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Posted: 4 years ago
#41


Yes she is looking prettier.

Anuj ke pyar mein anupama ke husn par nikhaar aa raha hai☺️😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul


Yes she is looking prettier.

Anuj ke pyar mein anupama ke husn par nikhaar aa raha hai☺️😆

haan jab pyar had se jyada ho to wo chehre par nikhar le hi aata h
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Posted: 4 years ago
#43

Hello to all lovely people!! Good Morning :)

Thanks sunny for opening the thread, aaj tere thread pe two posts likhungi. First is my rant and then episode analysis. And I promise this is my last long rant!! Iske baad I am not spending my energy and spirit on ranting - pinky promise!!!❤️

Alright, WRITERS - I have a couple of questions for you to set my context.

WHERE HAS THAT ESSENSE OF TIME VANISHED??? IS THAT DOWN THE DRAIN??

You all showed a brilliant point when Anuj's accident happened, even before i must say. he understood that life is unpredictable and then she understood that life is unpredictable. I loved those episodes bec TIME is actually a master stroke to make someone realize something. After that what happened?? TIME LOST ITS SIGNIFICANCE????

What stopped you guys from making ANu say - I am ready to take a steps towards you and with you!! Is that equivalent to ILU??? NOPE. This would have given you the chance to explore the emotional side of MaAn. This would have given you the chance to show so many emotions - hesitancy, exploring each other's strength and weakness and many more. Living together after this would have become much more beautiful. Bringing Mukku in again would have been seen as MaAn trying to solve her issues in a more beautiful way. As a dreamer, if i know that a man is ready to walk with me, I will want to know so much more about him and I will want to tell so much about myself to him!!! You are showing togetherness now too, but then that essence is going some where in thin air.

Other Questions --

1. Why are your plots becoming baseless since Anuj's accident?

2. Where is the Up-ing of Anuj? Is he just a lover now?

3. Where is the stepping up of Anu?

4. Are elders supposed to be on mute when it is most required for them to speak up? Even at an age of 40+ adult, when a father speaks up that 40+ adult listens - thats what sanskar is in India atleast

Now let me start with why i asked these ques. I know this is a long running drama, but that does not give an excuse to not set a base properly.

Baseless Plots -

You guys established Anuj as this perfect man with no flaws. This was etched in our mind. A man who is sharp, who observes many things together and who gives back to people when needed, at the time needed. Then suddenly you tell us that he has a sister, he is adopted, and he is drowned in guilt!! Chalo all accepted for the sake of long running story and for adding layers to a character. BUT, let me tell you, a man who is in this much guilt will vent or will recollect pieces of his past when he is alone or when he is with his most closed ones - such as GK. Did Anuj ever did this??? Apart from a couple nightmares that were about Anu or losing Anu or for hoping - he never showed any emotions. A human cannot hide his emotions always, practically he has to show it at some point and this emotional a guy - needs to vent when he is alone. YOU MISSED THIS!!

MUkky - This tho was a classic blunder you made and many have talked about this character, so i will not repeat!! I still sometimes cannot fig her arc!! Is this intentional? You want us to keep guessing whether Mukku is smart or dumb??? Chalo agreed here too - as a reader i know suspense is a good thing. However, I cannot trust you that you are indeed aiming to keep a suspense!! What if Mukku turns to be dumb??? Ofcourse an excuse is ever present that this is a long show and hence Mukku also will learn from her mistake and then she will blah blah blah...hence its a wait and watch.

Samar - This man has always been his mummy's son. He has never ever showed prominent traits of his father. And suddenly you start showing that he has Vanraj Shah's traits too??? Could you not show that ok this man also can be like his father at times? Anger, being irrational, not willing to listen, throwing things, shouting at a woman and so on?? So I have to assume suddenly that bec of xyz reason Samar is behaving like a V and pacify myself, is it?? I anyways assume a lot as you guys have given that scope/space and then observe the characters. But today my rational mind is asking or making these observations. When we are mainly writing a story for a LONG RUNNING SHOW, I have the scope to show the nuances more!! I can show that Samar also has V ka traits. Which Anu can see too and she can talk to show her son the mirror!! What made you ask him that ques when he personally has witnessed so many things? This is the same sane Samar who made her understand that ANuj's love is right and not wrong at all!! This is the same Samar who values love, who will never throw it away!!! As a human we know that one wrong move, one harsh word can crack a relation and then we have to move mountains to make that relation work!!

You aim to show Sanan's fight is just to get Anu and V in loggerheads!! Was there no other plot to come to this point? Such a simple matter ka pahad bana diya aap logon ne, kya drama hai bhai wah!! Kudos to your creativity. If the intent was to show that kids observe their parents, they come to some conclusions from the way the parents live their lives; i can tell you 1000 plots to show that; not this baseless fight!

Nandu - Kab se she is so in love with her massi man??? Kab se?? Have i missed seeing episodes where she is showing this much love??? She has been a practical girl and she too has witnessed what has happened with Anu. She has called a spade a spade when it came to Kavya. Infact, here I agree with her POV - only thing you forgot to establish is that she really loves her massi. Hence assumptions to be made and then her acts and episode to be understood, right??

Coming back to ANuj - I love him as a lover man, who will not; but is that the identity of a person?? Isnt a person more than a lover at any given point? You bought in layers in him and now all layers along with his sharpness, his observations are hiding??? Its good to step back and give space to a sister so that she gains confidence and gets that chance to make mistakes. But is it sane or advisable to not observe at all?? Why I am not seeing this skill in him? Why no scenes to show that yes he has stepped back but he is also observing whats happening around him? Why cant u give plots that also shows us this man's way of doing business. You did give us that Competition scene remember? So no ideas left to show his business side anymore??? Cant he talk to an equal tought nut and Anu observes so that she also learns??? Cant he and ANu have debate on ideas?? They can be shown coming to consensus right, in which way you can also show their individual thoughts merging, them working together by knowing each other more, their trust becoming stronger and so on. See I am giving you plots to run this show longer!!

I did brush aside him not understanding Anu;s feeling aside as stuck in no expectations mode as well. But a sharp man is a sharp man no matter what. He should have caught it way way sooner and that way you could have build up the romantic side with much more sweeter scenes. BUt na, you want the man to be dumb and thinking what ifs!!! No confidence in what he is seeing and even what he is hearing!! Is this the same confident man whom i saw walking into the cafe, sitting like he is going to own it one day and smiling at ANu??? Hesitency thode deer ki liye samajh aata hai, but not for like one month guys!!!!!!!

Anu stepping UP -- Has Anu not already stepped up since the time Anuj entered her life???? What was that after Bhumi puja - her stepping on a stool and talking with V??? What was that - her jumping the compound wall?? What was that - her talking gracefully and walking out of the house??? What was that - her looking for a house for herself?? ALL this was a step UP right??? So now her logging heads with V again is what - another attempt to step up??? Is this not a repeat??? And ofcourse in between you guys tried to bring in a unique friendship between them!! I mean how can i forget that. So, let me give you a small example of what would have inspired me - When she came in and caught Nandini - she did see the ring on the floor and she accessed the situation. How is Anu answerable to any god damn person that she has to stand there and give her lecture or get into a horn fight with V???? I would have preferred her to call Samar, take the ring, take his hand, walk out from that house, make him sit on a bench and talk to him bluntly that - dont repeat your parents mistake, instead learn from that and TRY NOT TO REPEAT!! You are my sensible son and I dont expect you to repeat the mistakes I DID. This would have also not bought Samar in the influence of Mr Shah even for a sec!!! This is Anu stepping yet again and defying the Shahs in her own way!!

Again, coming to MaAn as a whole and them showing haqq and stepping UP - let me give you two instances that you missed as per me. 1. When Anuj was helping her in the kitchen and talking about sanskar, i would have liked to see ANuj telling Anu - "lets do one thing ANu, lets talk to SaNan together. I am sure that if we bring them out of the Shah house, and talk to them in a park they will calm down and listen. You and I have the ability to solve any problem together!!" Environment matters!! And Anu accepting this!! THIS would have established two things - their trust on each other to solve anything under the moon; and them establishing rights on each other without even saying it out loud. Would this not have been better? They both would have stepped UP in their relation!!

If we ordinary people can think of such plots, why cant you seasoned great writers think of such plots I wonder!!!!

MaAn's cute scenes - I am forced to think at times ki Komal is right!! Many of these scenes are lollipops as MaAn is a trp catcher and if i show 1 cute scene fandom will dance all day, create vms etc etc. We fans are also fools at times....sorry people !!! What was so enthralling about that chair twirling yaar?? Forget being a couple; even at a best friends state if i see my bestie upset I will move mountains to make him talk or make him feel lighter. Why? - bec he is imp to me and i will be restless till he is OK!!! As simple as that. And when you go round round you will have head spin and you will catch the person who is close to you!! You want to tell me that she caught him bec she is now very comf with him?? That is one perception right? The other perception is he was close and she caught hold of him - big deal.... So see ultimately is this not a game of perceptions and assumptions??? If i perceive it as romantic and go al awwwwwwwwww then it is and if i see it practically then its no big deal. My point is these moments can capture us only for a specific time, not always!! A relation is a real way steps UP when you see them act with each other, for each other in simple and tough situations. I am super positive person, Many of you read what i write as my perceptions always tend to assume the nuances/cracks in people and explain from their view point. But i also have a threshold to continue doing this. If characters behave someway suddenly, if fights are meaningless (without proper base), if sense is not shown in the main characters, how long can i go on assuming and writing???


All in all - buckle up writers!! Dragging the confession is NOT a smart thing; Anu waiting to solve everything is NOT a smart thing - life in that way never gets sorted!!; ANuj not being sharp is NOT a smart thing;

Ok, am done!! If i have made no sense then sorry!! If i have made sense Thank you!! And always my respect and appreciation to you all for having that patience to read what i write!!!

I dont want to stop coming here and write/discuss/debate with you all lovely people!! But if the script does not improve then am afraid I will have no reason to write!! The only reason am still watching the show is to interact with you all!!❤️❤️


Will write another post with my observations on last two episode based on my assumptions!!! Maybe by afternoon!!! Have a great day all!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul

Chill. Next few episodes are going to be tough and hum kitne bhi kapde faade....trp ka kuch na hone wala😆

Better skip puke worthy scenes and watch only maan lollipop till then.😆

But yes i fully agree that this track need not to be so foolishly written. But logic ki maa behen pehle hi writers ne kar daali hai🤣 so least expectations

But yes anu should share her concerns with anuj because its about his sister mukku and also clearly anuj can easily take care of sanan problem. Samar uski baat sunega but makers are not getting this point. Anuj ka kitna kuch use ho sakta hai (i mean track mein, dont use your dirty mind) kitna involvement ho sakta hai is track mein kitne sensible scenes diye ja sakte hain but no...use sirf eye candy bana ke rakha hai.

🤣🤣 yes u r crt yr.. Makers Gk/anuj ka bohut achcha use kr sakte hai is track mein.. Makers need to understand if they use anuj properly in this track this would be there profit to give them trp.. As we kw he is only trp giver... Gk is brilliant actor to explore the anuj character by his acting....i kw he is not just acting he is living anuj for that moment n hence the outcome is brilliant as we kw.. they should use him properly as trump card not to take him granted..just to keep him as lover boy... It's not enough n not getting him enough screen space. That's why Need to increase his screen space in epi instead of increasing ss of there hero sp ..after all We love to taadofying him.. 😍😍

What u say girls

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wowowow! G!👏 Your posts are awaited for the exact reason....I get to add to my perspectives. This time oof.....is there anything you haven't thought of?! Goodness this is a paper worthy analysis/article!

Some of the points your mentioned are the ones I hadn't even stopped to ponder! And now I know what the science behind the missing essence is all about! Like you said Anu's and Anuj's stepping up is highly important. And even more so their confession. I really wanna see the quick witted Kapadia back in action!


There was a good telling by an author whose workshop I'd attended once. "If the story needs to disclose something, do that then and then, you'll get hundreds of other reasons to add a suspenseful twist later"


Brilliant post! This needs, needs to reach the writers!👏

Edited by Bucky - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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I have only this to sum up the episode today

Vanraj shah - slimeball🤮🤢

Anuj Kapadia - furball😍😍😍


Vanraj was like a hyenah preying upon mukku😡 waiting to hit her at the most weak & vulnerable moment and swallow her whole 😡


Anu better step up her game and shield mukku from the predator Vanraj 😕

From what I saw & feel mukku is falling straight into his trap

Vanraj will use saam dhaam dandh bedh every trick in the book to trap mukku


Sending Pakhi to US decision is also a distractor to keep Anu entangled with family issues so that he keeps playing mind games with mukku with no interruption 😡


I say it again

The day Anu burns him down to the ground am seriously gonna get drunk

Now I need to calm down after watching Vanraj flare his nostrils 🤔 all the time 😵

Precap : ANUPAMA is all ready to kill with her looks 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 Gorgeous !!!!!!







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Posted: 4 years ago
#47

yr gayatri kaise itna lamba likh leti ho😲

pehle itna sochna phir likhna kitna time jata hoag yr sach mein👏

but as usual you covered every point


and ye yaha sabko pata h yr ki maan scene ab sirf lollypop bankar reh gaye that's why i was not happy with that anu vs v promo

anu ki professional growth gayi tel lene uski personal groeth bhi gayi tel lene

aur maan ki as a couple growth bhi gayi tel lene

it's just bahut sare romantic scenes shoot karlo and daily episode mein 1-2 minute ke liye fir kardo bss

twitter par sabka dhyan waha chala jayega aur hum jo marji chahe dikhaye


but i m happy twitter par bahut log h jois cheej se na khush h

unhe dikh raha h ki akhir yaha ho kya raha h

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunshine36

Iss Lion-e-shaitaan, dhuk-reeyana ko humari Darbaar mein bakoobi andon se swaagat karna na booliyen🥚🥚!! Pls excuse my urdu aur iss saale ko kuch toh pheke maron!

I agree. It was very irritating to watch his scenes

Today's episode was not just blood boiling, it was blood curdling!! Mein boil hothe hothe paneer ban gayi lekin yeh kameena sudra nahi🤬🤬🤬🤬Seriously are makers crazy? Wtf are they trying to show? Why are all the women shown as idiots being manipulated by some Greek god? This man has the audacity to play on a girl's trauma and literally threatens ex wife to turn a blind eye to his nonsense. Yeh kya women empowerment hai? And why is Anu still doubting whether Mr shah galat nikle toh? Galat nikle toh? Seriously Anu? I usually keep my reviews balanced and fun coz I dont want any of us to start our day feeling pissed or yuckyy but trust me thats all you feel watching today's epi!! So I am sorry if my tone or writing upsets anyone and am also sorry that we are still watching this show!! Maa kasam if not for Anuj, aaaaaghhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!😤😤😤😤😤. The only time my blood managed to cool down was when Anuj called Anu "mere babu, mere sona, mere baby"!!! Yeh makers kya karre yaar! Aaj ka lollipop thamadhiya and social media wil have a zillion shots from various angles right from Anuj's nose to his bum!! Sudrenge nahi hum🙄🙄🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️

Bold 1 - Truly watching his scene I had you in my mind. I can understand how does it feel especially when you and other friends who write reviews on the episode. It becomes very hard to do it

Bold 2 - I knew this would surely happen since the party night. He still does not know about the accident. I think once he knows about it that will be his final card that he will play on Mukku.

Bold 3- I totally agree forever on this

Episode begins with this waahiyad shah manipulating Mukku. His dialogues "tum apne bhai se bilkul alag ho" and "mein tumhare barosa nahi tod saktha" "mein tumse share kar patha hoon" is a reverse psychology used on trauma victims. When he says he trusts her, she gets the confidence that she is not broken and it gives the person an external validation that they are normal too! When she is complimented on being different from her bro, he is trying to say she does need her brother's shadow and need not be protected by anyone. This gives all abuse victims such high. This is why we usually find broken people getting more attracted to manipulative and toxic ppl. An outsider can deffo see the unhealthy equation but the person involved cannot as it almost feels like an addiction but the real question is, Is Mukku getting manipulated??? Observe her very closely! She has a smirk on her face when he pukes nonsense but the moment he makes eye contact with her, she makes a puppy face! Her expressions in many scenes literally read"tu khel beta, mein bhi khelke dhekoongi aur iss bar tujhe bhi saath le dooboongi"🤔🤔

Bold 1 - This is the first wedge he added to Mukku's and Anuj's relation

Bold 2- This makes me scared more for Anuj because he again told Anu that he is totally broken and I just hope that my fears doesn't come true

Bold 3- Even I have noticed that too. And I too hope that it turns out to be true and I'm proved wrong

Until then I don't trust the makers at all.

Anu shares everything with Anuj and asserts on how Mr shah is wrong by instilling the wrong principles and ideologies in life! When she doubts whether ye wahi puraane shah hai, Anuj reminds her ki if that is the case, she is also 'new Anupamaaaaaaa' and knows what needs to be done! They have a cute banter and Anu leaves to give Mukku her meds!😃😃


Back in rattlesnake cabin🐍🐍..he makes a final move by shedding fake tears to get M to feel sympathetic and just when she wipes the glycerin- cheater-tears that holds pain of decades of abuse in both his marraiges, Anu walks in! I wanted to laugh on her face when she has her face transfixed on his and Mukku's hands together. Its almost as if her brain dint want to process what she just witnessed😂😂😂 she gives M her meds and V keeps butting in to promise M that he wil take care of her here on..abbey tu nurse hai kya?? 😑😑

Anu confronts him and the most outrageous dialogue shoots out of his mouth. "Mujhe mukku ko sambhaalna hai, tum bachon ko sambaalo aakir tum maa jo ho"...mera hunter leke aao re!!! Anyone else wanted to whip him with a car antenna? His gives sh$t about his kids. I am sorry to say but Anu deserves this! Kya dialogues maare issne, Mr shah ek ache pitha hai! Pad gayi dil ko sukoon madam ji???🤨🤨😠😠😤 woh promo dialogue "jab bhi aap galat kadham utaaye hai mujhe apke saamne paaoge' was scraped from this epi. Felt that scene ended abruptly just like the show's storylines😒🙄😏😏 pls correct me if am wrong guys!!

Bold 1 - Anu should have straightly denied. She should have said I won't, I took care of them for 26 years, now it's your turn to do it. You look after your kids and I will look after my Mukku.

Bold 2- Not sure, maybe they just did not add it to the scene there but might be used later in the upcoming episode


Kinjal and Samar have the most sweetest conversation. She makes him understand on how Nandu is all alone and he needs to atleast talk to her. He recollects everything his mom says and is in deep thoughts. He looks much more calm and composed than yesterday. Hope they wrap on this track soon coz tomorrow its the other child's turn🤦‍♀️🤦‍♀️ I repeat-- Kinjal needs a solid role. Nidhi is a lovely actor and she needs more significant role in the show!!! 🙌🙌


Anu is tensed about not just SaNan but also Mukku. She is still asking herself whether that Yamraj galat ho sakthe ki nahi? Meri maa...tum kaho toh usse kal bhains par hunter ke saath bejoon thaaki poori tasali ho haye yeh Yamraj hi hai????😡😡

Mukku jump scares her and spills coffee on her hand and the lover boy of the show immediately nurses her hand by ice therapy😍😍 her gaze fixed on him and Mukku leaves the love birds alone. Anu is still lost in thoughts when he keeps calling her babu, shona and baby to get her attention but she is zoned out! He snaps her back to reality and asks her whether he can hold the chakri when she flies the kite. It almost felt like he asked her out on a desi prom night😂😂😂 her response "jab aap pathang udayenge mein chakri pakadoongi aur jab mein pathang udaongi toh aap chakri pakadiye" symbolizes their partnership! When one does the weight lifting the other provides support and when one tries to fly, the other becomes the anchor!! Beta tu romance kartha rahe aur woh alibaba tera poora company lekar doobega🤣🤣🤣

MaAn's scene was so cute


Precap- the little badtameezi shah is happy that her dad gives green signal for USA trip and mom says noooo!!! Anu and V again at logger heads! Anu is truly gorgeous in that saree and our ladka feels so too when he removes nazar from any evil eye..reminded me of when he did the same thing without her knowledge and saathiya song playing in the bg🧿🧿🧿

Bold- Totally agree. And this time he does it openly and not in hiding. Truly the previous time he did it. That is one of my all time fav scene and the song was a total cherry on the cake because it was my fav one.


Verdict- I dont know!!😂dhekna hai toh dheko behenon! If you like the Anu vs vanraj track, pls do watch. If you like only lollipop watch MaAn on twitter or insta!! I still feel Mukku is playing along. Anyone watchinng entire epi pls observe and share here what you think coz otherwise I need treatment too thanks to this waahiyad shahthooo💦💦

Thanks for tagging sunny. Today had to post soon. Had a hard time checking 50+ pages yesterday.

Edited by saito - 4 years ago

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