so I guess i will have to do binge reading one day to update myself with the story🤣I'm far behind and here you have already written 14 parts

(Not my fault though...this hectic clg schedule you know 🥲)


Anyway today i read part 8a,8b and 9 and i can't let it go unappreciated(i swear raat ko so nahi paaungi mai agar aisa paap Kiya to🤣)



it's such a mood lifter story yaar..it has that domestic feel you know...like there is no dreamy romance but real life me jaisa romance hota hai waise feels hai😍

Ek to i love how you add comic relief in between...i love your anu yaar she is so cute and straight forwardjo dil me wo jubaan par without any filter😆



These dialogues had me ROFLing:


Teri wali toh bahot tez hai! Jis din baal kholkar aayegi us din Chandi ka roop lagegi!"



"Main kya kehta? Main khud bhi dara hua tha!"

"Bhaasan se ya mar se?"

"Dono se!"



Nahi.. Main toh soch rahi thi ki main apna Urdu Hindi sabdkos Amdavad me hi bhool gayi!"




Mama ke ghar, Bhuj."

"Bhuj! Itni door?!"

"Mama ka ghar jahan hoga wahin jaungi ne"


There were many more dialogues like this..I wish I could mention them all😅


And i absolutely loved that part where anu realises that Anuj never called her baa baapuji as uncle aunty and always treated her relatives as his own

I mean i never noticed this in the show but now that you have mentioned to i can't stop thinking about how beautifully his character was sketched initially


P.s-i am still on that part where Anuj has messaged bunty but bunty has blocked him🥺 yaar I'm super invested in their story too and dying to read what happens next but this bloody work 😡

Anyway I will be back to my binge reading again once I get some time...and thanks for never forgetting to tag me (bear with my sloth reading plzz😂😂)

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow Noorie..


This was so poetic and heart rendering ❤️

Thank you for taking me back on this beautiful journey..

Dubara se saare episodes dekhne ka man kar raha hai ab..am sure to write this , you too would have done it.


I was pleasantly surprised to see Anuj ka text.. dil se dil ka connect jo hai..

Happy he shows his disappointment with full haq too..Anupama, I hate you


And then still twining next day, he literally adores her. And the kiss, Anu sahi ja rahi hai, kuch zyada hi limits hai ab bhi en ke beech....


Beautiful update ❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: docritu99

Bro, I have been trying to catch up the story since a few days now but work and writing comes in between! Hoping to complete it this weekend! Hey Ritu! No worries dear. Take your time. I can understand.

It's an amazing story, can't leave it without the deserving dues. 👍 Sorry I couldn't reply earlier!

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked whatever you've read so far!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: grace2021

Hey Noorie Hey Pooja!

Very emotional write-up... Loved it. Thank you dear!❤️

It is so apparent how you write each and every line with the heart. They are full of emotions.Yes. This story is very close to my heart as it has snippets and moments from my life as well.

Its amazing how he know when she is not happy...its hard to find a partner like Anuj....I guess that's why he is a national crush.☺️ Very true!

Thanks for the tag and pls do continue writing..... My pleasure! Thanks for sharing your feedback!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Iruuu

Loads of flashback memories in my minda🤧🤧🤧... Beautifully written Hey Nida! Thank you dear! Glad you liked it! ❤️

Anu remembering his every hidden pains of his unsaid feelings 😭😭

Wanna Comment more long but you have putten it into a unbearable cliffhanger 🙃😩

Ish Liye Nhi'' kiya jao'' 😪😜 Areh bap re! Ab toh Anuj ke alava Nidaji ko bhi gussa aa gaya!😳

Update soonest 🥺Next part will be updated tomorrow night.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Kras1

it was amazing noorie Thank you so much dear Reetika! Glad you liked it! ❤️

yaar sach mein maan ke beech hue har ek iconic scene ki yaad dila di Uff! Woh bhi kya scenes the yaar! Can't believe the producer let his personal equation with an actor interfere with the story! At that point MaAn story had so much promise and potential! ❤️

yr kitni mehnat ki hogi tune unka ek ek dialogue bilkul same to same likhna so amazing yr nahi re! Mehnat mehnat jaisi nahi lagi pata hai! It was a treat to revisit those days! ☺️

it was like unki puri journey dobara dekh li

thanks a lot for this My pleasure! 🤗

anu guilt samajh aata h but only after hospital scene usse pehle uski bhi koi galti nahi thi aur anuj ne bilkul sahi kaha ye sab kismat ka likha tha Ha, woh hi. Dono ki kismat me likha tha 26 years ka separation.

kis tarah anuj bina kahe sirf uski baato se sab jan jata h yr

he was angry with her kyunki anu ne usse apna dard chupaya

yaha se aage pura aisa lag raha tha jaise apni frustration nikal rahi ho show ki

like life partner se sab share karte h and all😆

Nahi yr. Mujhe batao death se badhkar aur kya jolt ho sakta hai ke liye? Phir hosh me aake banda samne se poochh raha hai, ghar pe aayi tab bol raha hai ki tum meri duniya me aa gayi, privacy hai phir bhi Anupama nahi bol rahi! Even after that second dream where she acknowledged her love. Still she wanted that push from bapuji, like man liya par bolne liye external validation chahiye! I woulve loved had she told bapuji n GK kaka after confession!


but yes yaha anu ka POV bh samajh aata h 26 saal wo akele royi Yes. She had adapted to that life to such an extent ki us family se alag hokar bhi uski aadatein nahi chhoot rahi hain!

but now she has to understand that she is not alone she has a man who loves her a lot who will never judge her Exactly!

i love the way he soothed her pain😳 Aww! Thanks for sharing your feedback after every update! Sorry couldn't reply last time. But it means a lot to me! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Km181

Wow Noorie..


This was so poetic and heart rendering ❤️ Hi Komal! Thank you so much for your kind words! 🤗How are you now?

Thank you for taking me back on this beautiful journey.. Aww! Pleasure is entirely mine! I also revisited those magical days! ☺️

Dubara se saare episodes dekhne ka man kar raha hai ab..am sure to write this , you too would have done it. I can understand. Vanika ne pura satyanash kiya hua hai!😡Current episodes me bas MaAn scenes dekh leti hoon. Baki toh Priyanka ke updates ka sahara hai. Yes. Main toh kitne dino se old episodes dekh rahi hoon.


I was pleasantly surprised to see Anuj ka text.. dil se dil ka connect jo hai.. Show me bhi dikhaya tha the night before MaAn went to Mumbai.

Happy he shows his disappointment with full haq too..Anupama, I hate You


And then still twining next day, he literally adores her. Woh toh hai uski jaan toh woh kuch mange aur anuj na kare aisa kaisa ho sakta hai!☺️ Gusse me bhi fiqar aur pyaar hai! ❤️

And the kiss, Anu sahi ja rahi hai, kuch zyada hi limits hai ab bhi en ke beech.... Ha aur maryada purshottam toh apni limits sapne me bhi nahi cross karta!


Beautiful update ❤️❤️❤️Thank you! Glad you liked it! Lots of love and 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: shriz

Ok so I guess i will have to do binge reading one day to update myself with the story🤣I'm far behind and here you have already written 14 parts

(Not my fault though...this hectic clg schedule you know 🥲)

Hey Shriz! So good to see you here! 🤗No worries dear. Jab mauka mile tab padh lena.


Anyway today i read part 8a,8b and 9 and i can't let it go unappreciated(i swear raat ko so nahi paaungi mai agar aisa paap Kiya to🤣) Zarra navazi k liye shukriya! 🤗I truely appreciate the fact that you decided to drop a long feedback despite your busy schedule! ❤️



it's such a mood lifter story yaar..it has that domestic feel you know...like there is no dreamy romance but real life me jaisa romance hota hai waise feels hai😍 Real life se inspired hai isiliye dreamy kuch nahi hai! 😳😛

Ek to i love how you add comic relief in between...i love your anu yaar she is so cute and straight forwardjo dil me wo jubaan par without any filter😆 Haha! Thank you! Although the comic relief has taken a back seat somewhere in the intense and emotional scenes. But it'll be back with the college flashbacks.


These dialogues had me ROFLing:


Teri wali toh bahot tez hai! Jis din baal kholkar aayegi us din Chandi ka roop lagegi!"



"Main kya kehta? Main khud bhi dara hua tha!"

"Bhaasan se ya mar se?"

"Dono se!"


Nahi.. Main toh soch rahi thi ki main apna Urdu Hindi sabdkos Amdavad me hi bhool gayi!"




Mama ke ghar, Bhuj."

"Bhuj! Itni door?!"

"Mama ka ghar jahan hoga wahin jaungi ne"

Yeh wala toh is very close to my heart! But thanks for sharing the specific parts which you loved! I'm touched! smiley27❤️❤️




There were many more dialogues like this..I wish I could mention them all😅


And i absolutely loved that part where anu realises that Anuj never called her baa baapuji as uncle aunty and always treated her relatives as his own

I mean i never noticed this in the show but now that you have mentioned to i can't stop thinking about how beautifully his character was sketched initially That was a very special moment for me too! Isn't that what every girl wants from her partner? And I agree, this character had so much potential and it stood out not just because of the writing but also because of GK's mindblowing acting. Now the writing has let down the actor and the fans both.


P.s-i am still on that part where Anuj has messaged bunty but bunty has blocked him🥺 yaar I'm super invested in their story too and dying to read what happens next but this bloody work 😡 Don't worry. Abhi Bunty ki entry me time hai. Woh raaz toh Bunty hi kholega! Asli duniya is zaalim, I know, so don't rush.

Anyway I will be back to my binge reading again once I get some time...and thanks for never forgetting to tag me (bear with my sloth reading plzz😂😂) My pleasure dear! Your comments are always extra special for me because you were the first one to comment on this story! Thanks once again!🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Updated my comment. Looking forward to the next chapter!! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

So emotional yaar. Majaa aavi gayi story read karine.

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