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Posted: 4 years ago
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Very beautiful. Please so write more

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Lovely glimpse into what their mornings will be like once they are together. He will be someone Anupama can rootho with in this manner. Not something she has had the freedom to do in the last 26 years.


Thank you for the tag :)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Anuj wakes up with the sunlight falling on his face.

Lucky sunlight😆

Anu: Juice rakha hai jaldi se pejiye, mere wapas aane se pehle ye khatam hona chahiye

Stop behaving like his wifey already anu🤪

Damn, probably those medicines, it must be there effect.

Oh it was medicine effect 🤦🏼‍♀️

And here my tharki mind was singing jaadu hai nasha hai madhoshiya hai in my head(thinking that it was anu effect)😆

Anu: koi natak nahi, naak bandh kariye aur ek ghoot mein peejaiye. Main dekh rahi hu, chaliye jaldi kare

Behen itni chinta hai to khud apne haath se pila de na...dekh kaise gataak se pee jata hai

Tere haath se to zeher bhi pee le humara majnu banda☺️

Anuj, closing his nose with one hand, drinks from the other and finished.

Bhai kya aatank macha rakhi hai anu ne🤣banda kitna darta hai😆

However, Anuj was quick to grab her pallu and make her stop. Please thodi der baitho na kuch baat karte hai

Haaan pileeej baith jaa na anu...aur baat k beech me time mile to thora kaand bhi kar lena😳

Is it too much to ask for 👉👈

Anuj: To tumhe us main wo chumbak mila kya

Chumbak ka to pata nahi Anuj par is ko hospital me vannu uncle se ek 'chumma' zaroor mila🤡

Anu: Haan, jab tak aap puri tarah se thik nahi ho jate main yahi rahungi

Gajabbbb Dada Giri hai🤣🤣

Anu: Anuj mere pass time nahi hai, bolna hai to jaldi boliye

Anu behen is bande ko I love you bolne me 26 saal laga to ab kaise jaldi bol de...give him kam se kam 2000 saal ka time🌝


Anuj looks into her eyes and says, “agar tum aise mera khayal rukhugi to main puri zindagi bimaar reh sakta hu”

Meanwhile gareeb me wondering ki dawai aur hospital ka kharcha kaun bharega poori zindagi🤪

Anuj: Anu, I am really sorry, please understand, main sapne main bhi tumhe hurt nahi kar sakta. Please maaf kar do

Haan anu sach bol raha hai bechara....sapne me to bas ye apna seena show off karta hai tere saamne aur tujhe ghoorta hai👍🏼

Anu: Anuj, ye rules main nahi tha, aap ko aur kuch chahiye to boliye

Bande ko tera haath chahiye shadi k liye...bol degi??

Then he turns to face Anu and says I know I have hurt you, I am sorry, please mujh maaf kar do

Is galti ki koi maafi nahi hai...tumhe to faansi milegi beta...wait and watch🤪

Anuj: Aise nahi Anu, mera inaam abhi baki hai, lao mujhe mera chumbak do

My gutter mind read it laao mujhe mera chumma do😂😭😂😭



Bro I swear bara maza aaya parhne me mujhe❤️

I hope you don't mind my stupid commentary 😅

Mai kya karu bro control nahi hota🤣

But I loved every bit of it

Edited by shriz - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Uff ufff ufff yaar! Are you sure you aren't part of the character sketching team!

I could exactly imagine these scenes play out in front of my eyes! Intensity bhi, pain bhi, pyaar bhi and concern bhi.

Aahhh if we don't get anything on similar lines on the show I'm going to be so disappointed! Your work has made me roofcrashingly excited for the next week now!👏


Thanks for the tag❤️

Edited by Bucky - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Haaa chummak 😭😭 Aur MaAn k ki unkahee feelings 🥰🥰

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: arya212002

Wah… meri jaan…. Kya likha hai tumne 😘😘😘❤️❤️❤️❤️

Kal raat se jo MaAn withdrawal ho raha tha na, now this seems medication for it. Absolutely beautiful 🤩 🤩🤩🤩🤩…. Aur likhte rahe aur entertain karte rahe


Also thanks for the tag🤗



Thank you too Jaan..

i know, we all were getting low on Vitamin A (Anuj) and Vitamin M (MaAn).

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: U_nicorn

Anuj looks into her eyes and says, “agar tum aise mera khayal rukhugi to main puri zindagi bimaar reh sakta hu”

👏

Haaaiiii....you've written soooo well ya!!! Was literally like watching an entire episode, with expressions and mind voices☺️

Having no episode so far this did the job! I hope makers also show these type of scenes instead of Shah drama!

Do write more!!!


Thank you.. glad you liked it..

Kash, makers troll ke saath saath humare ye OS se bhi thodi inspiration le le... ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyotikaur

Alag hi pyaar hai isko magnet se yaar...matlab kuch bhi krega uske liye awesome...keep on writing💓


Yaar, mujhe bhi hai.. i am so so waiting for them to show, its safe..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: HpTheChosenOne

Sahhhiiiii!!! Bohot khoob 🥰🥰 I loved it 👏👌

Please continue further😊🤗

Thank you for the tag dear!!


Thank you...

Koshish jari rahegi

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meriam25

Yaar komal this was so so beautiful ❤️❤️❤️...

I was grinning and blushing when I was reading..

I hope we get something cute along those lines ☺️☺️☺️.

Ty for the tag .... Pls writr more and pls do tag me. Ladki ☺️☺️


Thanks Moni

Ahh, glad you liked it ❤️

Me too, fingers crossed.. MaAn are so cute.

I am sure they will surpass this with Gaurav-Rups fabulous acting. 🤪

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