Take my breath away: ShiVi FF - Page 19

Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

Oooooohhhh, what an update, Liz I should have guessed you would leave us as flustered as Raavi at the end, since there was no mature tag in this story 🤣

Your Shiva sounds sexy shmexy ☺️I could totally imagine his deep hoarse voice seducing Raavi slowly. He is totally the man, a gorgeous specimen designed to be innocent Raavi’s downfall. I was holding my breath hoping there would be a kiss at the end but damn, I guess I will have to wait for the next chapter 🤣 Hope you intend to continue this.

You’re amazing at building tension and you give a new dimension to every story you write. It’s always fun to read what you have penned 😍 Keep tagging me, girl! Lots and lots of love ❤️

Thanks so much, Prats! 🤗

Yeah, i guess not using the Mature tag gave the plot away 🤣!

Yep, Shiva is an extremely smug, self-satisfied, sexy beast in this update (only until Raavi turns the tables on him! 😆) Still, I think he will be responsible for her sexual awakening and will lead to her unravelling (in more ways than one!)

I love building up tension and leaving my readers wanting more - it's so much more satisfying (and sexier, imo) to me as a writer too!

Thanks again for reading and this comment! ❤️And for sure, I will keep troubling tagging you when I write more! 😳

Also if anyone here would like to be tagged when I update next, please let me know and I will only tag those people!

Thanks for reading!

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Also if anyone here would like to be tagged when I update next, please let me know and I will only tag those people!

Thanks for reading!

I dont need tags but when you update can you add the date in the title too, makes it easier to know that youve updated😳

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Shiva talking about casual sex was pissing you off? I know my Shiva is quite different from canon!Shiva. Is Canon!Shiva extremely prudish that this one seems unbelievable? 😔

I thought this was the third part (or at least the third OS) 😆

Full FF-- hmm, you maybe right but I don't want to get into that. I want this to be only about Shiva and Raavi and don't intend to bring in the other characters much except when I need them for a plot point. I hope that's okay with people.

Also, can someone here help me- what does Raavi address Shiva's mom as? And what do all the brothers call Suman? And do they all refer to Gautam as Gaumbi including Raavi and Shiva?

Thanks!!

🙈Pissing me off... as in getting jealous that he was close to someone else than raavi🤣

I love the way this Shiva is...

Raavi calls Suman „Kaki“ and the sons call her „Maa“

and Gautam is Gaumbi

Originally posted by: Foxii

🙈Pissing me off... as in getting jealous that he was close to someone else than raavi🤣

I love the way this Shiva is...

Raavi calls Suman „Kaki“ and the sons call her „Maa“

and Gautam is Gaumbi

Oh right! Ha ha! Yes, we all get possessive about our OTPs, don't we? 😉

It's nice when you like them both equally, but more often than not when I ship a canon couple the show (or movie or book) messes up one so much for a dumb plot point that I begin to wonder why I began shipping them in the first place!

I guess that's why fanfictions exist! 😆\

Thanks for that info, btw! 🤗

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

OMG! Thank you so so much! You are very kind, but I'm sure I have a long way to go in terms of my writing! 😳

Does she match one or more of his lists? Hmm, what do you think?? 😉

Btw, what do I call you?

Thanks again for your words of appreciation. They mean the world! ❤️

I definitely think he does.. Otherwise why would he be so suggestive... He wants a little something too from her 😂😂😂 and i can't wait to see how long this torture goes on for before one of them snaps.

You're brilliant at it and you can only get better... My fav quote is practice makes progress.. And i hope you practice lots on here 😉😉

I'm Min. 😊😊 Awaiting the next one eagerly

🥰😍Wow…your latest update was intoxicatingly hot🔥….you’ve done a amazing job😳….so does this mean your next update will Shiva will be tortured by Raavi?

Originally posted by: Miss.M

I definitely think he does.. Otherwise why would he be so suggestive... He wants a little something too from her 😂😂😂 and i can't wait to see how long this torture goes on for before one of them snaps.

You're brilliant at it and you can only get better... My fav quote is practice makes progress.. And i hope you practice lots on here 😉😉

I'm Min. 😊😊 Awaiting the next one eagerly

Practice indeed makes perfect and I’m thankful to you all for letting me practice here! 😳

This whole torture thing is taking on a new meaning now! 😆
Hi Min. Nice to meet you!

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

🥰😍Wow…your latest update was intoxicatingly hot🔥….you’ve done a amazing job😳….so does this mean your next update will Shiva will be tortured by Raavi?

This comment made me laugh.

Shiva tortured by Raavi. Hmm..I don’t know. I have something in mind for the next one. Perhaps they will just torture each other! 😆 Who’s keeping score? 😈

Omg I loved reading this as usual

So glad you continued...will there be another part?! Because I want more torture muahaha 🤣

I felt Raavi's frustration ngl - I was just reading words and felt all hot and bothered, damn you, Shiva ☺️

Shiva's wishlist was very intriguing, I'm so invested ❤️

Would love to read more on this if you choose to continue, if not, do write more on ShiVi in general! I adore your writing!🤗

Thank you for the tag ❤️