Shivi FF: Chooriyan (Part 17- Pg.74) (complete) - Page 52

Can’t believe this is over! Time to read the whole thing again! I’m so glad Rita ne akal di thodi Raavi ko!

Finally this dobi got some sense🤣

Loved this story❣️❣️

Arre aise kaise khatammmm ... 😲😭

One last romantic epilogue with these two please ? Pretty please? Mann nahin bhara .. kitni khoobsurat story thi yeh .. meri sab se favourite .. thoda romance de do na please ?😒💔

Finally! Phew! Raavi, dobi ki batti jal gayi 😕

Kitni bolt hai yeh aur Shiva ko uske muh me duct tape lagana chahiye 😆

Nevertheless, thanks for giving us a happy ending and not stretchhhhhhhhhhing it anymore❤️
Going to read the story all over again and then will visit my all time favorite - Deewani Bhabi ke nushke

Finally ❤️❤️ but I really need a epilogue 😉

Beautiful ending ❤. Thank you so much for this story ❤.

That was such a wholesome ending to a wonderful story. But I’m super greedy and I want more of their chemistry. Can we get an epilogue please? Preferably of Shiva sataoing his new bride Raavi because of all that he had to endure due to her absolute dobiness? Pretty please with a cherry on top??? Please???

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

That was such a wholesome ending to a wonderful story. But I’m super greedy and I want more of their chemistry. Can we get an epilogue please? Preferably of Shiva sataoing his new bride Raavi because of all that he had to endure due to her absolute dobiness? Pretty please with a cherry on top??? Please???

YES YES please please please 🙏🏻

Itna amazing build up tha iss ka .. end mein kuch toh hona chaiye na .. if you're ketching our drift☺️

Originally posted by: ananya.2

OG dobi Raavi writer 🤣🤣🤣
I just saw the clip where Raavi admits to herself that she’s a dobi and that was hilarious. It satisfied my dobi Raavi heart

Yes you are!!!

Cant believe it's over!!! Hope you're planning to write something new soon!!

This was just too good. I loved how Rita pushed her to confess her feelings (finally)!

this was cutest till now😘😘