Tumhi Dekho Na| MaAn | updated pt 2 pg 5/ 05.12 - Page 3

This was lovely! Waiting for the next part!

Show ke bharose rahe to kabhi aise pyare pyare maan moments nahi mil payenge😆

Chalo kam se kam yaha to milte hain

Bahut hi sundar cuteness se bharpur update❤️

Ufff! Ufff! Uff! So elegantly written, so pragmatic flowing!

Loved loved it! Bud you have a way with words and emotions! I've fallen heads over heels! Take a bow!

She sensed his hesitant attempt and snorted ever so slightly causing him lowkey embarrassment as he moved back to give her the space to step out of the car.

So intricately and mindfully added, this one Imagined a real scene being played out in front of my eyes!❤️

Am also sad at how short it is This hunger lives on, tenfold now

Eagerly awaiting the next. Thanks for writing this🤗 Thanks for the tag too.

Nice part, well penned down the emotions and inner thoughts.

Will wait for the next part.

No matter u forgot to tag me but chal chhod, I came to read it

Eagerly waiting for next one.. Only issue yar jab tak mood aata h tumhari post khatam ho jatihai... Main dubara padh rahi hoon ☺☺thanks for writing cute.

amazing write up dear

you showed their every emotion so nicely and deeply

actually i dont have words to describe

and i m terrible writer so main completely explain kar bhi nahi paungi how good it was🤪😆

so bss inhi 2 lines se mere emotions samajh lijiye😆

Originally posted by: hinz

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behen the inner feelings and the emotions likhna for these two, koi aapse sikhe!!!! very beautifully articulated!!! aise hi as they progress you put their thoughts and expressions in words.... even though its not shown explicitly on screen, wahi episode if i see again, i definitely can see these emotions as well!!!

Kudos hinzeee

Hinz!! Love you for making our weekend maanlicious . Your writing always reflect the essence of Maan. Waiting for more!! You just write beautifully.❤️🤗

What a beautiful story, you described it so well. I could feel every moment with them. I could even imagine Gaurav's expressions as you described! Plz write next update soon.

Hinz, I'll hold my mukka kiraya thoda zyada hai toh fir kabhi.

Onto the update then, jab tak anuj ne gaadi roki nhi, mujhe realize hi nhi hua ki they were in the car😆. Car wala romance huh....🤣( my thoughts are highly improper)

She giddily mouthed a soft thank youMatlab jab bhi ye ladki hamare ladke ko soft bhav deti hai toh main pighal jati hu.

Btw sab uss sequin saree ke phan ho gaye hain🤣Anuj show main nhi bola par sabke os main usse full compliment de rha hai. Oh the power of fandom.

He gestured to the cherished touch on his hand.

Usne uss din chua tha

Mujhe kuch kuch hua tha🤪

Blew directly into her eyes.

Or je kia hamare ladke ne goal. Mauke ka fayda utha lia anuj ne bhi aur tumne bhi😆I think it was mentioned somewhere ki dupatte ki bajae agar anu Directly blow karti toh, but tumne anuj se karwa dia

These cliffhangers of yours🤔...ek din i'm gonna hang you from a cliff.

Matlab show wale are more than enough to make us all patients, tum toh patience ka imtehaan mat lo😛