Jaan hazir, par vo...... (Updated part lV page 17) completed - Page 10

Originally posted by: Paru95

Beautifully written😭

Dard is what iam feeling..for my ShiVi💔

Loved it♥️

Eagerly waiting🤗

PS-Pls tag me tooo for the next updated🤗

Will surely tag you.......

Ih no poor Raavi , my heart hurts for her. sad realility but you gotta protect yourself 🥺

And Gaumbi ❤️

update might be short but it was strongg, yaar Raavi’s struggle was painfully portrayed can’t wait to read further ❤️

Originally posted by: Kristmas

Ih no poor Raavi , my heart hurts for her. sad realility but you gotta protect yourself 🥺

And Gaumbi ❤️

update might be short but it was strongg, yaar Raavi’s struggle was painfully portrayed can’t wait to read further ❤️

If you have any suggestions on the further storyline do share please.......

Originally posted by: Kfof

Lovedd it ❤❤

Amazing ... Just loved it... Wi8ing for next part... Fo take ur time jb bhi post easily kar sko kar dena... Hm sn to hain hi prahnay k liye 😇😇😇😇

This Ashok guy is psycho.....

My heart goes out for Shivi😭 why they have to go through this.

I just hope Shiva will do something to save Raavi in next part.

Loved it ❤️

Originally posted by: aimmyangle

Amazing ... Just loved it... Wi8ing for next part... Fo take ur time jb bhi post easily kar sko kar dena... Hm sn to hain hi prahnay k liye 😇😇😇😇

Lots of love ❤❤

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

This Ashok guy is psycho.....

My heart goes out for Shivi😭 why they have to go through this.

I just hope Shiva will do something to save Raavi in next part.

Loved it ❤️

Will surely try to update soon......

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

thanks aimmy 😘🥰😍

Lots of love ❤❤

Mention not dear

Wi8ing for the story more to unfold ❤️❤️❤️

maarne ka toh bahut mann hai😡😡

but chal tujhe bakash diya.....

par next part me shiva agr kuch kiya nhi toh....👊🤛🤛

btw nice update