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This os starts when virat got jealous of amey and ended up confessing his Jealousy and hidden love. This is my first write up every , even if you don't like it just tolerate it

YOU ARE MINE - A SAIRAT OS .

SAI: Hi amay . It's sai , ap mile the aaj mujhse Shivani bua ke sath and ap mujhe kafi intresting lage . You are so handsome , I couldn't take my eyes off you in the cafe.

(Virat enters the room in the same way as shown and sai doesn't notice him standing just behind

Amay: Hi sai ! Ye jan kar kafi acha laga ki apke jaisi khoobsurat ladki mujhe handsome keh rahi hain . Ab jab main handsome lag hi gaya hun to kyu na kahin bahar mila jaye? Kahin apke husband bura na man jaye


Sai: yes ! Why not wo kyu bura manenge . Humari shadi sirf name ki hain wo to mujhe theek se dekhte bhi nai he is just my guardian.


Amay: oh okay tab to ye bohot achi baat hain . Apke husband kafi lucky hain apke jaise Khoobsurat ladki unki wife hai . Aaj kal kaha milti hain itni khoobsurat ladkiyaaan.


Sai smiles a little , though a fake one but virat misunderstands it and starts getting jealous. He grabs sai's hand and makes her face him. He has turned red in anger and insecurity .



Virat: kisse baat kar rhi ho sai ? Us amey se ? Aur itni khush kis bat ko lekar ho rahi ho ? Zarurat kya hai us ladke se baat karne ki ?


Sai: main bas shivani bua ki madad kar rahi hoon virat sir . Gharwalon se umeed to hai nahin , aur bua ko akele main chodungi nai. Ginne chune log hain yha jinhone ne mujhe apnaya hai unka sath nahi chodungi.


Virat: main sath chorne ki baat nahi bol raha hun sai magar us amey se baat karne ki zarurat nahi hain . Aur ye ye TPS kya h ? Aur tum usse mana nai kar sakti ye bulane se ?


Sai : virat sir ap ko hua kya h? Main konsa bhag rahi uske sath , tps usne bulaya to kya ho gaya ? Konsa main sach me flirt kar rahin . Aise bhi ladke ause hi flirt karte. Please relax . It's very normal. Ap over react kar rahe.

Sai's reply made him a lil more insecure. He took it the wrong way and thought that she not having any issue being called tps .he also thought that what uf guys flirt with her in college and that mere thought made him even more angry .


Meanwhile , pakhi( khula sand) entered as usual to know what was going on between shivani bua , sai and virat to inform kaku


Virat: normal? Relax ? Aise hi flirt? Ky bol rahi ho khud ke kanon me ja bhi raha hai ? Tum aise kaise keh sakti ho sai ? Dimag ghum gaya hai? Uski himmat kaise hui tumse Tps aur khoobsurat bolne ki . Aur mujhe laga tum usse rokogi lekin nahin tumhe to ulta acha lag raha hai.


Sai : aise baaat nahin hai virat sir ye sirf ek natak hai . Ap aise kyu react kar rahe jaise ap mere lover ho aur apko insecurity ho rahi


Virat: s.ss.ssai dekho baaat mat badlo

Meanwhile khula sandh(ks) heard everything and barged in with her constipated expression.


Ks: virrrrraaathhh , tum aur ummed bhi kya kar sakte ho is ladki se ? Ab isse pati ka pyar to milega nai to jo bhi flirt karta usse bhaw de deti aur ab amey jasa handsome ldka isse bhaw de raha to isse kyu koi problems hogi ? Aur aisi immature ladki se ummed kya ki ja sakti hai?


Virat was slowly loosing his patience . First, amey flirting with sai and now his favourite pakhi commenting on her wife and her last lines made him even more insecure.

Insecurity+ anger+ disgust for pakhi made him dumb and he unintentionally spoke something which triggered sai the wrong way.

Meanwhile , sai clenched her fists as if trying to suppress her anger. Shivani bua was just watching the scene unfold.


Virat: sai maine bola na tumhe ki ye galat hai dekho log batein bana rahe tum kyu milna chahti usse ? Tumhein kyu baat karni usse ? Usko tps bolne par rok kyu nai . Bhulo mat tum meri biwi ho .

Mujhe to lagta pakhi sahi keh rahi ki tumhe acha lag rha na wo ? Tum ho hi ek immature aur bewakoof ladki. MERI PATNI HOKAR USSE BAAT KAR RAHI HO

Ks was as usually looking at the scene and smirking.

Sai noticed her reaction and these words from virat lost her cool and screamed .


Sai : BASSSSSS ! ENOUGH! VIRAT SIR . Tabse kya e hi gna gaye ja rahe tps bolne se kyu ni roka. Ye wo ye wo . Mujhe koi shauq nahi kissi se ye sab sunne ka . Main bas shivani bua ku madad kar rahi hun unke character par ye quesion jo laga wo hatane ke liye . Aur ap hai ki alag sur gaye ja rahe hain . Agar usne tps bol bhi diya to kya hua ? It's just flirting which means nothing.and apne kya bola immature and bewakoof

Main to yaha jhooti flirting kar rahi hun aur apki ye best friend jo kafi mature hai achi hai sundar hai wo jo karti? Kabhi bhi kamre me ghus jana apko tadte( ghurte) rehna aur ab jungli janwaro jaise room me ghus jana ? Ye sab me immaturity nai dikhti inki? Apke according ye sab maturity hai ? Wah mr virat chavan.


Ks went numb . Before she could think of anything other than her patent word sai spoke again making virat clench hat fist in anger.


Sai : aur agar wo flirt kr bhi raha hai to problem kya hai ? It's a deal you remember? Main kissi se baat karun flirt karun usse apko kya ? Apki pyari cheez hai na apke pass maine to kabhi nai kiya aisa natak . Usne mujhe tps bola kyuki uski mai sundar lagi . To main kya karunnn. Kabse keh rahi this is a trap . A freaking trap . Bt ni ap to aise behave kar rahe jaise hum janmon ke sathi hain. Patni ?konsi patni? Mana h kabhi patni? Best friend kpar essay sunane lagte hain ap bas mujhe aur isliye yaad dila rahi main apko 5 years, 5 years hai is deal ki expiry date. Aur jaise apke mature friend ki aadat h na mujhe to lagta expir date jaldi aa jaegi . Aur rahi baat ladkon ki to , haa karte h ladke flirting humari age me common h .apne ni ki kya? Ki hi thi na tab ye bin bulaye mehmaan aaaj tak apke ass pass ghumte rehti ?


Virat was looking at sai shocked . He didn't know how to react and ks was giving her constipated looks .


Virat : BASS SAI BASSS . BOHOT HO GAYA . KABSE BOLE JA RAHI HO TUM . AUR KUCH BHI BOLE JA RHI HO . KUCH BOL NI RAHA ISKE YE MATALAB NI KI TUM KUCH BHI BOLO. AUR US AMEY SE MERA COMPARISON.? CHII ? US CHOMU AUR MERI KOI COMPARISON NI .


SAI : Kuch bhi nahi bol rahi hun ekdum sach bol rahi ho aur ye kya pati pati laga rakha h . Aajse 5 saal baad jab main kissi aur ke sath move on karungi tab hi yahi karenge ap ? Ap apni aur apni mature best friend ke sath sapne dekhiye ek hone ke.aur wo chomu ni h ( sai didn't know why she said this but she some how was angry because virat agreed with pakhi)


Virat: these words made virat loose his cool the fear of losing sai and she moving on with any other guy made him very frustrated. He did no care about Shivani bya being there or her best friend . He grabbed sai's hand and took her to their room and as soon as he entered he slammed the door really hard .


Sai: ye kya kar rahe hain ap ?

Virat : main kya kar raha hun? Abhi room me tumne kya bola ? Tum move on krogi wo bhi kissi aur ke sath ? Aur amey aur meri comparison ? Aur kya bola tumne ki ye sab flirting common hai ? To kya college me ladke flirt karte tumse ? Tmhe kaise pata ye common h ?


Sai: ji haa common hai. Aur apko ye sab bataon ka farq kyu pad raha . Sau bar bola fir bhi ni sun rahe apko to pakhi didi ki baat sach lagi na to mniye usse sach . Haa acha laga mujhe amey ka flirt karna aur karte mujhse college me ladke flirt .


( She tried getting away but his grip started getting firmer )

That was it for virat. He grabbed her waist and slammed his lips on her's. The kiss started heating up from virat's side. It was his insecurity which was building up the passion. He bit her lower lips.Sai could not match up his pace but she did not stop him. She couldn't deny it. She was still confused about how to react . This feeling was new to her . It made her heart flutterr.

After few moments , virat broke the kiss but he did not leave her . He was breathing heavily . And finally after th awkward silence virat finally spoke.


Virat : sai main nai janta maine ye kyun kiya but main bas itna janta ho ki tumhe khone ka dar bohot zada darwana hain. Tum jab amey se bat kar rahi yo mujhe bohot bura laga . Aisa laga jaise tumse baat karne ka haq sirf mera . Usne jab tumhe tps bola to aisa laga ki sari goliyan uske seene me utar dun . Main tumse pasand karne laga hoon sai aur ye baat mujhe abhi realise hui tum bas meri ho sai bas meri. Yumse flirt sirf main kar sakta hun.


Sai wen speechless hearing him . She did not know how to respond. The confession , the kiss , her confused heart made her emotional . She couldn't figure out what did she want ? She wasn't sure if this was the reality.. she got images of ks's constipated expression which made her stop confessing the tiny bits if emotion she felt. Virat somehow gauged her turmoil and said


Sai agar ateet ko aaj main zada ehmiyat dogi na to kabhi age nai badh paogi.pakhi meri duniya ki sabse badi bhool thi aur main use bhulana chahta hun. Ak pakhi ne jo kaha wo sahi nai tha mujhe roka chaiiye tha but main kya karta Jealous tha main . Mujhe kuch samjh ni aa raha tha . Trust me sai , I don't when bit I started falling for you. Ye pyar kitna gehra hai ye waqt bataega but itna jaa gaya hoon ki tumse dur hona mere liye bohot darwana sapna hoga. Tum ab zimmedaari nai zindagi ban gyai ho . Aur iska ehsaas mujhe aaj ho gaya



Sai felt happy and nervous at the same time she couldn't handle it anymore and hugged virat and said I don't know if it's Love but we have a connection virat sir . Virat too reciprocated the hug and somehow felt relived listening to sai's words. . But virat being the jalkukda ge as asked sai


"Kya sach me college me ladke flirt karte? Tum kal se please sindoor laga kar jana . Aur mangalsutra bhi aise pehnna jaise sabko dikhe . Aise tum aise ladkon se bache hui rahogi ."

Sai couldn't control her laughter and giggling said , " virat sir sindoor to ap laga lo warna pakhi didi se ap ko koi nai bacha payega".

Virat gave her a shocked look he mock glared her .he then spoke " sai did you really like his flirting? Tumhe sach me problem nai ? "( Virat was very restless just by thinking about sai being interested in some one else.(

Sai then confessed : virat sir I didn't like amey calling me tps neither I like any one who flirts with me . It was just a trap. I had to do it . There is no one for Shivani bua .and trust me even you can't help her completely because the moment you support her everyone will lash at you . And you being you will get emotional.sab kuch seedhi ungli se nai hota kabhi kabhi ghee ungli tedhi bhi karni padti hain. Don't worry virat sir , I know my limits and the sanctity of marriage . You are my husband and will always be .❤️


Shivani bua who came to check on them whether sai was fine when virat dragged sai to their room ,heard the entire conversation.she happily went to ashvini's room to inform her about the recent kaand .

Ks who followed shivani bua thinking this will break sai and virat went in total shock after being called as a "bhool" . She ran shedding her crocodiles tears and tripped off in front of her breaking her front tooth. (The smirk will no longer be seen)


Meanwhile ,

Ashvini prayed to god to keep their children together where as sai and virat embarked on their new journey ❤️






Thank you!

Archisha kashyap.

This is my first ever writing. Please ignore any mistake . I always loved reading os and giving ideaa to people to write some os . I don't know why but felt like writing sometimes today .


I love Jealous virat because I want him to feel what sai goes through when he stands with pakhi and supports her bakwas I also love Jealous viru because that shows he is scared to let sai go and also he should realise how it feels to have a third person hitting on your partner.



This is an amateur writing.the dialogues are my own so please forgive if it's not up to the mark. I am no where as compared to the talented writers present here

Suggestion are always welcomed here ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Superb OS... liked it....

Jealous Viru is always treat to watch or read....

He too much possessive about Sai and can't tolerate anyone near her....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Nice one... Finally you wrote some angst related to Amey track.. jealous Veeru is the star of the series...😎

Loved it...🥰

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Yaaaaa ! Jealous viru is awesome. I love sai but 😋.

Thank youuuuuuu🥰🥰🥰

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank you so much❤️❤️❤️ . Exactly , cannot tolerate anyone near sai but won't ask pakhi to leave😑

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Khula sandh I like didi's new name🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Archishakashyap


Meanwhile , pakhi( khula sand) entered as usual to know what was going on between shivani bua , sai and virat to inform kaku


This is my most favourite line in the whole story.😆😆 It feels so good to read such light writings. Beautifully done. Do write more stories ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hahahahaha thank youuuu ! The way she walks and barges in , she resembles a sandh.🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank youuuuu sooo much ! Khula sandh is apt for her.

Suggest me some plots I will surely write it ❤️. This was my first os so I was kinda nervous.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It was so amazing

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and didi's name "Khula Sandh" was just🤣🤣🤣

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