Mukku’s Bomb - Man OS | Updated 25/1: Part 1-10 - Page 11

Ekdum mast Wala likha maaza aa gaya

part 5

so beautiful as well as emotional update

you portray maan's emotions very beautifully

anu wants to go home but anuj doesn't want to let her go because he is also right at his place 26 saal ka wait kam nahi hota yr kisi bhi insaan ke liye

but today anu also showed her pain to him

she loves him she adores him

she respects him

but she also wants sometime to move on completely to heal her wounds which are very deep

and today anuj understood that how deep her pain is and he is understanding her condition also

i don't know humein kabhi ye sab show mein dekhne milega ya nahi but at least yaha forum stories mein to mil hi raha h

but i m really hoping ki show mein bhi aise scenes dikahye jaha anu apna pain anuj ke saath share kare and anuj apne intezaar ke kisse uske saath baante

it will be great to watch all this

any ways thanks a lot

and i m sorry for late reply

part 6

awesome update

poor mukku and GK😆 especially mukku bechari ne to accha hi socha tha yaha to sab ulta ho gaya(according to them obviously becaus in reality sab kuch bahut jyada hi accha ho gaya uska plan work kar gaya)

anuj is so mischievous as well as cute

he is right usne kuch jhooth thodi bola h bss pura sach nahi bataya

aur in sabne milkar use itna cheda h to kuch haq to uska bhi banta h 🤣

flashback scene was nice

he was talking to her seriously ki abhi kuch time kisi ko nahi batayenge after all inhe bhi to teenage romance wala phase jeena h

but anu ki to desires jaag rahi thi🤪

but itna kuch sehne ke baad they both deserve every happiness of this world and so much love in their lives

Originally posted by: snehaz16

Review

Dear sanara.. your writing is amazing.. the way you present bith characters, the smallest detail, their thoughts and expressions.. everything is amazing..

Just hope to see something on these lines in the serial track as well.

and thanks for giving us the courtship phase.. you know that courtship is the most beautiful phase of any relationship where you got to know your partner from a closer perspective.. these memories you cherish for your entire lifetime.. even after 30-40 years of marriage..

Hope Anu- Anuj to hope best of time with themselves and you give us countless moments to cherish..

Keep writing.. you are amazing !!!

Awe thank you so much for your sweet feedback! Yes I think it’s great that the show is depicting such interesting and developed characters - who are older too - going through this. I hope it will make it more celebrated to viewers.

Originally posted by: grace2021

Lovely Uet again ..I am ready for their secret romance.

Aaj har taraf se khushi ki rain ho rahi hai.

Thanks dear for the tag. I am looking forward for tomorrow.

I know! Suddenly even the episodes upped their MaAn quotient. I am glad 😁

Originally posted by: Meghuzz

Ayooo this is sooo cute...imagine jab sabko pata chalega...pitai hojayegi inn dono ki...😂😂😂😂

I know! I actually started this whole OS because of this whole secret romance idea - and now the confusion etc would be quite funny 😂

Originally posted by: nish_vir

Was it bad if she wanted to crawl into his lap right there and then.

🤪gurl! Tumne toh sixer ke bhi chakke chutta did iss line se. Matlab this one was a mix of everything- desire, frustration, need, desperation, love... everything! And coming from anu in a situation when Anuj was lowkey trying to seduce her was so......sex(y)🤣

I need a follow up on this scene! Agli baar, anu ki baat dil main nhi rehni chahie!🤣anuj ki hawa nikal jaegi aisa hua toh

Ahahaha I’m glad you liken it. In this story, I’ve been keeping this aspect a bit more subtle. So far. But I don’t think it will last. 😂

Yea, that’s the thing, I don’t want Anu to be this spectator to her own romance. Which women are often shown to be. So yea… you will get your wish 😁

Originally posted by: tanu90

Thank you so much for tagging! This is a very beautiful feel good story! The confession was no doubt the best but I loved how you retained the characteristics of Anuj and Anupama from the show. For example Anuj giving her time to get used to the intimacy and being the perfect gentleman that he is in the show. Your eye for detail needs to be lauded my dear! Could imagine every part very easily. Can't wait to read ahead.

Love

Noorie

Awe thanks so much for your lovely feedback! I’m so glad that you enjoyed reading it! 😁😁😁

Originally posted by: Iruuu

Wah wah 😛😂 anuj ne Kya mast tease Karna start kiya hain gk aur mukku ko😉...aur chup chup ke romance hayeee 😭🥰.. please update soon ☺️

She will get her revenge. Don’t you worry 😉😂

Originally posted by: Kras1

part 5

so beautiful as well as emotional update

you portray maan's emotions very beautifully

anu wants to go home but anuj doesn't want to let her go because he is also right at his place 26 saal ka wait kam nahi hota yr kisi bhi insaan ke liye

but today anu also showed her pain to him

she loves him she adores him

she respects him

but she also wants sometime to move on completely to heal her wounds which are very deep

and today anuj understood that how deep her pain is and he is understanding her condition also

i don't know humein kabhi ye sab show mein dekhne milega ya nahi but at least yaha forum stories mein to mil hi raha h

but i m really hoping ki show mein bhi aise scenes dikahye jaha anu apna pain anuj ke saath share kare and anuj apne intezaar ke kisse uske saath baante

it will be great to watch all this

any ways thanks a lot

and i m sorry for late reply

Originally posted by: Kras1

part 6

awesome update

poor mukku and GK especially mukku bechari ne to accha hi socha tha yaha to sab ulta ho gaya(according to them obviously becaus in reality sab kuch bahut jyada hi accha ho gaya uska plan work kar gaya)

anuj is so mischievous as well as cute

he is right usne kuch jhooth thodi bola h bss pura sach nahi bataya

aur in sabne milkar use itna cheda h to kuch haq to uska bhi banta h

flashback scene was nice

he was talking to her seriously ki abhi kuch time kisi ko nahi batayenge after all inhe bhi to teenage romance wala phase jeena h

but anu ki to desires jaag rahi thi

but itna kuch sehne ke baad they both deserve every happiness of this world and so much love in their lives

Wow Kras! Your reviews were worth the wait! Thank you for taking the time to read and respond so carefully! 💕

Yea, I guess this vulnerability that Anu showed kind of happened with this lolipop flashback scene we saw recently. But it’s sort of annoying how Anuj just said “proud of you” and then wondered off. I would have hoped that they would have exchanged some better moments about it. It’s not a small thing to discuss with someone you are so close to.


re:Mukku, yes. There is much more confusion to come based on this 😂 she’s the type to double down on her plan! She’s not giving up anytime soon! It’s just going to lead to lots of amusing situation.

Glad you are enjoying 💕