Sai FF 'Afterglow' - Epilogue pg. 61 (new) - Page 15

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Posted: 4 years ago

I did that more as a fact ki she doesn't understand the changed relationship for her Sai is still Mami.

Had added few dialouges there but then skipped them later, was feeling too draggy.


Pakhi isme chahiye. and she is exactly doing what you interpreted.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hii

Unable to read due to festival. All four chapter read at a time .its simply super loved ur take. Really virat feel what SAI felt may not possible. Virat is simply selfies .liked Dr SUMIT .he is interested @ sai. I haven't expected virat disclosure about sai and his marriage and divorce with his friend SUMIT. As a sairat lover want SAI and virat together. But not cost of sai's self respect. Pakhi still eyeing virat? Eagerly waiting for next update .

Thanks for tagging me

Happy writing

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Posted: 4 years ago

Virat!!😡

Story me bhi Pakhi ko mana na kar paaya...itna sab hua tab bhi...

Sai bai wanted to be clear but awkwardness, Sumit is the man

Nice update 🤠

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Posted: 4 years ago

Samit bond is so beautiful, with no expectations or judgements. Just 2 humans being themselves.

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Posted: 4 years ago

I'm surprised that Sumit has not revealed virats residual feelings....virat really needs to make certain conscious attempts to right his wrongs. Being bechaara dont vut it,!

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Posted: 4 years ago

That is what I am aiming for. He is same age as V but completely sensible and mature.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Sumit is the man Sai deserves.

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Posted: 4 years ago

I don't want him to. Maybe not now.

It's a budding attraction but nothing romantic yet and neither it is on so friendlier terms. They are just colleagues as of now.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome story

Still he didn’t understand pakhi’s advances such a dumb and foolish man(and also a police officer)

I thought I will be getting rid of pakhi in ur story but u also wrote about her

She is such a disgusting character

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Posted: 4 years ago

I wrote another one where Pakhi is completely reformed. Wasn't digestible to many 😆

This time I want to explore writing grey character and who better than her

Thank you for reading and reaching out 🤗

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