ABIRA OS - Heart Break PART 4 Pg 3 (24.1.22) - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
#11

Awesome story

I believe abhi is right in his place

Because for akshara arohi’s acceptance matters the most …she didn’t even care about Abhi’ feelings

Please write more

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

PART 3

Ashu was dropped by Neil

Neil dropped Akshu at Goenka Mansion.

Akshu: Neil can u sit with me in the garden for fewminutes.

Neil: Sure Ms. Akshra.

Akshu: Stop it Neil. Call me Akshara! Enough of Ms. Aksharafrom your bhai. U please stop it.

Neil: Sorry !!!

Akshu and Neil didn’t speak anything.

Akshu: Neil I know I’m wrong. I should have confessed mylove to Abhi.

Neil: hmmm

Akshu: I did something which costed me dearly.

Akshara was sobbing.

Neil felt very bad.

Neil: Bhai hates lies!!! He can’t stand lies. If there isone person, he loves it is his mom. If it is one thing, he detests it is lies.

Bhai was completely broken when he found that u lied to him

Before meeting you he told me, Neil its ok if Akshara doesn’tlove me

I am going to ask her why she lied to me. She owes me ananswer.

And when u didn’t turn up at sunset point he was superupset.

He is not bothered about Aarohi. In fact, Bhai doesn’t careif Aarohi lied or manipulated the situation or fabricated stories, Bhai wasconcerned only about you.

Akshu: I know Neil, I know. I messed up big time

You will not know how manytimes I died today. I died within myself when I told a lie. Aarohi is myweakness.

She has completely taken overme and the bitter truth is I permitted her to do so.

In the process of makingAarohi happy I did many wrong things. I lied big time, I messed my relationwith Abhi.

And you know what even afterall this Aarohi is only going to blame me.

Neil: Why is she so important to you that u are willing tosacrifice your love for her???????

Akshu started to say,

Neil : No Akshara I don’t want to know that.

If you ever wanted to convince Bhai try telling him the reasonfor my question. May be he will understand.

Bhai is very ziddi. So give him some time. Give yourselfsome time. Make him understand. May be he will pay heed to you.

Akshara my advice DON’T RUSH. LET THINGS COOL DOWN.

Saying this Neil got up and bid good bye to Akshara andleft.

Akshara was determined to get her love back in her life.With a new found confidence she marched inside the house.

DEARIES, This is my personal fav. Kural.given with meaning.

Jus to show how much Abhi cares for truth.


உள்ளத்தாற் பொய்யா தொழுகி னுலகத்தா

ருள்ளத்து ளெல்லா முளன்


One who, guided by his heart, lives without lies, will forever live in the hearts of all.

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புறந்தூய்மை நீரா னமையு மகந்தூய்மை

வாய்மையாற் காணப் படும்


External cleanliness is brought about by water; inner purity is evident in truthfulness.

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TO BE CONTINUED IN PART 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
#13

Dearies posted part 3. pl comment

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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

Kairav se accha Neil he

Akshu & Neil conversation very beautiful written

Continue...

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Posted: 4 years ago
#15

PART 4

Abhi was hell bent on going to London.

His parents Mahima and Anand convinced him to stay here as he was important for Birla Hospital.

Next day morning……

Abhi as usual started for his hospital.

On the way to hospital he saw Akshara standing, her car parked in the sideway.

She was asking for lift.

Akshara deliberately did this as she was hoping Abhi will come. (Thanks to Neil who gave her the minute to minute commentary)

Abhi saw Akshara and went near her. Parked his bike and asked her what was the issue.

Akshara told that the car was not starting and she has to reach the hospital as she was having a therapy session in 2o minutes

Akshara: Abhi come let us go. I have a therapy session in20 minutes.

Abhi: Oh. I see.

Akshu: yes (sad face)

Abhi: yes, you should not get delayed for your sessions. Please take my bike and go. I will come in your car.

Akshu: My car is not starting……

Abhi: yeah u will have to insert the key and start. Don’t worry your car is fine. U carry on with my bike.

Or if you can wait for 5 minutes your car will be ready.

Akshu was shocked.

Abhi started the car and asked akshu.

Abhi: Akshara ji which do u prefer car or bike?????

Akshu stomped her legs and and went to her car.

Abhi knew this will happen as he overheard Neil and Akshus conversation.

IN the hospital

Abhi acted very normal. He didn’t bother when Akshu came near him or talked with him. He made sure there was no personal talk.

Dr. Rohan: Akshara ji PR wants the music therapy article to be put on the notice board.

Dr. Harsh asked me to inform you as you were busy.

Abhi who was hearig this… came near

Abhi: He called the PR guy and told pl check the authenticityof the article before posting.

Akshu: Abhi, stop what do you mean by authenticity????

Bhi: Yeah, who knows if your sister comes here and says pl remove the article or change the content you will do so as per her wish. I can’t believe you. And Birla hospital reputation will be at stake.

That’s because all that matters to you is only your sister not ANYONE IN THIS GOD DAMN WORLD. So please ask her permission before doing anything.

Abhi walked away leaving a visible shaken Akshu

Akshu was ashamed of what she did for Abhi. Now she isgetting back with interest.

Later during the day, Akshu wanted some files to be signedfrom Mahima. She went to Abhi’s room to take a look at him. She wanted to apologize to him and she got to know from Dr. Rohan that Abhi is free for the next 3hours.

Akshu: KNok the door.. Can I come in???

Abhi: No pl get permission from your sister before coming.

Akshu: Stop it Abhi….

Abhi: Why the hell should I stop????? Abhi was unnaturally calm.

Aksharaplease listen I’m done with your lies and your Aaro jaap. Your sacrifice for your sister is all fine but NOT AT THE COST OF MY LOVE.

I loved you and that was my biggest mistake. But the painand hurt you gave me is more my love to you.

I begged you in front of every one to tell that u too loveme. You stood like a rock. Every time I saw you I cried I begged to be loved to be told that you love me.

Probably I was wrong. You didn’t love me at all.

Who are you to sacrifice my love to ur sister.

Even now I love you. But I don’t think I will sacrifice my self-respect for love.

I will get over it. When someone fails you, lies to you, u shouldn’t trust that person. And that personfor me is you.

Saying this he stomped out of the room.

Akshu was uncontrollably crying. Abhi didn’t bother to say anything. He just took his coat and left the room.

Akshu broke down completely.

Neil entered the room

Neil: Akshara I told you to give some time to Bhai and to yourself.

Let us hope he doesn’t forget his love towards you and he forgives you. Please don’t cry.

Akshu wiped her tears nad told herself

Yes I have done a crime I shouldn’t have insulted Abhi I should have accepted his love. I will take anything that come in my way to win over his love.i will become Abhi’s akshu!!!

She was determined.

If you all want, I will continue.

This was another update ut of frustration that Abhi kept quite in Mandhir without uttering a word.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

please please update soon..this is so good..the angst🥺🥺🥺🥺

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Please update soon. Enjoying reading this

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Posted: 4 years ago
#18

Superb update

Abhi is way to hurt by akshu

Hope she convinces him soon

Please update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
#19

Nice updates ❤

Continue soon dear

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