Aftershocks Of Love- AbhiRa TS- Last Part Page 10 - Page 12

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

It was getting longer and I was not able to tell properly of how I felt... So work with this for a little until I complete the others.

Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai. Intezaar Karo balike 😌

Remember this when I came you wait for next OS. I am notorious for not posting a completed OS. Ask Grey

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

Remember this when I came you wait for next OS. I am notorious for not posting a completed OS. Ask Grey

Amnuuuu this is wrong... I have not completed writing the review... It takes time. I have to write and then type but you have completed the OS and still not posted!!! This is so bad!!!!!

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Amnuuuu this is wrong... I have not completed writing the review... It takes time. I have to write and then type but you have completed the OS and still not posted!!! This is so bad!!!!!

I have not completed one, hell I haven't even started, just a concept. Thand rakh!

Tum dono ladai Baadhai mai karo...story likho and post karo! We are waiting 😂❤️!

Blues, the Abhi you have characterized here...I know I'd the same Abhi we see on our screen. But yours is so much more! I wish Harshad gets the opportunity to play his part better( script ) wise! 20 mins ke episode Mai 5-7 min usko dikhate hai🥺kya kare

I unreserved on page 15!! ❤️ I'm really sorry for being so late. Just been a little busy!! and thank you so much for the tag😳

Jealous Abhimanyu is a treat to watch... U wrote it so well.. Not creating a scene but making his point.. He accepted that there will b many men adoring her, and and and... It is not her fault... That is Abhimanyu.. How can i not love this man.. Finally they r together.

Originally posted by: sheet_leher

Blues 💙

You have my whole heart and soul. I stalk the forum quite often, waiting for a story to drop, a part to come my way. I've always wanted to write something, but I have no confidence. Hence, I read. Read so that my thoughts get words. And, you're one of those people. You create a painting with your words. We see your world. It may not satisfy you at times, but it leaves a lasting impression on us :')Don't be afraid and just write. There is nothing more excruciating and satisfying in this world for a writer to put their thoughts on a document.

Your Abhi and Akshara make my world spin. I say yours, because you created these gems. You gave them a life that they deserve. A world that is theirs and yours only. And oh how I loved them. How I felt his frustration when Abhi questions the universe as to why he fell in love with this cheeky girl xD How I understood the significance of symbols, because her anklet, her bindi and her bangles all screamed his name. You make love so natural, so honest and something that we should all treasure. Sometimes, I felt jealous of the bond Abhi and Akshu have xD OMG you are so good for my ego! AbhiRa are two parts of the same puzzle. Wait till the real confession in the show, these two will be setting goals.

The green eyed monster raised its ugly head for a quick second. And for some reason, my heart beat picked up xD idk, I like the jealous Abhi, the possessive Abhi. The one who wants Akshu to himself, and yet knows that this beauty deserves all the adoration in the world.. Meri Jaan, you attract all the moths xD hayyee ❤️❤️ Like recognizes like, jealously is good when its healthy. He needs to protect her prison her, Man understands that.

I can't believe Abhi kept his world. Till the end. He wanted her to come to him. Beg for him. Want him from her whole heart. There's no going back. And Akshu did it. She won over her man. It's very simple actually, if you love, you'll find your way to each other. And these two did :')

Thank you, thank you for sharing this with us. For writing a story that'll stay with us forever. I'm gonna read and re-read (already have actually, but still).

Love and love

💕

Thank you so much for this lovely reply! I can not tell you how much this means to me. It is so encouraging when your work is appreciated.

Love,

Blues

Originally posted by: Mushfika_01

Bluessss🤗

I hope you already know this but you write so so beautifully!! That was such a beautiful end to the TS, i absolutely loved reading it. my favorite part was how he was scowling and shaking his head when he remembered how she acted when he was trying to check her pulse, with his heart in his throat worried-sick🤣 How he had managed to fall in love with the most frustrating girl in the world was beyond him. LMAOOOO!!! this part was the cutest. I can legit see imagine his face as he said this to himself. Well, guess who's fault it was😳 *drumrolls* ABHIMANYU BIRLAAAAAA🤗🤣and this is just the beginning 😉

the bracelet scene had my heart melt

It seems to make its way to you anyway.

Yours, Gharelu Doctor.”

this was so adorable. it's like throughout all the things that have transpired between them, from the first meeting to the heartbreak to now the blooming love, the bracelet kind of knows how significant of a part it plays and had done everything to keep these two together, giving a reason to unite them every single time. and now that akshara finally knows and accepts her feelings - out loud- she makes sure it stays where it has always rightly belonged. It was like through the bracelet she accepted and admitted to herself and him that her heart indeed belongs to him. I loveeeeddd this part so so much❤️

LMAO the way he just made an appearance in front of Dr Ayush Bajaj when he asked her out for a coffee. "She is busy"🤣Achha? Kaise busy hai, zara mein bhi to sunu😆 so possessive and i love possessive MLs😳

the cabin conversation was another treat. these few lines have my whole heart:

“Do you know what I do for a living, Akshara?

I am a heart surgeon. Do you know what surgeons pride themselves the most on? Their control.

You make me lose all my control, Akshu, How do you think that makes me feel?”

what a dialogue. I love love loveeedd this part!! and i couldn't agree more with abhimanyu. Losing control - isn't that what had been happening to him ever since that trip? It is probably be the most frustrating thing for a surgeon - losing control. and yet, i don't think he would have it any other way. this is one thing that opposes his professional traits as a surgeon and he would embrace it with all his heart. because the person making him lose that control is Akshara...his akshu!

and finally the purpose of this TS is served. Akshu indeed does come to him. she confesses and tell him what he means to her. and he seals her last words with his kiss☺️

This was such a beautiful TS Blues. We are all so very grateful that we have a writer like you on this forum who can make our days with her talent. I hope you never stop writing and continue to bless us with more of your OS, TS, SS and FFs. 🤗

@ RED- He is hopelessly in love, the faster he accepts the easier it will be for him.

@Orange- Khud Baat karta nahi hain aur kisi doosre ko karne nahi data, Kambakht Ishq Nikamma kar deta hai

@Green- Before Akshu he was prided himself on being an excellent doctor and surgeon. that is why he is always irritated, even Akshu has started calling him Chidku🤣

@Blue- It means a lot coming from you! Thanks so much for the reply. And now its your turn to write something.

Love Blues

Originally posted by: Grey-licious

Blueee 🤗

am finally here with my comment

ufff maza aagya read karke

I can totally imagine abhi doing the same that you've written

specially in the last update

your portrayal of abhi was so good

even better than the writers

now write more OS phast phast

Look who is finally made an appearance! Thanks for the reply.

@ RED- Did you forget who you were talking to? Besides I am too upset to write anything at the moment.

Originally posted by: Nikki_love

I think this one can have a prologue where you write about Akshus family visiting Abhi's as planned by Mahima...so nice moments and lotsa romance! Plsssssssssssssssss.

Love n hugs!

Nice Try Kid! I like your enthusiasm. Maybe! 🤗❤️