Bata dein..... phir kabhi - OS updated pt-3, pg-7 - Page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
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please continue this .. show pe toh bakwaas chal raha hain. reading this only, dil ko thoda sukoon hain...
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: RainFire125


areee, he will say .. wah jeee baat.. now i have something to do except stare, remove my glasses, punch my hand, roam my hand over my heart etc etc ....he will be super glad yaar

Behan tu bhej hi de. 😆 bol dena tintin (Juhi) ne bheja hai, Gaurav name sunke hi has dega🤣

I will try to update this today.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: tintin0602

Behan tu bhej hi de. 😆 bol dena tintin (Juhi) ne bheja hai, Gaurav name sunke hi has dega🤣

I will try to update this today.


OK behen... i will send to bhanva saying ki bhai lo.. better screen play than ur writers!!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank you for so much love guys, I am so overwhelmed. Here is the second part.


Devika actually caught them right in the middle of action but they decided to hide their newly sweet romantic relationship from her also. Well they knew that she will be the one of those who will be purely happy with the news but still they thought to tell for the time being.

Devika placed herself in the back seat.

Devika: Waise jo maine dekha wo kya tha?

Anu: Kya dekha tune?

Devika: Ohh please ye baat tum dodno bhi jante ho that I saw you guys making out

Anuj: Tera phir suru ho gaya, actually tu humse itni obsessed that ki tujhe hallucination ho rahe hai ab.

Devika: Acha thik hai, office me bhi boss banke sir pe baitha rahta hai, ab yaha mujhe chain se rahne de, Mai nap le leti hmm jab tak ghar nahi aata

He started the car and Devika pretended to sleep closing her eyes but her ears were super active. Actually she is happy with their closeness but she cant leave a chance to tease them.

He looked again at Anu and she knew what he wants. She offered her hand for him to hold. Even in the presence of Devika, they forget that someone is also in the car. They never left each others hand until they reached Anupama's house.

Anu woke up Devika and trio went up to apartment where kids and elders are enjoying.

Anu: Lo sabke liye Ice cream bhi aa gayi.

Anuj asked Anu to relax as he will serve it to everyone. GK smiled at Anu and went to kitchen to help him, if Anuj need some.

GK: Waise kya chal raha hai aajkal?

Anuj: GK, aap bhi na. Kuch nahi..... Waise kya itna evident hai?

GK: hmm, tabhi to bola, control Maan control, face se sab dikhta hai tere.

Anuj smiled at as he cannot hide anything from GK. He knew that GK is always with him so there is no need to hide any relation with him.

Everyone after the dinner and desert decided to leave. But Anu dont want Anuj to leave. But she cannot do anything.

Anuj and GK were in their car, suddenly Anuj remember that he is not carrying his phone. So he asked GK to wait there and he will get his phone from Anupama's house as he think that he left his phone there only.

He was about to ring the bell but before that Anu opened the door. He was surprised that how she knew that he is here. She smiled and asked him that how is he here again.

Anuj: Anu, shayad mera phone haya rah gaya hai, Did you find it?

She denied and asked him to search together. By this time it was too late and so he asked GK to leave as they are still searching the phone.

Anu: lijiye ye phone kitchen me tha, aap kitchen me aisa kya kar rahe they ki yaha phone bhul gaye?

She knew that she is teasing him and so is he knew it. He walked towards her and took the phone.

Anuj: Do you really want me to tell ki kitchen me aisa kya kar raha tha? hmm, tell me , I will be happy to do that....

Anu, stopped him placing her hand on his chest. He did realized that he is making Anu's heart race. He placed his hand on hers, he kissed her hand.

Anuj: Thank you for everything. I don't know why and how you yes for my feelings. But shayad maine kuch to acha kiya hoga ki tum....

She stopped him with her hand on his lips.

Anu: lucky to mai hmm, Kanha ji ne aapko mere liye bheja, itna pyar diya aapne, itna samman diya jo main kabhi soch bhi nahi sakti thi. But aaj abhi aapko bhejne ka man nahi hai, but mujhe pata hai ki aap mere liye abhi ghar bhi ja rahe they ki koi kuch bole na.

She was looking at floor in disappointment.

Anuj: okay boss, I will stay. Ab to thik hai na.

She didnt said a word but hugged him digging her nails on his back from above his shirt. He can feel her warm breath on his chest. It seems that she is caressing his heart with her soft hands.

Anuj: Anu, dekho meri tarah, kya huya, mai yahi hmm, I am not going anywhere now.

He guided her to sit on the couch. There is a romantic silence where both are comfortable with each other's touch.

Anuj: Ek kaam karogi?

Anu: hmm

Anuj: I dont know why, I feel headache. Mera sir daba dogi? But...

Anu: But kya?

Anuj: bol doon? bol doon?...

Anu: hmm,

Anuj: Lap me sir rakhna hai, phir...

She offered him her lap and placed his head on her lap. He closed his eyes. She started to run her fingers through his hair. These are a few minutes in the whole day that he is breathing with no worries, no worries of business, relation or anything. He dont have any regrets now, at this moment. He pulled her hand as if he is not allowing her to even think of anyone else or anything else. He is confident with her in their relation but still sometimes he fear of loosing her.

Anu: Mai aapka saath kabhi nahi chhodungi. hmm mai yahi.

She leaned towards him while his eyes were closed, minimizing the distance between them and kissed his nose. Anuj opened his eyes and sat beside her.

Anuj: Anu, nahi, please dont do this, this might make me cross the limits. I am trying so hard not to. Isliye phir kabhi....... Abhi mera ghar jana theek hai, kal miltey hai...

Anu: Thik hai, aap ghar jayiye, kal office me miltey hai

Anuj: Nahi, tum actually kal ghar hi aa jana, saath me breakfast karke office chalenge...

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I am not sure, if I have made justice to this part. But please do let me know how this is.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#35

a very sweet continuation, specially the way you have written their new closeness 🤗


continue kijiye and lets rock some office scenes also plssss

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Posted: 4 years ago
#36

Haye this so beautiful for some days we need to rely on such beautiful ffs m sure once anu falls in love we will all be hyperventilating with their scenes m sure ty ty ty so much I feel so good reading this such a beautiful alternate universe these ffs create

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Posted: 4 years ago
#37

Haha this is definitely a guilty pleasure in reading 😆 as I doubt we will ever see this in the show 🤣.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#38

Hayeee mar jawaan..this is tooo romantic😚☺☺wish this reallly happens..I know its too ambitious for a sanskaari show but phir bhi yaar..woh godh wali scene toh pakka honi chahiye😋😋

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Posted: 4 years ago
#39

Such a beautiful continuation dear. Loved it ❤❤❤❤ we need more of these beautiful ffs ❤❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

Again such a Nyccc part dear....you write different story plz cont

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