Pandya Store|Episode Discussion #136 - Page 69

Originally posted by: Palak2812

Yeah

I always praise them for writing good romance but they can't do good storytelling.

Their 1 liners too r good.

But

They are not a good script writer.

That's why I want them to stay with show but want another good screen writer for the show.

Agar woh bhi nahi kar sakte and atleast start translating the original and copy paste and add their own creativity but don't be the lone writers of the show.

They pick good topics, they even start well but execution is horrible and ending toh hain he shit.

After the kidnapping track when the other writer left the show

Not even a single track is executed well and ending toh itni fhuski hoti hain.

Exactly palak

I have never seen such a phuski ending to a third angle track on itv ever.

Dusre shows mai kitna drama hota hai, aise moments hote hai ki mann kare uthkar taali bajao.

Like imagine if disha was grey and tried to harm raavi. Dhara and rishita use expose karte, shiva use sunata.suman would have regretted her actions. Kitna mast dramatic track hotaa.literally paisa vasool.

But nahi.she just asked 2 questions which nobody answered and she went away. Atleast shiva ko to woh strongly question kar sakti thi na? Nobody in the family also questioned shiva.

They really need to work on giving a good climax.isliye mujhe anita track se bhi koi umeed nahi hai.uska exposure bhi phuski hoga

Originally posted by: majoni03

All the four brothers are owners of Pandya Store and they all have equal rights over the income they get from Pandya store. Wont they need money for Krish's education, his marriage, Dev Rishita and Shiva Raavi's children? Middle class families ko 15lakhs save karne mein bahut saal lag jaate hain

Ha na

And I don’t get their sense only of opening second branch ? Inko khak koi business aata , second branch kholne se pehle 1st branch bohot acchi chalni hoti hai like bohot profitable usse monthly expenses , phir emergency keliye paise and savings ye sab karne par alag se second branch keliye capital Jodhna Padta hai.lekin inka pehle branch hi kaisa toh bhi chalet hai up at se tehy were planning baccha 😕bhai baccha keliye bhi financially ready hona padta hai like pehle 3_4 saal itna Kharcha nahi hota lekin baad mein badd jata hai .

Inka kuch planning nahi kuch nahi aurr chale second branch kholne or baccha paida karne

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Right

Baki sab aise dominate karate hai ki sab in ki wajah se chalta hai

Baaki galati kare toh unki galti bol kar maaf karate lekin in hone galti kiya toh woh gunha

@bOld: Gussa kyun ho rahi ho Vaishnavi it's Choubay's with their sasta nasha pro max🤪

People attatched to Shivi because of this only🤗... Since Dhara sacrifice glorified in show at every second episode now people start getting detached with her character... And Shivi are called out people get more and more connected to them

PS: Choubay's does not want this but it all ends up like this only😆

Kd kept his promise. Instead of shivi

Kd posted kdice picture . The red marriage dress.🤣🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Exactly palak

I have never seen such a phuski ending to a third angle track on itv ever.

They made her the person being wronged when it was Raavi

Instead she got the blaim that Shiva risked his life to correct her mistake.

Dusre shows mai kitna drama hota hai, aise moments hote hai ki mann kare uthkar taali bajao.

That's why we saw such a huge TRP drop

Like imagine if disha was grey and tried to harm raavi. Dhara and rishita use expose karte, shiva use sunata.suman would have regretted her actions. Kitna mast dramatic track hotaa.literally paisa vasool.

It would have been freaking amazing.

Atleast Shiva toh jawab deta but no

Mahaan and bechaari Disaster

But nahi.she just asked 2 questions which nobody answered and she went away. Atleast shiva ko to woh strongly question kar sakti thi na? Nobody in the family also questioned shiva.

I hated it

Raavi didn't asked this even when she was the personal jiske emotions ke saath khela tha Kaandyas ne

But Disaster joh married man ko pappi jhappi deti hain ko bechaari bana diya.

They really need to work on giving a good climax.isliye mujhe anita track se bhi koi umeed nahi hai.uska exposure bhi phuski hoga

@Bold: Worst is

It is just not about 3rd angle

But all the tracks

Batwaara track, Jeera kaand and all those tracks all had shit ending.

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Ha na

And I don’t get their sense only of opening second branch ? Inko khak koi business aata , second branch kholne se pehle 1st branch bohot acchi chalni hoti hai like bohot profitable usse monthly expenses , phir emergency keliye paise and savings ye sab karne par alag se second branch keliye capital Jodhna Padta hai.lekin inka pehle branch hi kaisa toh bhi chalet hai up at se tehy were planning baccha 😕bhai baccha keliye bhi financially ready hona padta hai like pehle 3_4 saal itna Kharcha nahi hota lekin baad mein badd jata hai .

Inka kuch planning nahi kuch nahi aurr chale second branch kholne or baccha paida karne

No bro

Hum kon hain ?

Kuch nahi aata hume

Suman and her sons are the only real Gujju and the best buisness family.

They can't be wrong rather whole world is wrong and doing the business wrong way.

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Ha na

And I don’t get their sense only of opening second branch ? Inko khak koi business aata , second branch kholne se pehle 1st branch bohot acchi chalni hoti hai like bohot profitable usse monthly expenses , phir emergency keliye paise and savings ye sab karne par alag se second branch keliye capital Jodhna Padta hai.lekin inka pehle branch hi kaisa toh bhi chalet hai up at se tehy were planning baccha 😕bhai baccha keliye bhi financially ready hona padta hai like pehle 3_4 saal itna Kharcha nahi hota lekin baad mein badd jata hai .

Inka kuch planning nahi kuch nahi aurr chale second branch kholne or baccha paida karne

And upar actually itna gareel haina yeh lekin har cheez par celebration hota with decorations and lights then upar se aise saj dhajte hai jaisa inko kiene Manish Malhotra ya Ambani ke Diwali party mein boluya ho

Ata kaha ze hai itna paisa ? Kua se ?🤪

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Exactly palak

I have never seen such a phuski ending to a third angle track on itv ever.

Dusre shows mai kitna drama hota hai, aise moments hote hai ki mann kare uthkar taali bajao.

Like imagine if disha was grey and tried to harm raavi. Dhara and rishita use expose karte, shiva use sunata.suman would have regretted her actions. Kitna mast dramatic track hotaa.literally paisa vasool.

But nahi.she just asked 2 questions which nobody answered and she went away. Atleast shiva ko to woh strongly question kar sakti thi na? Nobody in the family also questioned shiva.

They really need to work on giving a good climax.isliye mujhe anita track se bhi koi umeed nahi hai.uska exposure bhi phuski hoga

The worst part was they made Shiva completely mute😕 even on the day she was leaving. This is the same guy who said on the Shiva 2.0 ME, "Raavi aur mein abhi bhi kayi taar se jude hui hain, rishta shuru nahi hua to kya khatam bhi nahi hua hai na"

And then when Disha asks him "abb bol do, tum Raavi ke saat apne rishte ko nahi maanta hai" the writers made Shiva look at Raavi? DAFUQ was that? They could have made him say, " 6 mahine ka time hai hamare paas, abhi bhi Raavi ke saat mera rishta khatam nahi hua, aur hamara rishta bilkul khokla nahi hai"

Disha calls their rishta khokla, and the writers didn't even give him anything to counter.

Infact Disha-Shiva was khokla based on looks, yes I repeat she went for him only for his looks and doesn't know a thing about him personally.

The justification of the 3rd angle is what pissed the audience after showing extensive history between Shiva and Raavi and making him spout dialogues in Mukteshwar "mein kabhi tujhe chodke nahi jaaonga, teri iffazat karan meri zimmedaari"

That's why Raavi brought the "tu kabhi bhi palat sakta hai".

It started out as addressing Shiva's insecurity but ended being Raavi's character growth, her jealousy, taking a stance to tell the truth and her trials and tribulations.

Now I understand if Raavi says she needs more time because "tu kabhi bhi palat sakta hai". He has done the opposite of what he promised her in Mukteshwar and she has forgotten that.

Originally posted by: Lovely2021

Kd kept his promise. Instead of shivi

Kd posted kdice picture . The red marriage dress.🤣🤣🤣🤣

For KD, both KDIce and ShiVi are the same😆

"jaise Shiva ke zindagi me kitni important hai Raavi, waise Kanwar Dhillon ke life me Alice, woh friend nahi hai meri family hai"😆

Originally posted by: mpks1

The worst part was they made Shiva completely mute😕 even on the day she was leaving. This is the same guy who said on the Shiva 2.0 ME, "Raavi aur mein abhi bhi kayi taar se jude hui hain, rishta shuru nahi hua to kya khatam bhi nahi hua hai na"

And then when Disha asks him "abb bol do, tum Raavi ke saat apne rishte ko nahi maanta hai" the writers made Shiva look at Raavi? DAFUQ was that? They could have made him say, " 6 mahine ka time hai hamare paas, abhi bhi Raavi ke saat mera rishta khatam nahi hua, aur hamara rishta bilkul khokla nahi hai"

Disha calls their rishta khokla, and the writers didn't even give him anything to counter.

Infact Disha-Shiva was khokla based on looks, yes I repeat she went for him only for his looks and doesn't know a thing about him personally.

The justification of the 3rd angle is what pissed the audience after showing extensive history between Shiva and Raavi and making him spout dialogues in Mukteshwar "mein kabhi tujhe chodke nahi jaaonga, teri iffazat karan meri zimmedaari"

That's why Raavi brought the "tu kabhi bhi palat sakta hai".

It started out as addressing Shiva's insecurity but ended being Raavi's character growth, her jealousy, taking a stance to tell the truth and her trials and tribulations.

Now I understand if Raavi says she needs more time because "tu kabhi bhi palat sakta hai". He has done the opposite of what he promised her in Mukteshwar and she has forgotten that.

You said it all

I was patiently waiting for shiva to have an outburst and tell disha off but that never happened.

I was waiting for raavi to have a breakdown and question Shiva's actions but that never happened either. Though I am satisfied with how her character handled the track and owned it.